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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    ....Katrika, I was in such a rage until you reminded me of that.

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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    Quote Originally Posted by Douhneill View Post
    So, we have:

    Ferris breaks out of the facility, burning the place down as he leaves.
    Ferris recruits Gabriel.
    Ferris 'visits' his sister.
    Tarani talks to Carter.
    Tarani calls Tom over.
    THE FINALE
    Vriska tells Ferris the truth.
    Things i need to write:

    Ferris on death: "on dead commands"
    Gabriel tries to recruit people. I could probably use some help on this.
    Troll/Human relationship breakdown (re: adults, get distracted)
    Ferris vs Shula
    Ferris vs Tom? Could use some help here too, I guess.
    Tarani: Break
    Ferris on Mind Honey?

    Finale will depends on those.


    Also, Vriska telling Ferris the truth I did not expect. hmmmm...

    "They think I am so docile now. Now that I know the truth. Truth? They only tell me lies. Lies! Truth? Hybrid... Of course! Hybrid. This is the real future? This is the real path? I must... wait."

    Edit: Wait, Does he know about being Hybrid? dang it.
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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    I don't think he knows.

    I want to see more Ferris/Tarani convo as she's breaking.

    Also, I feel obligated to point ya'll to drama on Tarani's Formspring. All will be revealed...

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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    Oh, my god. I am so embarrassed.

    Also, the only logical finale I can imagine is going to be Tom vs Ferris. It's just how it's meant to be.
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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    Oberon sticks out for his moirail so he would wind up fighting somebody.

    And he has magical clothes thanks to Silken Wizardbeard thread.

    Fasioty. Fantasy+fasion.

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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    Dude we need to make like a chart to see who ends up against who.

    Oberon vs ______
    Gabriel vs ______
    Ferris vs Thomas
    Zombies vs Dylan
    Tarani vs Captor Twins

    And then we gotta write all these.
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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    ... Do you think Dylan's specibus would let him get away with punching the zombies as long as the blade is in his hand, even if the actual blade isn't switched up?
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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    I rhink Oberon will face the twins with Tarani, Gabe fights Aradia.

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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    Quote Originally Posted by Nexev View Post
    Gabe fights Aradia.
    Gabe versus his mom...

    Somehow, I see that as ending badly.

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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    Quote Originally Posted by Nexev View Post
    I rhink Oberon will face the twins with Tarani
    I can actually see something like: those three are waiting for the others, Tom shows up, tries to talk to Tarani, it doesn't work, the twins show up, they start fighting Tarani and Oberon, Tom lures Ferris somewhere else, and they have their own little showdown.

    Actually I can see Tom luring Ferris to a stage, and Ferris being completely confused because Tom is using one of those mirror tricks.
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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    I was playing with the idea of ferris wanting to destroy to ectobiology lab. What if he gave Gabe some zombies fro that task?
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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    That would be a decent way to get others involved.

    Just who would try to defend the place?
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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    Ferris getting confused by mirror tricks would be interesting, but would that work with the more manipulative ferris? I was thinking about maybe a mind honey burnout or overload. Which makes me think he'd have to try and pass some of the power to someone else to lighten the load.

    Eh, I need to focus on the human/troll relationship breakdown, then the ferris vs Shula thing.
    Quick question, would shula ever try to out and out kill ferris? What if Dylan or Carmen were in trouble?
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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    Quote Originally Posted by kmsumrall View Post
    Ferris getting confused by mirror tricks would be interesting, but would that work with the more manipulative ferris? I was thinking about maybe a mind honey burnout or overload. Which makes me think he'd have to try and pass some of the power to someone else to lighten the load.

    Eh, I need to focus on the human/troll relationship breakdown, then the ferris vs Shula thing.
    Quick question, would shula ever try to out and out kill ferris? What if Dylan or Carmen were in trouble?
    Shula? She'd kick his ass if given a good reason, but kill? maybe.
    Also, Dylan in trouble? He may not be a coolkid, but he's still a Strider. Freakin ninjas they are.
    also, I'm not sure if the tricks would work very long, it's just the point that Tom's bringing the fight to home court.

    also, What do you mean by the human/troll relationship breakdown?
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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    I see ferris using mental tricks like the ones he did on Gabe and Tarani on Shula. So it's more like making her believe they are in trouble.

    Anyways, ferris controls a bunch of humans. He is vandisling things. Making trouble. It might make more sense when I'm done writing, I still working on details. Mainly, ferris is hate-mongering with propaganda.
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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    I'm not Kawa, but I'm pretty sure she'd beat the ever-loving crap out of him if he tried that kind of stuff and he knows it.
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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    That's assuming he is even in the same room, and not playing eye trick stuff. I just need to sit down and write it, it would make more sense. To me at least. It's like, I have it all in my head, but if I started really explaining I'd end up writing it.

    I realize I often dont make sense.
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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    Go for it. It'll be easier for us to collaborate once it's done.
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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    This finale sounds like it's shaping up to be pretty awesome.

    ...I realize this is kind of late, but is there anyway Laurel could get involved in the fighting? She would probably jump at the chance to try and talk someone out of the conflict.

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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    Well right now, if I'm right, we're still building up to the finale, since the finale is when the boy finally loses.
    I'd give ideas as to how she could be involved, but we gotta see how Ferris' plan starts out.
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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    It would be interesting to see Gabe try to recruit other trolls. Maybe laurel could get in on that.
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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    The recruiting idea might work. If Rimbaum's up to it we could probably attempt a log.

    In the meantime I'll just wait to see more of Ferris's plan unfold.

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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    I'm up for it!

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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    Alright! I'll get on Pesterchum.

    If you want to do it now of course. Otherwise I can wait.

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    Re: The Population Series - Kawa's After The End AU

    On a completely different note, could somebody please post another question/answer on the formspring?
    I'm so embarrassed it's not even funny.
    Well, I guess you guys would find it funny.
    But still!
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