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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

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    Catalyst Chapter 4
    I love everything about this. Just-- everything. So very much.
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    I would say reclusiveAmateur inspired me, but I think that would give a wildly false idea of the following fic's quality. So, yeah, have some unnecessarily genre-savvy Rose and(/?) Dave:

    Are you kidding me?! This is wonderful! Note-perfect and so incredibly sweet. God, I adore this, and if I played the slightest part in inspiring it I can consider my time well spent.

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    Those last two Dave/Rose fics? The birthday timetable pesterlog and the end of the game?

    Lovely, just lovely.
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    Quote Originally Posted by nextian
    I would say reclusiveAmateur inspired me, but I think that would give a wildly false idea of the following fic's quality. So, yeah, have some unnecessarily genre-savvy Rose and(/?) Dave:

    This is very good. They have a lot of entertaining chemistry, but you can also feel some of the massive weight they have on their shoulders.

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

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    Quote Originally Posted by nextian
    I would say reclusiveAmateur inspired me, but I think that would give a wildly false idea of the following fic's quality. So, yeah, have some unnecessarily genre-savvy Rose and(/?) Dave:

    This is very good. They have a lot of entertaining chemistry, but you can also feel some of the massive weight they have on their shoulders.
    Better than National Treasure?!

    No, it was good. Although Rose seemed slightly uncharacteristically chatty.
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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Aww, thanks everyone! @elrunethe2nd, you're right about Rose. I am just a sucker for their sarcasm!

    Tune in next time for NATIONAL TREASURE 2: BOOK OF AWKWARD TEENAGE FLIRTING

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    So, chapter two of my incredibly poorly-written fan-fiction.
    Chapter 1: The Darkness Within


    >.>; I'll link to Chapter 1 later. My nanna's here and I want to say 'hi' :3
    EDIT: P.S. I think it feels a little cliche towards the end there D:
    EDIT2: Updated the colours. Should be less of an eyesore and more accurate now. :V
    Also, added link to chapter 1.

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    What are you talking about? I'm loving your story a lot! The only thing that bothers me is conversations being in pesterlog/spritelog colors. It just gets hard on the eyes, sometimes. But other than that, amazing work!




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    HOLY CRAP I AM SO FAR BEHIND. I pop out for awhile and come back to such a ridiculous backlog. I love it.

    Working backwards!:



    Did I miss any? I hope I didn't miss any.

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Quote Originally Posted by sarasvati
    I thought the first installment ended it on the proper poignant note (I am a sucker for tragedy), but I won't complain about getting more!
    Well, don't count your blessings just yet. It'll only be going downhill from here. Steeply downhill.
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    oh fuck nightmare fuel.

    I love nightmare fuel. I drink it for energy.

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    House Party, chapter 14! Read it before it gets cold.



    I'm trying to draw this to a close so I can get into Twelve Trolls. I foresee one, maybe two more chapters of this left.

    Chapter 15

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    Tenebrais never fails to deliver excellent stories.

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Okay, so I'm not a writer. I'm just really bored. I just did this quick thing. Don't expect much from it.

    Prologue

    Alandoned: Chapter One
    Ch.2
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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Catalyst!

    Catalyst Chapter 4 (four real, this time )


    @Aerok: there is no room for shame on this forum!
    Fame, sure.
    Glory
    Perfection
    LITERATURE

    no shame, though.

    (I do have a recommendation: I think third-person narrative would work better for what you're trying to do. I realize it came from a forum adventure, but word repetition can become a problem in longer narratives. Using second-person, the only word available for referring to the protagonist is "you", while in third-person you can refer to him by first name, last name, pronouns like "he", etc. It keeps the vocabulary from getting stale.)
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    I'm liking all this new stuff. Why are you guys all so awesome?


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    Little bit of supplimentary text to those awesome highway pictures in the fan art thread, which are totally based on Yugioh 5D's.


    Pardon the lack of typing quirks.
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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Okay, so I wrote a second one. Hopefully it wont be as long. @Valter:Thanks, I used that!

    Ch. 1

    Alandoned: Chapter 2
    Ch.3
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    I've decided to start turning certain panels into text, mostly because I feel like it. The first one is WQ giving her mailbox crown to PM. Sorry if it's a little repetitive; I don't like using the exiles' abbreviations in fanfiction. I'll probably expand on it later.


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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Alright, this is my first try at a fanfic, and there are some things you should know:

    I'm filling in a lot of stuff here.
    This is grandpa Harley and John's grandfather talking, who may or may not be the same person in HS.
    This is obviously not based on any canonical proof Although if Andrew actually picks this up and rolls with it I'd probably die of amazement.
    The son we are talking about here is John's Dad.
    Harley's name is probably not Haston.
    edit: I am also assuming that HS takes place in the future, and that this conversation is around our own time.

    Heartstuck prologue, part 1:

    *RING RING RING RING*

    "Hello? Egbert residence."

    "Yes, Egbert? This is Haston Harley. I was wondering if you had a couple minutes."

    "Absolutely, my son's just gone to bed. Is this about the tests?"

    "Well, yes, but there's something else as well. As for the Captchalogue system, things are going smoothly. Your son was the
    first person to pull things back out of the medium which, hehe, is a pretty important part of the process."

    "Is this stuff really going to catch on?"

    "Well, there are still limitations, but we're going to sell captcha cards individually, give companies licenses to create their own
    methods of retrieval, among other things. It's a big market, never having to carry anything! Just imagine it, Egbert. Pockets, bags, drawers, closets. All are going to be made obsolete one day."

    "I'm sure my grandkids are going to appreciate what you're doing. It's late, what do you need?"

    "We'd like to have your son participate in our next project. A game."

    "My son is only ten years old, he doesn't need to be involved in a top secret company's gaming endeavors."

    "You know it's always bigger than that. We do important things here, Egbert. This might be the biggest. We're talking about
    the survival of the human race here."

    "...

    I understand. When does it start?"

    "April Thirteenth."

    End part one.

    If you think it's worth continuing, let me know.
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    Here's the third one. I can't stop doing these. It's been one a day since Sunday. What the hell, me, don't you have more important stuff to be doing?

    Ch. 1
    Ch. 2

    Alandoned: Chapter 3
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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Oh, look, another one. How surprising. Also, not sure if it's cool to double-post, even if I have a new chapter, and no-one has posted since yesterday. If it shouldn't be done, just let me know, and I won't do it again.

    Ch.1-3, links in previous post

    Alandoned: Chapter 4
    Ch.5
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    Pretty nice stuff so far. Also, I'm pretty sure double-posting doesn't count as long as it's three hours past the first post. Or something like that, it was like that on a different forum, so...*shrug*

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    My favorite so far is the troll log.

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    Ch.1-4 links 3 posts ago

    Alandoned: Chapter 5
    Ch.6
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