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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction IV

    Only one small complaint: "No one could deny that the Demon was a pushover even without the powers of the Green Sun coursing through him."

    This line seems like you got the actual phrasing mixed up. It should either be "No one could say" at the beginning, or "the Demon was no pushover..." in the middle.

    If that's what you're trying to convey (that the battle was still difficult without his super powers).

    Other than that, great fic.

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    Bluh, bluh I almost failed english class in high school and I've stayed far away from literature classes in college because of stuff like that. My essays in the college English classes had notes going "You know what you're doing, but put a period or two between those thoughts."

    Dammit aC - I'm a biology major, not a writer

    Fixed the problem, thanks for pointing it out though. I appreciate it when people correct my errors.
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction IV

    Quote Originally Posted by Wigmund View Post
    Bluh, bluh I almost failed english class in high school and I've stayed far away from literature classes in college because of stuff like that. My essays in the college English classes had notes going "You know what you're doing, but put a period or two between those thoughts."

    Dammit aC - I'm a biology major, not a writer

    Fixed the problem, thanks for pointing it out though. I appreciate it when people correct my errors.
    You fail English?

    Is but that unpossible!

    Also,

    your story is ridiculously awesome!

    I really hope Homestuck ends that way... Sort of...
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    Bluh. I hate literature classes. I agree with Oscar Wildes' rant in the beginning of Dorian Grey, about taking things at face value and enjoying something for it's beauty, not any deeper meaning.

    The only thing that really bugs me is improper grammar.

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    You've all clearly never taken a for reals awesome funtimes literature class.

    Someday I should whip out a proper literary analysis of Homestuck, but that'd require me to actually read Campbell.

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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction IV

    Wigmund=/=Literature Major

    Mind=BLOWN

    For real o.o
    (Forgot to mention that I like that fic muchly, derp)
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction IV

    If you really want to know something mind-blowing, try to comprehend this:
    OH WHAT THE FUCK was the first fic I've written since 1996 when I was in sixth grade.
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction IV

    01101111 01101000 00100000 01100111 01101111 01100100 00100000 01010011 01100101 01110010 01100001 01110000 01101000 00100000 01101110 01101111 01110100 00100000 01111001 01101111 01110101 00100000 01110100 01101111 01101111 00100000 00111011 01011111 00111011

    actually fuck this, I am a literature student and I don't know about no poncy numbers
    eat this suckers

    Domusadhaerus


    TO BE CONTINUED

    A/N
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction IV

    Gratuitous Latin ahoy!

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    Still tops the crap I pump out and keep locked in the deepest recesses of my hard drive.
    Better stretch my legs... Sure has been a while.
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction IV

    Quote Originally Posted by Kassiopeia View Post
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    actually fuck this, I am a literature student and I don't know about no poncy numbers
    eat this suckers

    Domusadhaerus


    TO BE CONTINUED

    A/N
    oh god damn it my latin is way too rusty for this

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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction IV

    Google Translate is now my friend. I'm butchering your fic with online translators Kass.
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    In all honesty, it is probably very bad Latin. We translated it over MSN in about 15 minutes, and I'm not even a proper Classicist...

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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction IV

    Ok Kassie has sent me to post the translation in English, "because you are Lord English B)", and of course because she is a god of empathy. She too begins to translate.


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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction IV

    I can't believe you included my Davesmiley. It should of course have looked like this:

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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction IV

    oh.

    Well

    here's what Google Translate says you said:



    I'm pretty sure the idea of having a painting of a pretty she-wolf is much funnier.

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    Honestly Google Translate has done a better job of writing things than I did or EVER WILL.

    (She-wolf is the literal translation, but it does indeed mean a lady of negotiable virtue :3)

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    I do enjoy the fact that "she-wolf" was slang for "prostitute". Gives one a lovely image of piratical nightladies strolling about with knives between their teeth :3
    Also, "Refreshing the fifth blind-worm" is going to be the name of my new band.
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction IV

    .... I think it sounds like a euphemism for something.

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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction IV

    Gog-damn it, I hate school-nights.

    I want to post a part 4, but I have some major crap to do tomorrow.

    :-P

    Also, the LatinFic ruled.
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    @JudgeDeadd: Thank you! Not being able to keep track of the grublings was always a risk, I’m sorry it affected you and you probably weren't alone. There wasn’t much I could do if I wanted to show them all and with the necessity of less-chapters-get-back-to-work breathing down my neck. Thanks for the review!

    And speaking of getting back to work…

    .- / .... .- -. -.. / .. -. / .... --- .-.. -.

    …Wait. I’m doing it too, aren’t I? …Just a second.

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    Part 10 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, recap1, 7, 8, 9)





    Post threeeeeee huuuuuuuuundred.
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction IV

    hey
    hey doodled
    is your story following Dine/Knox or not?
    because mysteries are awesome

    for example, terezi is the detective obviously so she can't be the culprit, and the culprit is a character already presented in the story
    stuff like that

    oh ninja'd by delicious trollsbians yesssssssss
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction IV

    *quickly logs onto computer*

    Quote Originally Posted by absoluteCertainty View Post
    hey
    hey doodled
    is your story following Dine/Knox or not?
    because mysteries are awesome

    for example, terezi is the detective obviously so she can't be the culprit, and the culprit is a character already presented in the story
    stuff like that
    Dine/Knox?

    I mean, it is sort of a mystery story, and the culprit IS a character in the story... mostly...

    People might not be what they seem...
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction IV

    Quote Originally Posted by Ember View Post
    Quote Originally Posted by Graven_Image View Post
    @Ember: Can has extrapolation plz?
    Either way, it's clearly meant to evoke the image of blood on a spider's fangs. The difference is that to humans it could be anyone's blood, whereas to Trolls, "pinkish-red" would indicate she's gunning for royalty. It's pretty much anarchic, and probably a cullable offense. Vriska has nerves of steel.
    Whoa, you're good at this. I'm just gonna pretend this is what I was shooting for all along, because it's an awesome interpretation.

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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction IV

    Skaian...I can't wait for more. The image of Karkat on the couch providing commentary is the best thing ever. Karcouch the peanut gallery (damn you lack of proper sleep)


    Insomnia forces me to write horrible things. Like this Cat Fight
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