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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

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    Part of me really wanted Equius to attack John on sight, and have John effortlessly push him down. Cue the realization that everything and everyone on Alternia is just really, really fragile.
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    Karkat, to his credit, didn't wince at the feeling of his shoulder trying to pop out of its' socket. John didn't seem to be even slightly bothered by the pressure.
    I mean damn, I thought it wasn't -that- obviously pointed out.
    (I figure Equius is still pretty dang strong, but humans aren't so much strong as they are more resilient. He could, say, hold his own arm-wrestling Equius for a bit, but would ultimately lose, just without the dismemberment that would occur with one of the other trolls.)
    Figured I'd go ahead and point out where I hinted it so next chapter didn't come along and half the fora went 'HEY HE STOLE SUSHI'S IDEA LET'S LYNCH HIM!'. Not that that would happen, of course. I hope?
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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    I just thought that John got strong enough to withstand Equius because he uses FREAKING HAMMERS as his weapon.

    But your explanation works too
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    oh uh dang man sorry for stepping on your reveal @_@ i didnt mean to go and do a thing like that

    :bluh:

    this should make for some downright awesome reactions to john from equius though

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Quote Originally Posted by Metaflare View Post
    I just thought that John got strong enough to withstand Equius because he uses FREAKING HAMMERS as his weapon.

    But your explanation works too
    Er, well, yeah. Hence the fact that he could hold his own arm-wrestling.

    I kinda see John as being physically stronger than Dave due to all the hammer-swinging madness, but nowhere near as fast.
    To go with the Ragnarok Online way of seeing things: John would be a Paladin (high defense, decent attack), Dave would be a Knight with Two-Hand Sword build (High attack speed when using his skills, thus resulting in a higher overall DPS), Rose would be a Wizard (Relatively self-explanatory, nukes anything coming her way before it can get to her) and Jade would be a Gunslinger (Firepower out the wazoo, decent rate of attack, but not built to take hits).
    Imm-hoh, anyway.
    oh uh dang man sorry for stepping on your reveal @_@ i didnt mean to go and do a thing like that
    S'all good. I was kinda hamming. (I do that a lot.) When I wrote that part I was looking at it like 'Yup, everyone's gonna call me out on that. I might as well just have John suplex him across the room or something.'

    One of my early ideas was for John to flip the fuck out and throw the Fear No Anvil at Equius, who auto-parries it with his face and winds up with his head stuck in the opposite wall. Seemed a little too over-the-top, though.

    Blar. I should probably just stop explainin' shit and let people come to it normally and be all 'Yup, awesome, innit?' about it.
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    I was actually wondering about that bit, too, but for some reason decided not to comment on it. I just assumed that it was my weird little obsession with Equius turning out to not be as strong as the narrative would like us to believe coming to the forefront again...

    Half my view of the comic has been colored by my assumption that the whole thing is being told by an unreliable...if not out and out dishonest...narrator. Like that whole thing with Vriska and her terrible luck, when it seems fairly obvious that at least half of her misfortunes are self-imposed. That sort of thing.
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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

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    I was actually wondering about that bit, too, but for some reason decided not to comment on it. I just assumed that it was my weird little obsession with Equius turning out to not be as strong as the narrative would like us to believe coming to the forefront again...

    Half my view of the comic has been colored by my assumption that the whole thing is being told by an unreliable...if not out and out dishonest...narrator. Like that whole thing with Vriska and her terrible luck, when it seems fairly obvious that at least half of her misfortunes are self-imposed. That sort of thing.
    I swear, it's like half of us are all Past-Future-Past repliscimilies or something.

    Either that or I'm some sort of freaking psychic and can't seem to figure out how to get my powers to work so I can cheat at pokersave mankind. Yeah. *shifty-eyes*

    For what it's worth:
    Storming through the corridors, he angrily brushed Gamzee aside ("What the fuck's up, my motherfuck-AGH!"*thunk*) and took a shortcut through the computer room. He was a troll on a mission, and boy was he pissed. Ducking one of Tavros' horns as the Taurus came around a corner (trailed by a rather frazzled-looking Vriska, although Karkat wouldn't register that thought until later) he swung into one of the lesser-used hallways of the lab.
    was the original version of that segment. Figured I'd do a followup to 'Losing Control' with a slightly happier ending, just for the sake of a happier ending. Also so I could take a stab at writing Tavros when he's not being all deep an' creepy-serious. Still might, I dunno.

    As for Equius auto-parrying the hammer with his face, it woulda gone something like this:
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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

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    Although this is absolutely hilarious, I agree that the current version fits better. After all, I don't think John is instictively hammer-crazy.
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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Exactly.

    For the sake of convention, we'll call those little bits 'deleted scenes'.

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    VagabondRaiser! I have a question.
    Will you be continuing "the path was closed?"
    Just curious.

