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    World Divers- a SBurb RP with a little something different

    World Divers

    This introduces an entirely new race into the SBurb cycle.

    I'd like a little help establishing it, but this is the gist of it:

    This race is known to the world at large as the Divers, and live a distance above the ground in floating homes known as Cells. Cells generally either float aimlessly or join together with large chains in cell cities. Occasionally Cells attach themselves to the land and cliffs, but none rest on the ground. They collect resources from their dangerously storm-tossed planet, covered with dangerous life-forms, in order to support their floating homes. Their social classes are controlled by what type of bio-mechanical parasite fuses into their bodies at birth, and they are granted various abilities (most straight out of science fiction) based on them. Their guardians are the Channels assigned to them, AIs designed to control their Cells and to help out the youth.


    Generally looks like this

    So does anyone want to help?

    I think this is okay so far.

    E: THE DIVER BIBLE, MK 1.0:



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    Re: World Divers- a SBurb RP with a little something different

    As a fellow species designer, I am glad to help! Here are some ideas I have:

    * The Divers usually live alone, although they are not antisocial the way that trolls are.
    * The Channels are strongly connected to the computer systems, and they stay with the Divers throughout the Medium.
    * Some of the dangerous lifeforms on the surface of the planet are as intelligent as the Divers, and try to trick the Divers into a variety of things - from unfair prices for resources to leading Divers into ambushes.
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    Re: World Divers- a SBurb RP with a little something different

    Sounds good to me. And how about...

    * For culture, Divers have a strong emphasis on riches and possessions, saying that he who dies with the most toys wins.
    * The creatures on the planet's surface are generally entirely organic, but the ones with the same intelligence use pirated machine parasites to enhance themselves.
    * As they rely on their body machines all their lives, the Divers fear the sea and the "Attractors" within, creatures which exude magnetic energy.
    * A sect of Divers lives on the planet itself and endeavor to return Diver culture to the old days when they had no computers (think the Quakers but malevolent), refusing to bond with it or using invasive surgery to remove it from their captives.

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    I like those ideas! Does the sect of Divers that lives without computers still have the bio-mechanical parasites? If not, maybe they would have an alliance with the "Attractors."

    For a name for the sect, how about the Biozealots?
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    Yeah, they have no parasites, and as such an alliance with the Attractors would work very well.

    Biozealots it is! And how about, due to their separation from a technology that had been bonding with the Divers for almost centuries, they've mutated and have strange diseases and warped body parts?

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    Re: World Divers- a SBurb RP with a little something different

    Quote Originally Posted by crash826 View Post
    Yeah, they have no parasites, and as such an alliance with the Attractors would work very well.

    Biozealots it is! And how about, due to their separation from a technology that had been bonding with the Divers for almost centuries, they've mutated and have strange diseases and warped body parts?
    Sounds good. Here's a drawing I made of the Diver from the first post as a biozealot:
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    Re: World Divers- a SBurb RP with a little something different

    Looks pretty good!

    ...I have no idea what I'm going to do with these guys.
    I need a couple of people to have a session, and we're the only two people here.

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    Re: World Divers- a SBurb RP with a little something different

    Quote Originally Posted by crash826 View Post
    Looks pretty good!

    ...I have no idea what I'm going to do with these guys.
    I need a couple of people to have a session, and we're the only two people here.
    We could put links in our signatures. I know the thread for the -3 got significantly more popular when I linked it in my sig.
    Also, I'm thinking of making my own Diver character. I'm assuming they dress the same as humans, but some things I'm not sure about:
    * Is the hair always dark blue or is it ever other colors?
    * Do the parasites always have the same colors and patterns?
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    Re: World Divers- a SBurb RP with a little something different

    The machines can have different patterns and colors, which distinguish class differences.
    (Red/Peon<Yellow/Peasant<Blue/Lower-Class<Orange/Normal<Purple/Well-Off<Green/Rich<Brown/Noble<Black/Royalty)
    The hair can be other colors, but they're generally dark.

    So yeah.

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    Re: World Divers- a SBurb RP with a little something different

    Looks nice.

    Maybe the types of abilities inherent in each social class should be brainstormed?
    Red Divers could have enhanced strength or endurance, since they're the peon class.
    Yellow Divers... A sort of radar? A danger sense, something along those lines. They can feel shifts in the air or ground, and get an advance warning concerning foes or friends.
    Blue Divers..hm....Maybe speed? They could act as couriers, with good reflexes and perhaps better at navigating the ground then other classes.
    The rest elude me.

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    Re: World Divers- a SBurb RP with a little something different

    I actually thought of something- what if the Divers are pseudo-Socialists?

    If that's stupid stupid dumb, the rest stands.
    I think the Reds have super-Endurance, able to give themselves adrenaline shots.
    Yellow gets sonar, spidey sense, whatever you want to call it, as well as a sort of HUD for their eyes.
    Blue gets reflexes, ability to move their butts quickly and find footholds and handholds, maybe enhanced eyesight and reflexes...
    Orange gets something like a calculator for people, able to see people and deduce various facts about them from sight? Enhanced intelligence?
    Purple gets... healing factor? (don't ask I don't know)
    Green gets a force field kind of thing.
    Brown gets the power to control the minds of others, maybe instruct their machines a little.
    Black gets the ultimate power- an ADMIN PASSWORD to all of the machines, allowing them to control and shut down others' powers.

    Powers can manifest in a minor way or a major way, or anywhere in between. Might have none, might have all of it.

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    Re: World Divers- a SBurb RP with a little something different

    Quote Originally Posted by crash826 View Post
    I actually thought of something- what if the Divers are pseudo-Socialists?

