MSPA Fanfiction IV

[Nexev]

CB is plobbaly karkat but then who is FE?

[sebastian]

FE is Gamzee.

FatallyErratic = TerminallyCapricious, see?

[Metaflare]

I'm gonna end up doing two of these a day i bet

Courtstuck-4

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-- burgerSpirit [BS] began pestering ladiesMan [LM] --
BS: uh
BS: hi larry
BS: would you like to play a game?
LM: i no u?
BS: larry its me
BS: maya :|
LM: ...oooo ya nicks gf rite
BS: no im not aaargh we go through this every time
LM: lol calm down grl
LM: so wts this bout a game
BS: i got a game for you to play
BS: it
BS: it lets you meet chicks yeah
LM: orly
BS: franziska will be playing
LM: franzy???
LM: sign me up

burgerSpirits [BS] sent Sburb client.EXE
burgerSpirits [BS] sent Sburb server.EXE

BS: ill get back to you with instructions ok?
LM: k lol
-- burgerSpirits [BS] ceased pestering ladiesMan [LM] --

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??: I believe it is time to start the game.
MAYA: wait what
MAYA: but edgy and franz need to get the stuff!!!
??: Don't worry, they'll recieve their games in due time.
??: But i'm sure you don't want to be flattened by a meteor.
MAYA: uhhh
MAYA: point taken

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-- burgerSpirits [BS] began pestering takeThat [TT] --
BS: ok nick is the game all set up yet
TT: Sorry Maya, I've been having computer troubles ever since we last talked.
BS: WHAT
BS: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
TT: Wow, this must be a really good game if you want to play it that badly.
BS: I DONT WANNA BE CRUSHED BY A METEOR ;-;
TT: Is that the premise of the game?
BS: kdsjbl,bslvzlbrkvbelwbuvwvnlsdnwilan,zev
TT: Uhhh...
-- burgerSpirits [BS] ceased pestering takeThat [TT] --

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-- burgerSpirits [BS] began pestering aceDetective [AD] --
BS: GUMSHOEHELP
AD: woah whats the rush
BS: is your game ready please tell me its ready
AD: uhh yeah
AD: but it keeps telling me i need to connect to another player :\
AD: tell me next time if its a multeplayer game
BS: ok you see a box to put in a name for your client player
AD: uhh
AD: oh yeah! :D
BS: ok put in my screenname hurry!
AD: uhh
AD: there!
-- burgerSpirits [BS] has been disconnected --
AD: i didnt do it! D:

[Nexev]

Dick lies. He totally did it.

Is that Mia in the grey btw?

[mythmonster2]

Are you continuing that, sebastian? It looks pretty interesting!

[Metaflare]

Dick lies. He totally did it.

Is that Mia in the grey btw?

You'll see~

[Kassiopeia]

@Karijou that was loooovely I love me some purpleDave, and blueRose is a wonderful foil for him. (and as a former CYOA aficionado, I can only approve of her literary tastes ) (also man, I kinda want to write me some altkids now. Has anyone ever done a purpleJade? That might be entertainingly insane.)

[sebastian]

Are you continuing that, sebastian? It looks pretty interesting!

I was answering Nexev.

But You are right, It is better if I elaborate a little.

[QuetzaDrake]

Oh no, Maya! Also yeah I'm fairly sure it's Mia she's talking to, "Spiritlog" and all... or some other Doc Scratch-esque spirit talking to Maya.

Anyway, awesome, still lovin' it. I personally would've called this Turnabout Sburb or something, though, myself, cause I'm a nerd.

[sarasvati]

lantadyme: "fuck yes" was a phrase i literally, physically spoke out loud with my voice and everything as soon as the word "frogging" happened. i love it when fics make something new click into place in my head. excellent, excellent work.

kass: this is probably my favorite jack-fic i've read. and by probably i mean easily. i loved the structure to this especially.

eB: haha holy shit the bertolt brecht one was amazing, i love it.

okay so today's update (specifically the idea that jade and dave are also communicating as jade talks to kanaya but that part is not shown) made me want to write the dave-jade side of it. and then it turned into a giant "oh btw how do you feel about the shipping situation" pesterlog. whoops.

by the way they dance
pairing: dave/jade

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TG: whats next on the agenda
GG: breeding responsibilities!!!!!!!
TG:
TG: i
TG: sorry
TG: think i just had a seizure
TG: on my keyboard
TG: no big deal everythings chill
TG: because i know you didnt just say breeding responsibilities

[Metaflare]

I personally would've called this Turnabout Sburb or something, though, myself, cause I'm a nerd.

