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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Quote Originally Posted by I-gor
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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Zeke and Toaster, those were great.

    This was made for the Romart thread but I think it fits here too.

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    The first person who can guess what this came from gets a prize.

    Edit: I can't consider this a fanfic, but where else would I put it?

    Open Voicelog



    EDIT: Answer: Dinosaur Comics.

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Quote Originally Posted by NachoGrande96
    The first person who can guess what this came from gets a prize.

    Open Voicelog

    Easy. Dinosaur Comics. Specifically, comic 1656.

    It was all over the site when it came out. Ryan North had forgotten about the warning about stairs.



    Good work by the way.

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    I'm pretty sure that copying someone else's work word-for-word, reformatting it, and attributing it to different characters does not constitute fanfic.

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Quote Originally Posted by Ember
    I'm pretty sure that copying someone else's work word-for-word, reformatting it, and attributing it to different characters does not constitute fanfic.
    It doesn't really, but where would you suggest he put it?

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Quote Originally Posted by Ember
    I'm pretty sure that copying someone else's work word-for-word, reformatting it, and attributing it to different characters does not constitute fanfic.
    Well, we've had Dino comics with SB&HJ dialogue in the Fan-Art thread before, and it's essentially the same thing (but in reverse).

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Uh, I was told it should be okay to post this here as well as the romart thread? If not, I'll delete the post. There's art to go with it as well, but you'll have to check the romart thread if you want to see it. :B


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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    OKAY now I gotta catch up on commenting.

    Quote Originally Posted by Shadow of the Lotus
    CG and John first meet.

    Well, I guess we know it isn't quite like this now, but it's still an interesting take on the situation.

    Quote Originally Posted by Zeke
    I liked this. We haven't seen a lot of Grandpa Harley, yet this seemed like something that would go well with his character. Short, elegant, and kind of insane.

    Quote Originally Posted by toaster1
    Shattered Dreams



    It's an interesting concept, and I liked the idea of the rush to get to the top before Prospit pulled away from the right position in orbit. Unfortunately, sometimes I found the prose became kind of rambling, particularly when dealing with WV. His whole emotional experience there seemed to have an abrupt and kind of confusing turn around. Pruning out some of the unnecessary details would probably help.

    Quote Originally Posted by Tenebrais
    Was this posted in the Romart thread at some point? Because I feel like I've seen it from you before. Anyway, still as cute now as it was before.

    Quote Originally Posted by Hollymonster
    Uh, I was told it should be okay to post this here as well as the romart thread? If not, I'll delete the post. There's art to go with it as well, but you'll have to check the romart thread if you want to see it. :B

    I actually really liked this. Particularly the image of SS snuggling someone while mumbling about slitting people's throats. The juxtapose there is kind of hilarious. All together, it was a solid piece and it gets a thumbs up.

    Phew, okay! People need to post in this thread more often. It's the shit.
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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Ohmygodsomuchnewstuff I'd reply to stories individually, but each reply would come out as a fairly uniform "squeeeee!"

    Anyway, two lines that I wanted to work into stories, but after some thought I find that they work better without contextual clutter:

    "I can't believe you tried to use "A Rose by any other name" as an excuse."

    "They're not incredibly deadly bullets; they're Incredibly Deadly® bullets. It's my grandfather's company."

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Hey, I got the final thrilling conclusion to this epic battle!



    Okay, seriously now. Here's the real final part. Hopefully, it'll meet expectations. As usual, comments appreciated!

    The Safe: Part 4
    Or, I'm Pretty Sure We're Breaking Several Laws and Building Regulations Here.


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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Quote Originally Posted by Qukeza
    Anyway, this isn't part of HAHA GULLIBLE but is sort of related, so:

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    Okay, this is SUPER SUPER AFTER THE FACT.

    But that is not okay at all ever. Child pornography, whether it's written or drawn, or happens in a dream or with some fantasy creatures, IS NEVER OKAY TO POST EVER.

    I mean, really, why did you think it was okay to post a story about the rape of a child? No. Just, no.

    I have scrubbed it from the fora to the best of my knowledge. Never do this again. All of you.

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    At least Qukeza didn't get banned. (I think) I would ask whats in there, but I don't think I want to know.

    Edit: Was that the thing with Dave's dream in chapter 9? You might want to remove that too.
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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Quote Originally Posted by Crilly
    Edit: Was that the thing with Dave's dream in chapter 9? You might want to remove that too.
    Yeah, there's a significant portion of it quoted in chapter 8 of HAHA GULLIBLE (on page 7). Not to backseat moderate, but you might want to do something about that.

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Thanks for the heads up.

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    The whole thing? Is he allowed to edit the bad stuff out, and put it back in or......?
    [22:22:11] <TwoPrimes> in my eyes, scum usually votes first

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    At the point when I have to edit stuff like this out of a thread, the author's convenience and artistic options are no longer anywhere near my priorities.

