Finished my new troll I think :I
Not bad MB. Not bad at all.
EVERYTHING I TOUCH TURNS TO GRIMDARK!
Indeed!
It's nice to see so many fantrolls
I want a man who splays down in the street
The swinging bodies and the children in the wet concrete
In the house with the laughing windows
We're spilling blood like a cheap innuendo
>Be the painfully unhappy troll girl
Your name is NIA.
...just...just Nia ok?
You are currently approximately SIX SWEEPS old, although you didn’t get to celebrate your wriggling day due to being HIVELESS.
You wish you could list your INTERESTS but there’s not much to tell. Well, you guess you like DRAWING and WRITING things. A lack of PAPER and WRITING UTENSILS has made this somewhat of a luxury for you, one you can’t often spare time and energy for.
Most of your time nowadays is spent finding FOOD and SAFE PLACES TO SLEEP. You admit you’ve been run a little ragged trying to do these things while still staying PERPETUALLY ALERT. You usually find enough of both to get by, although everyone had bouts of BAD LUCK.
You’re Lusus...you honestly don’t know what it’s up to these days. That thing always hated you, called you WORTHLESS, STUPID, and a FREAK. It also got really angry with you sometimes, really angry...apparently it got saddled with you without knowing your blood color. After it learned it was already too late, it was your Lusus for better or worse.
Your Lusus was the first to show you your general PLACE IN LIFE. Had it not been for her, you might have gone sweeps more ignorant of what an ABSOLUTE SCEW-UP you apparently are. It seems to be true, nothing you do ever turns out right. At this point you generally simply say “I’m no good” and move on when things inevitably go wrong.
Apparently one day you were just too much of a screw up, because you’re Lusus tried to CULL you one morning. You got away, minus a horn or so. Since then you’ve been living on your own in a HIVELESS state. Your physical state has ever so slowly been getting more RAGGED.
Having FREAK BLOOD like you do is a bad thing, when someone finds out you know you have to get far away fast. Your LIFE has almost been lost more than once by having someone spot your blood color if you are injured. You try and pass yourself off as a HOMELESS MAROON BLOOD, since that’s as close to the truth as you can safely get. It also makes the color of BRUISES and scabbed-over CUTS able to fit your story, which is helpful.
You don’t have any special MENTAL POWERS to brag about, nor do you have the MENTAL RESISTANCE that high bloods have. Basically you didn’t get anything on that front. As for physical ability, well...you guess you have a HIGH PAIN TOLERANCE.
Oh, and one final thing. You chat often with a few trolls ONLINE. You got your hands on a REALLY SHITTY GRUBTOP during a dumpster check, and found it! It was out of date sweeps ago, and honestly it’s little better than an ELECTRONIC TYPEWRITER for all it can do. Luckily you have its POWER CABLE and an old WIRELESS MODUEL to use with it. Chatting is a nice escape.
You paint a picture of a POOR but HAPPY girl with MAROON BLOOD living in the SLUMS. It’s close enough to the way you use to live to fake well enough. You could never tell them the truth, though. If your chat pals ever learned you were a WORTHLESS RED-BLOODED HIVELESS FREAK they would hate you and never chat again. You...you really don’t think you would survive losing them too. They are so nice and then they’ll start calling you things and you won’t be able to say anything to save yourself because your no good and your starting to cry again...
Your trollhandle is endlessJourney and you ...ok, you honestly have no typing quirk, it’s just one more thing freak-like about you.
Title: Heir of Hope
Strife Specibi: N/A (F-Fight? But I’m no good at anything! I’ll DIE! AAAGH! Please don’t hurt me!)
Sylladex: Normal, any card at any time (...but I only have two cards.)
Color(chat): #6F0000
Color(blood): #FF0000
EVERYTHING I TOUCH TURNS TO GRIMDARK!
Probably the most annoying troll ever
I'm going to weep in the horn pile. Does anyone want to join me?
PC: TH4T. IS. SOME. 9ROFOUNDLY. OUTD4TTED. H4RDW4RE. YOU. H4VE. THERE.
PC: I. COULD. SET. YOU. U9. WITH. SOMETHING. F4R. SU9ERIOR. TO. IT. IF. YOU. WOULD. LIKE. ME. TO.
This is getting a rewrite soon. Pay not attention to it.
Honestly? I don't know what I was thinking. I suppose I could make her good for more than just sympathy with some work. The reason she exists as is would be for a simple reason.
After I posted the first couple of images with little to no character in my mind yet, I got MORE COMMENTS ABOUT HER THAN ALL MY OTHER TROLLS COMBINE! Inevitably I went a little attention-hungry as I am prone to do with such things. Thus I crafted the most pitiable sob-story my GRIMDARK powers could create.
EVERYTHING I TOUCH TURNS TO GRIMDARK!
Don't change anything!
Honestly the fact that I would kick that troll in half means that you did a really good job crafting it! Art illicits emotion, and good art illicits more.
My dumb advice: make her a little less "sad self-pitying homeless child" and a little more "crazy homeless lady." That much untreated depression plus long-term lack of food, sleep, sympathy etc. would have serious negative effects on her mental state.
Last edited by BewareOfNerd; 01-27-2011 at 09:13 PM.
I agree Bandages, be it kicking it until it dies or hugging it forever, it brings emotion to the surface, and that's what makes it great.
Then we have mine, which is just, "Dem pants."
This is getting a rewrite soon. Pay not attention to it.
EVERYTHING I TOUCH TURNS TO GRIMDARK!
Yeah. Way too many VIOLENT INSANITY KILL KILL BLOOD STAB STAB trolls
I want a man who splays down in the street
The swinging bodies and the children in the wet concrete
In the house with the laughing windows
We're spilling blood like a cheap innuendo
I figure everyone gets to make ONE total psychopath troll and still be OK, but if you start popping them out everywhere it get's stupid.
EVERYTHING I TOUCH TURNS TO GRIMDARK!
You know, I think every troll I have ever thought up has been caring or nice in some way. I have yet to make a deathly troll, well full-time that is.
This is getting a rewrite soon. Pay not attention to it.
All of my trolls are just complete screw ups. More socially than mentally, though.