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HOW DO I TITLE DERPDERP

[Nexev]

Well obviously, otherwise the whole thing seems rushed.

See how long homestuck is, or even how long hivebent is, Hivebent in itself was supposedly heavily condensed, and this is even more so condensed then that story.

It is well written but it is missing allot of things.

[Dex Davican]

Okay, so... is "characters from some other story play a dysfunctional game of Sburb" a thing now? If so then... I kinda had to do this.

a hellish crossover

I gotta know who the second two characters were here. They read kind of like Terumi and Noel from BlazBlue, but I kind of doubt that's who they're supposed to be!

[Godot]

I'm gonna end up doing two of these a day i bet

Courtstuck-4

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-- burgerSpirit [BS] began pestering ladiesMan [LM] --
BS: uh
BS: hi larry
BS: would you like to play a game?
LM: i no u?
BS: larry its me
BS: maya :|
LM: ...oooo ya nicks gf rite
BS: no im not aaargh we go through this every time
LM: lol calm down grl
LM: so wts this bout a game
BS: i got a game for you to play
BS: it
BS: it lets you meet chicks yeah
LM: orly
BS: franziska will be playing
LM: franzy???
LM: sign me up

burgerSpirits [BS] sent Sburb client.EXE
burgerSpirits [BS] sent Sburb server.EXE

BS: ill get back to you with instructions ok?
LM: k lol
-- burgerSpirits [BS] ceased pestering ladiesMan [LM] --

Spiritlog

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??: I believe it is time to start the game.
MAYA: wait what
MAYA: but edgy and franz need to get the stuff!!!
??: Don't worry, they'll recieve their games in due time.
??: But i'm sure you don't want to be flattened by a meteor.
MAYA: uhhh
MAYA: point taken

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-- burgerSpirits [BS] began pestering takeThat [TT] --
BS: ok nick is the game all set up yet
TT: Sorry Maya, I've been having computer troubles ever since we last talked.
BS: WHAT
BS: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
TT: Wow, this must be a really good game if you want to play it that badly.
BS: I DONT WANNA BE CRUSHED BY A METEOR ;-;
TT: Is that the premise of the game?
BS: kdsjbl,bslvzlbrkvbelwbuvwvnlsdnwilan,zev
TT: Uhhh...
-- burgerSpirits [BS] ceased pestering takeThat [TT] --

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-- burgerSpirits [BS] began pestering aceDetective [AD] --
BS: GUMSHOEHELP
A woah whats the rush
BS: is your game ready please tell me its ready
A uhh yeah
A but it keeps telling me i need to connect to another player :\
A tell me next time if its a multeplayer game
BS: ok you see a box to put in a name for your client player
A uhh
A oh yeah!
BS: ok put in my screenname hurry!
A uhh
A there!
-- burgerSpirits [BS] has been disconnected --
A i didnt do it!

oh god gumshoe what did you do.

*is praying for a Godot appearance*

[deceitfulDarj]

I'm actually pretty nervous about posting this, but uh, here we go. This is the first part in a series about the human alternates of the Trolls. I hope you like it, or something!

Cancer

Oh man pleeeeeeeease tell me you're going to continue this! I just love your style of writing, the way you can use no dialogue and still get the point across wonderfully, the use of repetition and the breaking of such and blah blah but I just love it! ((Also, don't be nervous, I don't think there's any reason! You're bound to get praise if you keep pumpin' out lil' gems like this! Well, in my opinion at least~))

[Metaflare]

I'm gonna end up doing two of these a day i bet

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-- burgerSpirit [BS] began pestering ladiesMan [LM] --
BS: uh
BS: hi larry
BS: would you like to play a game?
LM: i no u?
BS: larry its me
BS: maya :|
LM: ...oooo ya nicks gf rite
BS: no im not aaargh we go through this every time
LM: lol calm down grl
LM: so wts this bout a game
BS: i got a game for you to play
BS: it
BS: it lets you meet chicks yeah
LM: orly
BS: franziska will be playing
LM: franzy???
LM: sign me up

burgerSpirits [BS] sent Sburb client.EXE
burgerSpirits [BS] sent Sburb server.EXE

BS: ill get back to you with instructions ok?
LM: k lol
-- burgerSpirits [BS] ceased pestering ladiesMan [LM] --

Spiritlog

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??: I believe it is time to start the game.
MAYA: wait what
MAYA: but edgy and franz need to get the stuff!!!
??: Don't worry, they'll recieve their games in due time.
??: But i'm sure you don't want to be flattened by a meteor.
MAYA: uhhh
MAYA: point taken