    If that's stupid stupid dumb, the rest stands.
    I think the Reds have super-Endurance, able to give themselves adrenaline shots.
    Yellow gets sonar, spidey sense, whatever you want to call it, as well as a sort of HUD for their eyes.
    Blue gets reflexes, ability to move their butts quickly and find footholds and handholds, maybe enhanced eyesight and reflexes...
    Orange gets something like a calculator for people, able to see people and deduce various facts about them from sight? Enhanced intelligence?
    Purple gets... healing factor? (don't ask I don't know)
    Green gets a force field kind of thing.
    Brown gets the power to control the minds of others, maybe instruct their machines a little.
    Black gets the ultimate power- an ADMIN PASSWORD to all of the machines, allowing them to control and shut down others' powers.

    Powers can manifest in a minor way or a major way, or anywhere in between. Might have none, might have all of it.
    Sounds good. What sort of aspects from socialism should we take?
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    Re: World Divers- a SBurb RP with a little something different

    The "social classes" are just based on who claws their way to the top the best. Also, people can have their stuff appropriated by the government at any time.

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    Quote Originally Posted by crash826 View Post
    The "social classes" are just based on who claws their way to the top the best. Also, people can have their stuff appropriated by the government at any time.
    Sure! I'd imagine the royalty would just hack into whoever's AI they were taking stuff from to get away with it, maybe in the night so as to not get caught.
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    Sounds good to me. The government is nigh-nonexistent and everything is based off who works hardest for it.

    So now, we must tackle that powerful and fearful subject- ROMANCE.

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    Re: World Divers- a SBurb RP with a little something different

    Okay.
    Romance.
    Maybe romance doesn't exist for the Divers - they contribute some sort of genetic material to the computers, and the computers combine it with other samples of genetic material to create new members of the species. Because of this, non-biozealot Divers have no relation with their children, and are linked with AI channels from birth.
    The biozealots don't have machines to serve as intermediaries, but their reproduction is equally non-romantic. They have designated places for the storage of genetic material, and biozealots can mix any two samples of genetic material. The biozealots actually raise the children, though, instead of leaving them to AI.
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    How about romance being possible, but extraneous (due to the aforementioned Channels and genetic material stuff) and viewed as distasteful? (they only have the one, regular romance type)

    I just like shipping is all <:P

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    Quote Originally Posted by crash826 View Post
    How about romance being possible, but extraneous (due to the aforementioned Channels and genetic material stuff) and viewed as distasteful? (they only have the one, regular romance type)

    I just like shipping is all <:P
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    Re: World Divers- a SBurb RP with a little something different

    I thought of something: Maybe a counter organization to the Biozealots.

    Perhaps the machine colonies took on a sentiency of their own, based on their owner's personality.
    That's what people think, anyways. There's just a good chance that the owner's soul" or mind lived on in the machine colonies past death.
    Can't think of a good name. The Ghasts?
    Ghast colonies search out shells and overwrite the Divers who find them to live on.
    As you can tell, Biozealots would hate their guts.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nust View Post
    I thought of something: Maybe a counter organization to the Biozealots.

    Perhaps the machine colonies took on a sentiency of their own, based on their owner's personality.
    That's what people think, anyways. There's just a good chance that the owner's soul" or mind lived on in the machine colonies past death.
    Can't think of a good name. The Ghasts?
    Ghast colonies search out shells and overwrite the Divers who find them to live on.
    As you can tell, Biozealots would hate their guts.
    Good point - the machines handle a lot of things, so it wouldn't be unlikely for some of them to start an independent society. Maybe a session could end up with some biozealots or ghasts in it? I think that would be interesting.
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    Re: World Divers- a SBurb RP with a little something different

    That sounds cool to me. Perhaps the government endorses the existence of Ghasts and seeks to use them to destroy the biozealots?
    And Ghastitude could be a good way to have an Aradia-esque "0kay with it" person who's died.

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    Re: World Divers- a SBurb RP with a little something different

    That would be a good idea!
    Also, here's my Diver character:


    Your name is ANGOM ALLOMAN.

    You like to EXPLORE. The world is full of WEIRD THINGS, and you want to discover them! Especially things that NO DIVER HAS SEEN BEFORE. However, the world is also full of SCARY THINGS, like BIOZEALOTS and ATTRACTORS and SMART BEASTS WITH PIRATED AI. You have nearly DIED on several occasions, and you really wish you had a YELLOW PARASITE so you would have a DANGER SENSE. Unfortunately, you don't, so you just RUN AS FAST AS YOU CAN. Your AI CHANNEL keeps telling you that you're going to get hurt from it someday, but you don't really listen.

    Your ORANGE PARASITE allows you to figure things out about people, which could get you into a POWERFUL POSITION, but you keep FORGETTING TO GO TO GOVERNMENT CONVENTIONS. Your AI CHANNEL usually berates you for this, but you can't help it. GOVERNMENT CONVENTIONS are so boring! You tell your AI CHANNEL to find EXPLORATION CONVENTIONS instead, but it doesn't listen to you.

    Your airpithet is adventuresAplenty and you are alWAYS prePARED for aNYthing.

    (What should we call the IM program and the Sburb variant?)
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    Re: World Divers- a SBurb RP with a little something different

    Swarp?

    Quakerschool?

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    SDrop?

    and how about Aerospeakers? With airpithet as the chumhandle/trolltag?

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    Re: World Divers- a SBurb RP with a little something different

    Quote Originally Posted by crash826 View Post
    SDrop?

    and how about Aerospeakers? With airpithet as the chumhandle/trolltag?
    Aerospeakers/airpithets sound good to me. For the chumroll/trollslum, maybe the airclique?

    As for SDrop/SWarp, I think I prefer SDrop because the "s" and "d" sounds don't really go together well, just like "s" and "b" (SBurb) or "s" and "g" (SGrub.)
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