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    VagabondRaiser! I have a question.
    Will you be continuing "the path was closed?"
    Just curious.
    ...color me confused. I don't remember writing anything by that title.

    Refresh my memory? As often as I've left stories unfinished in the past, I'd hate for it to be simply because I forgot it existed.

    Edit: Aha! You're thinking of Sarasvati's story, actually. I didn't write that, lordie no. I could hope to be that good. (Plus I've never played any of the Persona games.)

    Man, what's up with everyone mistaking other more awesome works for my own?
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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Quote Originally Posted by VagabondRaiser View Post
    ...color me confused. I don't remember writing anything by that title.

    Refresh my memory? As often as I've left stories unfinished in the past, I'd hate for it to be simply because I forgot it existed.

    Edit: Aha! You're thinking of Sarasvati's story, actually. I didn't write that, lordie no. I could hope to be that good. (Plus I've never played any of the Persona games.)

    Man, what's up with everyone mistaking other more awesome works for my own?
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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    haha, no need to apologize!

    Yes, I've got the next chapter in the works, it'll have like a plot and characters and everything. I'm not sure how long the whole thing will be but it kind of went out of control so...long. Long.

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    haha, no need to apologize!

    Yes, I've got the next chapter in the works, it'll have like a plot and characters and everything. I'm not sure how long the whole thing will be but it kind of went out of control so...long. Long.
    Long is good! Long means we get to read more of your awesome writing.

    Speaking of writing, stay t00ned, folks! The next chapter of Impermanence is coming up soon: 'Noirallegiance'. (I'll give you three guesses as to what AU they're in this time, and the first two don't count.)
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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Quote Originally Posted by sarasvati View Post
    haha, no need to apologize!

    Yes, I've got the next chapter in the works, it'll have like a plot and characters and everything. I'm not sure how long the whole thing will be but it kind of went out of control so...long. Long.
    I like it long!

    I mean chapters. Long chapters.

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    Long to read, hard to write, stuff like this keeps us up at night!
    Faaaaaaaan-FICTIOOOOOOOON~!
    *jazzhands*

    ...I'll sit down now.
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    Quote Originally Posted by VagabondRaiser View Post
    Long to read, hard to write, stuff like this keeps us up at night!
    Faaaaaaaan-FICTIOOOOOOOON~!
    *jazzhands*

    ...I'll sit down now.
    Stand back up, I demand an encore!!

    Also, so true~

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    Quote Originally Posted by Roflstilzken View Post
    Stand back up, I demand an encore!!

    Also, so true~
    Encore?

    OK then.

    The Impermanence of Wishes: What Could Have Been
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    This one got overly description-y on me.

    Writing out Jade's dialogue was a pain, if only because I kept having to go back and re-re-re-fix some of it (remembering what words would end with 'a' and what ones end with 'ah', for instance-- if it ends with an R, it's an 'ah', but if it's an 'ooh' sounding word, it's just an 'a', etc)

    Stay tuned for Part Two, coming soon to a Fanfiction Thread near you! (And expect some actual factual action this time as I try my hand at an honest-to-goodness car chase scene!)

    (Funfact: This fic was written while listening to 'Three in the Morning' from Drawing Dead on perma-repeat.)
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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Nice.

    The great FICTION SPIRITS demand MOAR.
    Fanfics (There's a bunch):

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Quote Originally Posted by VagabondRaiser View Post
    Encore?

    OK then.

    The Impermanence of Wishes: What Could Have Been
    Chapter 6:
    Noirallegiance



    This one got overly description-y on me.

    Writing out Jade's dialogue was a pain, if only because I kept having to go back and re-re-re-fix some of it (remembering what words would end with 'a' and what ones end with 'ah', for instance-- if it ends with an R, it's an 'ah', but if it's an 'ooh' sounding word, it's just an 'a', etc)

    Stay tuned for Part Two, coming soon to a Fanfiction Thread near you! (And expect some actual factual action this time as I try my hand at an honest-to-goodness car chase scene!)

    (Funfact: This fic was written while listening to 'Three in the Morning' from Drawing Dead on perma-repeat.)

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Oh man Jade/Dave=Bonny/Clyde (I think)? Wooooo!
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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    HouseBand, Part Two

    Hey, I'm really on the ball with this.



    Next Chapter: SECONDS IN THE FUTURE, BUT NOT MANY...
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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Badabam!

    The Impermanence of Wishes:
    Noirallegience, Part 2


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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    So now, the next person to post will have three awesome stories to review!

    Well, one awesome one and two that are mine, anyway.

    HouseBand, Part 3

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Nice, Graven_Image. One thing that bothers me is your use of the word "prosaic", which generally means (of words) matter-of-fact, pragmatic, plain: the opposite of poetic. So pretty much the last word to describe Rose's writing. Assuming it is Rose's FAQ, anyway.

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