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-- burgerSpirits [BS] began pestering takeThat [TT] --
BS: ok nick is the game all set up yet
TT: Sorry Maya, I've been having computer troubles ever since we last talked.
BS: WHAT
BS: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
TT: Wow, this must be a really good game if you want to play it that badly.
BS: I DONT WANNA BE CRUSHED BY A METEOR ;-;
TT: Is that the premise of the game?
BS: kdsjbl,bslvzlbrkvbelwbuvwvnlsdnwilan,zev
TT: Uhhh...
-- burgerSpirits [BS] ceased pestering takeThat [TT] --

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-- burgerSpirits [BS] began pestering aceDetective [AD] --
BS: GUMSHOEHELP
A woah whats the rush
BS: is your game ready please tell me its ready
A uhh yeah
A but it keeps telling me i need to connect to another player :\
A tell me next time if its a multeplayer game
BS: ok you see a box to put in a name for your client player
A uhh
A oh yeah!
BS: ok put in my screenname hurry!
A uhh
A there!
-- burgerSpirits [BS] has been disconnected --
A i didnt do it!

oh god gumshoe what did you do.

*is praying for a Godot appearance*

As awesome as that'd be, I'm trying to keep in canon here. No coffee addicts I'm afraid.

[Godot]

I'm gonna end up doing two of these a day i bet

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-- burgerSpirit [BS] began pestering ladiesMan [LM] --
BS: uh
BS: hi larry
BS: would you like to play a game?
LM: i no u?
BS: larry its me
BS: maya :|
LM: ...oooo ya nicks gf rite
BS: no im not aaargh we go through this every time
LM: lol calm down grl
LM: so wts this bout a game
BS: i got a game for you to play
BS: it
BS: it lets you meet chicks yeah
LM: orly
BS: franziska will be playing
LM: franzy???
LM: sign me up

burgerSpirits [BS] sent Sburb client.EXE
burgerSpirits [BS] sent Sburb server.EXE

BS: ill get back to you with instructions ok?
LM: k lol
-- burgerSpirits [BS] ceased pestering ladiesMan [LM] --

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??: I believe it is time to start the game.
MAYA: wait what
MAYA: but edgy and franz need to get the stuff!!!
??: Don't worry, they'll recieve their games in due time.
??: But i'm sure you don't want to be flattened by a meteor.
MAYA: uhhh
MAYA: point taken

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-- burgerSpirits [BS] began pestering takeThat [TT] --
BS: ok nick is the game all set up yet
TT: Sorry Maya, I've been having computer troubles ever since we last talked.
BS: WHAT
BS: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
TT: Wow, this must be a really good game if you want to play it that badly.
BS: I DONT WANNA BE CRUSHED BY A METEOR ;-;
TT: Is that the premise of the game?
BS: kdsjbl,bslvzlbrkvbelwbuvwvnlsdnwilan,zev
TT: Uhhh...
-- burgerSpirits [BS] ceased pestering takeThat [TT] --

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-- burgerSpirits [BS] began pestering aceDetective [AD] --
BS: GUMSHOEHELP
A woah whats the rush
BS: is your game ready please tell me its ready
A uhh yeah
A but it keeps telling me i need to connect to another player :\
A tell me next time if its a multeplayer game
BS: ok you see a box to put in a name for your client player
A uhh
A oh yeah!
BS: ok put in my screenname hurry!
A uhh
A there!
-- burgerSpirits [BS] has been disconnected --
A i didnt do it!

oh god gumshoe what did you do.

*is praying for a Godot appearance*

As awesome as that'd be, I'm trying to keep in canon here. No coffee addicts I'm afraid.

No Maya channeling him even?

I'm sad now.

Either way though, this looks really interesting. I'm keeping my eye on this.

[Karijou]

@Karijou that was loooovely I love me some purpleDave, and blueRose is a wonderful foil for him. (and as a former CYOA aficionado, I can only approve of her literary tastes ) (also man, I kinda want to write me some altkids now. Has anyone ever done a purpleJade? That might be entertainingly insane.)

Lucien's just amazing with Purple!Dave, in a way that I can only hope the fic managed to even get close to, and since Rose Egbert is the one I've been trying to RP with him I'm glad she comes off as a good counterpart! :P But they're quite fun to play, both of them! (And hehe, yeah, CYOA was my childhood. She reads other things, too, she's just enough of a derp to read... whatever, and like it.)

I don't think I've ever seen Purple Jade! It'd be interesting to see how she works, though. We've got a group of four with Green!John, Red!Jade, Blue!Rose, and Purple!Dave, Lucien's written all four colors of Dave before, and a fic on mspachan involves all four colors of John. Green Rose, Red Rose (although Lucien and I have talked about her at length), Blue Jade, and Purple Jade all remain unexplored as far as I know!

