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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    Quote Originally Posted by crepuscularDissembler View Post
    I died at the part with Andrew.
    Oh, Maggie. You truly are the insufferable prick's daughter.
    IIn2ufferable ChIIck?

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    Wow, no one has posted for a while. I'm a gunna go ahead and try to write something. It's the very first time I've done something like this.
    Recollections


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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    The enter key is your friend. He misses you.

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    Really? You unlurked just to be unnecessarily sarcastic? :/
    But yeah, judicious linebreaks are the key to a smooth reading experience.

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    Ok, I will make some paragraphs.
    Edit: Ok, I made some paragraphs. I hope that this isn't completly terrible still :/

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    Yes, that looks much better. Proper linebreaking can be the key to getting a reader. I'll be honest: I skipped over that before because of the wall o text, but the simple addition of a few enters helped immensely. Looks interesting. I kinda want to write something about WV now.

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    I am terribly sorry for being such a slackass on this thread. I'm trying to fix that. Hopefully once I get done being frazzled at everything in life and get some requests/exchanges done I'll be back into the swing of things.

    Hello new comers! It was a pleasure to add you to the OP. Every new face makes me a big ball of happy. And don't worry about having to stay within the 'canon' of the story. I love seeing people's take on characters and how they think things pan out. So kick up a seat and get yo express on.

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    I didn't come empty handed! Hopefully y'all like it.



    Edit:
    It has come to my attention (thank you error page!) that I cannot update the
    OP anymore. It has become too big. I'll figure something out about that later.
    Last edited by Deeum; 04-16-2011 at 04:34 AM.

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    Officer Captor. Always :I all the time.
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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    So Andrew and I thought up a supervillains league for the troll characters that I affectionately called the LEAGUE OF D.O.O.F. Members include Marquise Mindfang, Mr. Pupa and Erigami as well as Sober!Gamzee and possibly Monochrome.

    [12:28:00 PM] Andrew (SS / LS/ VG): Like all good villain teams, they're all planning to betray eachother.
    [12:29:38 PM] Andrew (SS / LS/ VG): Pupa would do it because that's just how he rolls, Monochrome would do it because he's still VonGeist, Erigami would do it because I guess revealing peoples identities is part of his thing?, Mindfang would do it to avoid splitting the loot, Gamzee would do it because he's omnicidal-rific!

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    Part 2. (This part has no detailed explanation as to how it happened) Dialogue-heavy. Heck, 93% 72% or so of the fanfic is dialogue. Filled with nothing but OC's because that seems to be one thing I haven't tried and because it wouldn't make sense for the Ancestors to fit in with the ending of Scraps to Struggles. Basically, enjoy a dialogue-heavy (not anymore), OC-filled fanfic about what happened before Alternia City became, well, Alternia City.

    From Scraps to Struggles: Part 2 (Updated a LOT) (Part 1, Prologue)


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    Woo! Finally finished it. Enjoy.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Deeum View Post
    It has come to my attention (thank you error page!) that I cannot update the
    OP anymore. It has become too big. I'll figure something out about that later.
    Why not create a new post on this or a later page and have a link to it in the OP?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Deeum View Post
    It has come to my attention (thank you error page!) that I cannot update the
    OP anymore. It has become too big. I'll figure something out about that later.
    Well, the third post in this thread isn't really usefull.
    Maybe you could PM Stinkosar and ask if you could hijack it?

    The only issue is if he's not online whenever you need to edit it, but a mod might be willing to help.

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    The Resplendent Assassin - Chapter 2



    Chapter 1 is here.
    Chapter 3 is here.

    That took a turn I wasn't expecting, but I'm happy with it. Also, am I trying too hard with Kanaya's dialogue?

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    In the process of fixing some things in the OPs and Kayak was AWESOME AS SHIT enough to condense the bios down into sweet looking files.
    Check it out and I truly apologize for any mess ups that will appears.

    Quote Originally Posted by mythmonster2 View Post
    Quote Originally Posted by Deeum View Post
    It has come to my attention (thank you error page!) that I cannot update the
    OP anymore. It has become too big. I'll figure something out about that later.
    Why not create a new post on this or a later page and have a link to it in the OP?
    Quote Originally Posted by Cheers View Post
    Quote Originally Posted by Deeum View Post
    It has come to my attention (thank you error page!) that I cannot update the
    OP anymore. It has become too big. I'll figure something out about that later.
    Well, the third post in this thread isn't really usefull.
    Maybe you could PM Stinkosar and ask if you could hijack it?

    The only issue is if he's not online whenever you need to edit it, but a mod might be willing to help.
    I'll keep that in mind if the top two posts get full! Kayak is currently helping me out on the space issues and it should be all nice and worked out pretty soon.

    Seriously guys, thanks for all the wonderful help. I'm a derpface and can't manage anything on my own. I really do appreciate all the hard work from everyone here.
    Everyone is simply the fuckin' best.
    Last edited by Deeum; 04-19-2011 at 06:44 PM.

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    wait wait wait Opening Posts can get too big? What is the size cap on those things?

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    And you're awesome for starting this AU.
    The cycle time loop is complete.

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    Those files are lookin' awesome.

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    Yes, Kayak, you did a great job with the files. They look amazing!

    @AH- I like what you've been writing so far, keep it up.

    @Huanir- I can't wait to find out what else happens. And I think you've been writing Kanaya fine, she sounds like her usual sarcastic self.

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    I gotta admit, when I saw my little offering in the OP, I flipped out.

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    The Resplendent Assassin - Chapter 3



    Chapter 2
    Chapter 4

    A/N:

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    The Resplendent Assassin - Chapter 4



    Chapter 3
    Chapter 5

    A/N:


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    Double Huanir Update? Must be 12th perigee eve or something. Do Like.
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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    The Resplendent Assassin - Chapter 5



    Chapter 4
    Chapter 6

    A/N:



    Quote Originally Posted by liefErikson View Post
    Double Huanir Update? Must be 12th perigee eve or something. Do Like.
    Why, thank you! I happen to get Good Friday off from work, so I wanted to pound some of this out.

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    Hrm... I just read through all your stories. They are pretty cool. I also am not fond of Failridan though, and Karkat being a scientist is a bit strange. Not that I'm saying it's negative or anything. Also, what exactly is Eridan in your headcanon?

    Edit: reread the fic, scientist Karkat seems less strange for some reason.
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