    That said, he can post it again, sans the fucked up shit, if he wants to.

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    I do get it, I do. At least you guys are a lot less ban happy. I mean, almost any other forum he would of been banned all the way to Skaia for that.

    ANYWAYS, who has some funny/dramatic story's!
    [22:22:11] <TwoPrimes> in my eyes, scum usually votes first

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    I have an idea for a story... but I was curious if the trolls had any names yet, canon or otherwise. I didn't want to come up with radically different names out of the blue.

    (Read: I want to do as little work as possible here.)
    My chumhandle is resdaMalos and i...tend...to...trail...off...a...bit...

    View my Ao3 profile, read my stories.

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    The trolls are known only by their chumhandles. They probably have real names, though, and we may well find out in the future. So be warned.

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Quote Originally Posted by resdaMalos
    I have an idea for a story... but I was curious if the trolls had any names yet, canon or otherwise. I didn't want to come up with radically different names out of the blue.

    (Read: I want to do as little work as possible here.)
    You could assume they all have nicknames that they go by amongst themselves, possibly derived from chumhandle, zodiac sign, or some other salient feature. Like this:

    ~

    The gray-skinned boy pushed back from his computer, head in hand. "Fucking morons. Think they're so special, with their robots and their hammers and shit. By the time these chuckleheads finally figure their ass from their head we'll all be fucked six ways to Sunday. Again." He hissed in frustration, fingers to temples to rub out the beginnings of a headache.

    The girl to his right, sitting in front of a computer desk of her own, burst out laughing. She giggled. She snorted. She wheezed and all but howled with laughter. She, unsurprisingly, fell out of her chair. "Ah-haha-ha-ha-ha, oh that's precious."

    The first boy reopened one eye and scowled at his friend. "What's so funny, Scales?

    "You! And Egbert," She gropes around a bit on the floor to recover her pointed red shades, reaffixing them to cover her milky unfocused eyes.

    "You're both ridiculous, taking this all so seriously. I pull the disability card and he shuts right up like I've got a terminal disease. You get frustrated beyond all measure at a bunch of newbies because you're talking to them backwards. I don't know why you thought that was a good idea, Crabby."

    "I told you, I have an angle! This is going to work; at least one of us needs to exploit the game's predilection for time loop and paradox. Mobius double reacharounds. Whatever you nutcases want to call them next. And don't use my shitty nickname."

    "Would you prefer the stupid nickname, then?" A toothy grin of pointed mirth. "The insipid one, perhaps? You never did get around to giving us your real name so you'd better live with the consequences, Gen."

    "You're a real witch sometimes, Scales."

    "Nuh-uh, CG. That's Caligula, remember?" The blind girl grinned with mirth and laughed again.

    ~

    I could have tried out a few more nicknames for gallowsCalibrator, but I just really like 'Scales'. Gen, for reference, is from carcinoGeneticist. I think that one's my favorite.
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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Finally touching this thread again. I haven't really wanted to even peek in as I felt obligated to make a directory after my poll question failed to lean the way I thought made sense. I decided I don't really care anymore and have adjusted my first post accordingly. I was thinking of including some sort of 'use common sense, rules still apply' thing (which I still did) but I see Marelo added to my first post already ( ). I suppose that's all handled then and I might still edit the post later to make it more clear.

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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Just a bit of cG/gC Shipping Please ignore any errors etc.. :S Feedback would be nice as well please :S


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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Zuki: I really like your writing. That's all I'm going to say. Your dialogue isn't exactly like Andrew's, but I can hear your voice very clearly, which is probably actually a good thing considering you're the one writing. And I like the nicknames.

    raccoon: I'm going to be nonspecific but some of your sentence structure is awkward. and the concepts are nice, with the glasses and the braille and all, but the story is so short their mention is kind of awkward. same with the fact that you pretty much just go "PASSIONATE KISSES." I think it would be better to... work up to something more??? and maybe make it a little longer. instead of them just making out. there's my crit!!! hope you write more sometime

    cg gc I can get behind this stuff

    here's my entry, reposted from the RECENT UPDATE THREAD, because it's a PESTERLOG which I spent... way too long on

    I've decided that gC totally plays herself up as cG's girlfriend just to tease him. hopefully the trolls will NEVER TALK TO EACH OTHER in the comic so my dreams will never be crushed...............






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    Re: MSPA fan-fiction

    Quote Originally Posted by Radiation
    raccoon: I'm going to be nonspecific but some of your sentence structure is awkward. and the concepts are nice, with the glasses and the braille and all, but the story is so short their mention is kind of awkward. same with the fact that you pretty much just go "PASSIONATE KISSES." I think it would be better to... work up to something more??? and maybe make it a little longer. instead of them just making out. there's my crit!!! hope you write more sometime
    Thanks for the feedback I have never been the best writer but i do have good ideas sometimes i just sometimes struggle with the whole writing into story format xD


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