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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

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    Sopor Somnolence
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    Yeah, I wasn't able to think up a way around that. I avoided the word "bucket", but that only gained me so much ground. In my headcanon, buckets don't actually matter that much, but I still want to avoid triggering the inside jokes in the minds of the forumites.

    --EDIT--

    Also, apparently Sopor Somnolence is the most popular thing I've ever written or ever will write?

    --EDIT--

    RE Tails of the Kitsune:

    Beautiful...

    Your writing has great strength. When I was first reading about Crevan, I was rather concerned about how he would turn out as a character since he has anger super powers (I know they're not actually powers, I'm simplifying for shorthand). However, you're making a good character out of him, especially with the admission that he carries hatred without justification ("without justification" is also shorthand). This is a story I'll be watching closely.

    Gallad's quirk is meant to be serpentine, no? It's fun inventing quirks.

    Oh, by the way, here's your soul. I think you accidentally left it with me back on page 79.

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

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    Eridan? Hardboiled? I didn't foresee that one. Keep em coming.

    BTW Anyone know what happened to wigmund?
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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    Good to see you back in action, Wigmund.

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    YES! Wigmunds back. Nuff said.
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    Awww yeah, Wigmund's back! Glad you're feeling better, mate. Depression happens to the best of us.

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    Our god has returned!
    All hail Wigmund, Heir of Trollcops.

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    Aw man wigmund there you go making my fics look like crap again. All hail the wigmund! THough, I didn't just come to whine. Here's another chapter of the Ampora Files Case 124 (the number is because that's what I thought was Jade's birthday. It's 12/1, isn't it?


    Ampora Files, Case 124: Section 1 2 3 4 [5]




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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    I'm working my way through this. I've got to say that I love all of this. It's also inspired me enough to want to try to make a Troll Cops comic issue from all of this. (My own take, at least.)

    So, what would be appropriate to put up? Finished pics I know, but thumbnails? Script? I mean, this is going to take a while.

    Here's a draft of the first page script, at least:


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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    Thanks for the kind words everyone I'm happy to be back.

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    Oh no. OH NO.

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    Welp, I just remembered this. Time to reread all the fics again.

    And for some reason, I like writing fics about the past. Because here's another one. It's my first fic in a while.

    From Scraps to Struggles: Part 3 (Prologue, Part 1, Part 2)


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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    Quote Originally Posted by Huanir View Post
    RE Tails of the Kitsune:

    Beautiful...

    Your writing has great strength. When I was first reading about Crevan, I was rather concerned about how he would turn out as a character since he has anger super powers (I know they're not actually powers, I'm simplifying for shorthand). However, you're making a good character out of him, especially with the admission that he carries hatred without justification ("without justification" is also shorthand). This is a story I'll be watching closely.

    Gallad's quirk is meant to be serpentine, no? It's fun inventing quirks.

    Oh, by the way, here's your soul. I think you accidentally left it with me back on page 79.
    Thanks for the compliments!

    With gallad I was going for more of a stereotypical mob boss feel, pronouncing the s more like a z, but it works as hissing too. To explain Crevan's: It's supposed to sound very snooty, like some stuck up young nobleman. T|-|E L||\|ES are him subconsciously putting himself a step above everyone else, even in writing.

    EDIT:

    It's good to see you back Wigmund, I always enjoy your stuff.
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    @ Wigmund- As everyone else is saying, it's great to see you back again. And with two updates as well! They are as good as always. I really do wonder what Mr Pupa has planned though...!

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    Oh sweet, good to see Wigmund back.

    Wigmund, any idea when we'll see that comic you and frostedWarlock were working on?

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    This seems like a really awesome idea and I've gotten a couple of ideas floating around in my head about it. I just have a question...

    Firstly, how solid is this fanon? Am I allowed to go completely off the handle and not reference any other fic at all? Is there anything that should remain constant across all fics? I'm not talking the basic stuff like "Who's a criminal, who's a cop", "The Karkat gang is made up of three trolls and are under Dr. Pupa" and things of the sort. I'm talking like, whether the Karkat Gang live in a house or not, or what the city is structured like, or the personalities of each character.

    I hope I don't sound too businesslike or anything. I'm still getting used to this forum. Please don't eat me.

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    First post info is cannon everything else is head cannon.

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    I see.

    Another question; in this story that I have thought up in response to this AU, one of the characters dies. Is this acceptable?

    I'm sorry. I just really don't want to step on any toes here.

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    Yeah it's acceptable. It's your headcanon. Do what you like and what you think is ok.

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    Wigmund cannon is also a thing.
    But for your question. Yes it is acceptable as long as it isn't gratuitous but I think we need others people's opinions on this as well.

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    I'm also planning on a few characters not making it to the end. No objections, just be reasonable about it.

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    Alright, thanks! I guess that's a good enough go-ahead. I'll have the first part up soon-ish.

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    Major writer's block on Eridan's story, so I wrote about 15-year-old Mr. Pupa instead.

    Rescue



    A/N



    --EDIT--

    Welcome, CalamityCons. I just realized that every one of your posts so far was in this thread. Welcome! :)

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    Ampora Files, Case 124: Section 1 2 3 4 5 [6]




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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    Boy, these stories seem pretty good! I like the oneshots.

    I hope what I make will be good enough!

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    Re: TROLL!COPS: The AU

    Haha, yeah, I like writing one shots more than series fics, but this one got away from me!

    I have to say that I like that little voyage into Mr. Pupa's past, and that even though it's contained at 15, he still is merciless and ambitious.

    I also like Wigmund's fic, like always you always keep us guessing and wanting more.

    Tales of the Kitsune is also good, and interesting. Even fantrolls can have a very definite place in this AU, and your writing is quite interesting and I want to see more of Crevan's story now. Everybody cheers for the underdog, after all.

    Looking forward to your fic, Calamity.

    Oh, and aH, I don't know, I don't think your story flowed very well. It kinda seemed like a comic book, what with these characters talking about all of their respective backstories like daily conversations. THat just might be my personal opinion.

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