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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction (Directory poll question)

    Quote Originally Posted by Layra
    Yay! More peoples in this thread. And more great fanfiction!

    Also, because recontextualizing lines is fun:

    I... you...

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction (Directory poll question)

    Chapter Four!


    Chapter Five

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction (Directory poll question)

    Tenebrais: I start with you because unfortunately, you have not been getting the praise you undoubtedly deserve. Vague platitudes such as "this is really good" or "I like it very much" are not my style, so please excuse me if I express myself in the statement: please, for the love of God, continue your work of art.

    Layra: That's hot.

    Soniku64: I like the vignettes, even if they're relatively safe explorations (I suppose they wouldn't be vignettes if you expanded upon a new direction for the wanderers based on their already known characteristics, though).

    GenaLeah: If you want a suggestion, do a time-change fic with travel in two or three dimensions of time instead of travel in one. It'll be SO COOL.

    Anyway, there are two new pieces of fiction here because both are short. Both are PostYou, which is what I have come to call the Wayward Vagabond's notes in the margin of whatever books he chooses to write in.

    Foodlust:



    Preparations:


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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction (Directory poll question)

    Quote Originally Posted by Qukeza
    "personal goods"

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction (Directory poll question)

    Episode Five: The Empire Strikes Back

    Part 6

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Quote Originally Posted by Tenebrais
    I later found out that Dave hadn't lost; he'd resigned specifically to come up and comfort me. He's annoying, but when he gets his act together, he can be a real gentleman.
    D'AWWWW

    Great writing, by the way. You have a good grasp of everyone's personalities.
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    AW man I want to play that game.

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    Part six is done! It seems fitting that I write this nighttime scene at 2AM.



    chapter 7

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    Great work again, Tenebrais!

    I figured I would pollute this thread with my horrid drivel:
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    Drivel? That was awesome!
    [22:22:11] <TwoPrimes> in my eyes, scum usually votes first

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    So... The Tale of twinArmageddons

    Preliminary notes: 1) I don't use trolling-language here, as that would make it less readable, 2) see my earlier post in this thread if you want the origins of this post


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    Tenebrais: Awesome yet again. I am a huge fan of schadenfreude, so the few moments that provide it are the honey that carries the rest of the lovey-feelgoody medicine down.

    resdaMalos: Cool story, bro. Ignoring the usual intent of that statement, there's not much specific to say because the story is solid and consistent. Good job.

    orngjce223: I think the first two sections could use a little fleshing out in order to illustrate the connection between the twins, thus leading to a less abrupt matter-of-fact reaction when one dies. Also, the ending would benefit a large amount if START SPOILERS "Do[ing] it for Natasha" SPOILERS END meant something to the reader due to elaboration and less matter-of-fact prose. All that said, don't go too overboard.

    HAHA GULLIBLE CHAPTER NO: IT MAKES SENSE IN GERMAN


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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Yay Bro. Why is this an invalid form?

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    Tenebrais: I really like your Dave. He's actually cool, instead of just trying to be. Although what was he doing with John...?

    resdaMalos: Poor Slick. Poor sweet Slick.

    orngjce223: That actually would explain a lot. But as Qukeza said, it goes a bit too fast to create a connection to the twins.

    Qukeza: As always, Bro is slightly creepy. And Dave is good at cussing.





    I'm on a bit of a shipping spree at the moment.

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Quote Originally Posted by Layra




    I'm on a bit of a shipping spree at the moment.
    Oh God, I think I love you. Rose/Dave is my favourite pairing, and you do it so awesomely. Both of those were very cute. And in the second one...oh, Jade.

    'Tangle buddies' is the best euphemism ever.
    Conquest: Future-fic. Four sweeps after Sgurb, the trolls have been recruited into various facets of the Alternian imperial army. Assassination attempts, black romance, and political unheavals. Captain Vantas's day just keeps getting worse. (In Progress.)

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

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    resdaMalos: Poor Slick. Poor sweet Slick.
    Glad you enjoyed it.

    Quote Originally Posted by Layra
    ... John's eyes went wide and the blood drained from his face. He must have figured it out.
    What is being implied here? I think it's gone over my head.

    Great little short stories BTW... I now officially ship Dave/Rose.
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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Quote Originally Posted by Layra
    Tenebrais: I really like your Dave. He's actually cool, instead of just trying to be. Although what was he doing with John...?
    They were trying to find the writing journals Rose had so carefully hidden.

    Also having the two young boys wandering off together in the night means that I've implied shipping every pairing now.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tenebrais
    Also having the two young boys wandering off together in the night means that I've implied shipping every pairing now.
    I'd noticed that! I'd wondered if it was intentional.
    Conquest: Future-fic. Four sweeps after Sgurb, the trolls have been recruited into various facets of the Alternian imperial army. Assassination attempts, black romance, and political unheavals. Captain Vantas's day just keeps getting worse. (In Progress.)

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    I knew, intellectually, that they were looking for the journals, but after too much time spent lurking the RomArt thread, well, let's say that I read the implications more than the story itself.

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Haha. Well, all shipping implications are intentional.


    Also, I just discovered my first chapter has 413 words. Wow.

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Quote Originally Posted by Layra




    I'm on a bit of a shipping spree at the moment.

    I LAUGHED

    SO HARD

    mostly at the Squiddles one

    tangle buddies




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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    This is the first time I've written fiction since high school creative writing assignments, I hope it's okay! I call it "Drawing Dead Liner Notes". I wanted to make it all gritty but then it started being funny so the end result is more Carl Hiaasen than Dashiell Hammett.


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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Chapter whatever-the-fuck-this-is! Seven. I don't know.



    Chapter 8

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Quote Originally Posted by zil
    This is the first time I've written fiction since high school creative writing assignments, I hope it's okay! I call it "Drawing Dead Liner Notes". I wanted to make it all gritty but then it started being funny so the end result is more Carl Hiaasen than Dashiell Hammett.

    :3

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