[Kassiopeia]

@sarasvati oh my gosh, thank you I'm so glad you approve!
@Karijou hmmmmm. I will give it some thought (tempted to do all four colours of Rose, actually. Some kind of play on prisms... IDK. We'll see :3)

[lucidSeraph]

Kari, you must send me that John fic once I've extracated myself from the tentacular grip of class today.




also at some point we should do some kind of horrifying collab wherein all the alt-kids meet. What is that, sixteen kids, all interacting...?

[Karijou]

@sarasvati oh my gosh, thank you I'm so glad you approve!
@Karijou hmmmmm. I will give it some thought (tempted to do all four colours of Rose, actually. Some kind of play on prisms... IDK. We'll see :3)

Well, if you did write it, I'd stalk the heck out of it. XD Rose is one of those characters I happen to enjoy very much, and yet she doesn't seem to get much screentime these days. And even when she does, a large part of it's to get plot across, so... hurp. ANYWAY the point is that if you write it, I will read it!

[Nexev]

I'm gonna end up doing two of these a day i bet

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-- burgerSpirit [BS] began pestering ladiesMan [LM] --
BS: uh
BS: hi larry
BS: would you like to play a game?
LM: i no u?
BS: larry its me
BS: maya :|
LM: ...oooo ya nicks gf rite
BS: no im not aaargh we go through this every time
LM: lol calm down grl
LM: so wts this bout a game
BS: i got a game for you to play
BS: it
BS: it lets you meet chicks yeah
LM: orly
BS: franziska will be playing
LM: franzy???
LM: sign me up

burgerSpirits [BS] sent Sburb client.EXE
burgerSpirits [BS] sent Sburb server.EXE

BS: ill get back to you with instructions ok?
LM: k lol
-- burgerSpirits [BS] ceased pestering ladiesMan [LM] --

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??: I believe it is time to start the game.
MAYA: wait what
MAYA: but edgy and franz need to get the stuff!!!
??: Don't worry, they'll recieve their games in due time.
??: But i'm sure you don't want to be flattened by a meteor.
MAYA: uhhh
MAYA: point taken

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-- burgerSpirits [BS] began pestering takeThat [TT] --
BS: ok nick is the game all set up yet
TT: Sorry Maya, I've been having computer troubles ever since we last talked.
BS: WHAT
BS: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
TT: Wow, this must be a really good game if you want to play it that badly.
BS: I DONT WANNA BE CRUSHED BY A METEOR ;-;
TT: Is that the premise of the game?
BS: kdsjbl,bslvzlbrkvbelwbuvwvnlsdnwilan,zev
TT: Uhhh...
-- burgerSpirits [BS] ceased pestering takeThat [TT] --

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-- burgerSpirits [BS] began pestering aceDetective [AD] --
BS: GUMSHOEHELP
A woah whats the rush
BS: is your game ready please tell me its ready
A uhh yeah
A but it keeps telling me i need to connect to another player :\
A tell me next time if its a multeplayer game
BS: ok you see a box to put in a name for your client player
A uhh
A oh yeah!
BS: ok put in my screenname hurry!
A uhh
A there!
-- burgerSpirits [BS] has been disconnected --
A i didnt do it!

oh god gumshoe what did you do.

*is praying for a Godot appearance*

As awesome as that'd be, I'm trying to keep in canon here. No coffee addicts I'm afraid.

What if... Godot gets one phone call in jail, and that phone call is from a cellphone, a cellphone with internet access.

And with said internet accsess he manages to download the game and enter his session through his cell?

[Metaflare]

sorry, but i already got the basics down
only six players, and they're the one's we've seen

[Godot]

I'm gonna end up doing two of these a day i bet

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-- burgerSpirit [BS] began pestering ladiesMan [LM] --
BS: uh
BS: hi larry
BS: would you like to play a game?
LM: i no u?
BS: larry its me
BS: maya :|
LM: ...oooo ya nicks gf rite
BS: no im not aaargh we go through this every time
LM: lol calm down grl
LM: so wts this bout a game
BS: i got a game for you to play
BS: it
BS: it lets you meet chicks yeah
LM: orly
BS: franziska will be playing
LM: franzy???
LM: sign me up

burgerSpirits [BS] sent Sburb client.EXE
burgerSpirits [BS] sent Sburb server.EXE

BS: ill get back to you with instructions ok?
LM: k lol
-- burgerSpirits [BS] ceased pestering ladiesMan [LM] --

Spiritlog

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??: I believe it is time to start the game.
MAYA: wait what
MAYA: but edgy and franz need to get the stuff!!!
??: Don't worry, they'll recieve their games in due time.
??: But i'm sure you don't want to be flattened by a meteor.
MAYA: uhhh
MAYA: point taken

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-- burgerSpirits [BS] began pestering takeThat [TT] --
BS: ok nick is the game all set up yet
TT: Sorry Maya, I've been having computer troubles ever since we last talked.
BS: WHAT
BS: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
TT: Wow, this must be a really good game if you want to play it that badly.
BS: I DONT WANNA BE CRUSHED BY A METEOR ;-;
TT: Is that the premise of the game?
BS: kdsjbl,bslvzlbrkvbelwbuvwvnlsdnwilan,zev
TT: Uhhh...
-- burgerSpirits [BS] ceased pestering takeThat [TT] --

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-- burgerSpirits [BS] began pestering aceDetective [AD] --
BS: GUMSHOEHELP
A woah whats the rush
BS: is your game ready please tell me its ready
A uhh yeah
A but it keeps telling me i need to connect to another player :\
A tell me next time if its a multeplayer game
BS: ok you see a box to put in a name for your client player
A uhh
A oh yeah!
BS: ok put in my screenname hurry!
A uhh
A there!
-- burgerSpirits [BS] has been disconnected --
A i didnt do it!

oh god gumshoe what did you do.

*is praying for a Godot appearance*

As awesome as that'd be, I'm trying to keep in canon here. No coffee addicts I'm afraid.

What if... Godot gets one phone call in jail, and that phone call is from a cellphone, a cellphone with internet access.

And with said internet accsess he manages to download the game and enter his session through his cell?

It was kind of implied that he died, however.

So unless Maya channels him, it's like impossible.

[QuetzaDrake]

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I'm gonna end up doing two of these a day i bet

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-- burgerSpirit [BS] began pestering ladiesMan [LM] --
BS: uh
BS: hi larry
BS: would you like to play a game?
LM: i no u?
BS: larry its me
BS: maya :|
LM: ...oooo ya nicks gf rite
BS: no im not aaargh we go through this every time
LM: lol calm down grl
LM: so wts this bout a game
BS: i got a game for you to play
BS: it
BS: it lets you meet chicks yeah
LM: orly
BS: franziska will be playing
LM: franzy???
LM: sign me up

burgerSpirits [BS] sent Sburb client.EXE
burgerSpirits [BS] sent Sburb server.EXE

BS: ill get back to you with instructions ok?
LM: k lol
-- burgerSpirits [BS] ceased pestering ladiesMan [LM] --

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??: I believe it is time to start the game.
MAYA: wait what
MAYA: but edgy and franz need to get the stuff!!!
??: Don't worry, they'll recieve their games in due time.
??: But i'm sure you don't want to be flattened by a meteor.
MAYA: uhhh
MAYA: point taken

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-- burgerSpirits [BS] began pestering takeThat [TT] --
BS: ok nick is the game all set up yet
TT: Sorry Maya, I've been having computer troubles ever since we last talked.
BS: WHAT
BS: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
TT: Wow, this must be a really good game if you want to play it that badly.
BS: I DONT WANNA BE CRUSHED BY A METEOR ;-;
TT: Is that the premise of the game?
BS: kdsjbl,bslvzlbrkvbelwbuvwvnlsdnwilan,zev
TT: Uhhh...
-- burgerSpirits [BS] ceased pestering takeThat [TT] --

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-- burgerSpirits [BS] began pestering aceDetective [AD] --
BS: GUMSHOEHELP
A woah whats the rush
BS: is your game ready please tell me its ready
A uhh yeah
A but it keeps telling me i need to connect to another player :\
A tell me next time if its a multeplayer game
BS: ok you see a box to put in a name for your client player
A uhh
A oh yeah!
BS: ok put in my screenname hurry!
A uhh
A there!
-- burgerSpirits [BS] has been disconnected --
A i didnt do it!

oh god gumshoe what did you do.

*is praying for a Godot appearance*

As awesome as that'd be, I'm trying to keep in canon here. No coffee addicts I'm afraid.

What if... Godot gets one phone call in jail, and that phone call is from a cellphone, a cellphone with internet access.

And with said internet accsess he manages to download the game and enter his session through his cell?

It was kind of implied that he died, however.

So unless Maya channels him, it's like impossible.

What what what what.

Noooooo, he did not die. He merely... well, he went to jail, I'll just say that. That's all. He certainly did not die, at least not as quickly as before Phoenix lost his license and stopped hanging out with Maya in Apollo Justice's backstory.

Although, that makes me question, where's Pearl in this story?