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    Re: AdultStuck (Text AU. MEMO: Be up early)

    This memo was so great
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    Re: AdultStuck (Text AU. MEMO: Be up early)

    OK, that was above and beyond my expectations. I assumed it was going to be great, but I was certainly not expecting MOTHERFUCKING BRILLIANT.

    The creation myth part was just pure genius. As was John complaining of lesbian makeouts, and Rose's very promp reaction to it (I will be the first to say I would have said the same thing). This was just awesome all around and I believe this is officially my new favorite fanventure.

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    Re: AdultStuck (Text AU. MEMO: Be up early)

    I would make you one of those shiny alt+# hearts but I don't have the keys.

    So.

    (<)
    The spade is for when I have to mirror that.

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    Re: AdultStuck (Text AU. MEMO: Be up early)

    I just have to say, I love this asventure, and I NEVER read text adventures. You have all the characters down brilliantly, and plus you are making strong characters for the kids as well. I am definitely reading this, and it is good because with a text adventure it usually takes less time to update! (no pressure though, really)

    Keep it up!

    Anyways

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    Oh my gawd that was brilliant, I loved every bit of it. Hahaha you put in the outfit thing, I wasn't expecting that xDD I feel...I feel so special! :'D *tear*
    That gives me a brilliant idea for a little comic...I shall return later today with art! And also y'know, suggestions, like I should be doing. >u>
    Dentist appointment, ugh. *trudges off*
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    fuck it, i've cracked.

    >dT: Prepare to go get cT.
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    I love the offhand remark of 'Lord English says hi' like it's nothing special.

    Can I have a scene switch to a random character?

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    +1 lurker/reader. This is excellent! Nice job.

    (Though I've noticed that there are a looot of famous-dude human clonekids and not so many ladies. I've got some good ideas to rebalance that, when you're taking more characters. Is that happening in the second act?)
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    Re: AdultStuck (Text AU. MEMO: Be up early)

    First thing's first. Don't wanna doom the timeline!

    Dave: Catch IS messaging FE, use weird time shit to stop him mid conversation.

    (stable time loops are fun!)

    edit: also. AP: Dream of Honking Squiddles in Abraham Lincoln hats. Wake up screaming and in need of new pants.
    Last edited by Dranikos; 03-07-2011 at 11:53 AM.

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    Re: AdultStuck (Text AU. MEMO: Be up early)

    Time:Skip
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    Re: AdultStuck (Text AU. MEMO: Be up early)

    Good Memo? Best Memo.

    Now for something completely different.

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    Quote Originally Posted by karmicOnion View Post
    Now for something completely different.
    >Jade: brainstorm baby names and imagine what your kid is going to look like.

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    Re: AdultStuck (Text AU. MEMO: Be up early)

    You`d just have to over lap the two sprites hair, then give it eyes depending on gender or weather or not dave gives him glasses. Oh, and If ironic Sincerity has been raised as Dav`s bro, does he live with them?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Steel Dragon View Post
    Quote Originally Posted by karmicOnion View Post
    Now for something completely different.
    >Jade: brainstorm baby names and imagine what your kid is going to look like.
    Obviously Jade would name her kid after John. That is just the kind of adorable sentimentality she would be a huge sucker for.

    If the baby's a girl, either Kanaya or Feferi. Either one works.

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    Re: AdultStuck (Text AU. MEMO: Be up early)

    Why not name it after Rose?
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    Re: AdultStuck (Text AU. MEMO: Be up early)

    That is a perfectly valid question.

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    We shouldn't get ahead of ourselves. If we even meet this kid, we'll have a chance to name her/m. My command was more a circuitous way to make Jade fondly regard Dave.Hell, why don't I just:

    >Jade: Fondly regard husband

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    Sound good to me. Btw, hoe do you make a banner like the one you have for homeboiled. Getting it to link to it, i mean.
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    Re: AdultStuck (Text AU. MEMO: Be up early)

    I wouldn't mind seeing one of these Vriska training games.
    The first rule of Vriska Games is...VRISKA GAMES ARE FUCKING DIFFICULT.
    The second rule of Vriska Games is... VRISKA GAMES ARE REALLY FUCKING DIFFICULT.
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    Re: AdultStuck (Text AU. MEMO: Be up early)

    Quote Originally Posted by Steel Dragon View Post
    We shouldn't get ahead of ourselves. If we even meet this kid, we'll have a chance to name her/m. My command was more a circuitous way to make Jade fondly regard Dave.Hell, why don't I just:

    >Jade: Fondly regard husband
    I really want to see a Jaderezi catfight.

    The pattern seems to be that ALL of the adults still have a thing for their past crushes, whether they be married or not. If Jade does something that makes Terezi think she no longer "deserves" Dave... And then Karkat gets jealous... Dohoho...

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    meh, that would kinda bug me.
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    Re: AdultStuck (Text AU. MEMO: Be up early)

    The fact that I ship JadeKarkat probably influences my imaginings a great deal. :U

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    Quote Originally Posted by wilySubversionist View Post
    +1 lurker/reader. This is excellent! Nice job.

    (Though I've noticed that there are a looot of famous-dude human clonekids and not so many ladies. I've got some good ideas to rebalance that, when you're taking more characters. Is that happening in the second act?)
    Sure. GALLIFREY NEEDS WOMEN.

    And probably, though I will only introduce a couple or so new ones in that Act. Still, give me a female clonekid and they'll be a helluva a lot more likely to appear.

    We shouldn't get ahead of ourselves. If we even meet this kid, we'll have a chance to name her/m.
    This may be happening sooner than you think.

    And one more time than you think.
    You`d just have to over lap the two sprites hair, then give it eyes depending on gender or weather or not dave gives him glasses. Oh, and If ironic Sincerity has been raised as Dav`s bro, does he live with them?
    He actually does, yes.

    This is frowned upon by the trolls, but fuck the trolls.

    Dave may still not be a huge fan of them, friends or not.

    I really want to see a Jaderezi catfight.

    The pattern seems to be that ALL of the adults still have a thing for their past crushes, whether they be married or not. If Jade does something that makes Terezi think she no longer "deserves" Dave... And then Karkat gets jealous... Dohoho...
    To be fair, that "pattern" has only been shown so far with the Vriska-John-Rose-Kanaya love...square. The other four haven't really shown any of that at this time.

    Also, Aradia and Sollux are both like combo breakers.

    edit: also. AP: Dream of Honking Squiddles in Abraham Lincoln hats. Wake up screaming and in need of new pants.
    You have no idea how happy I am that someone gave this command.

    Anyway, I'm going to try and come up with a recap today (exciting, I know) by request before we move onto THAT NIGHT.

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    Wait so a kid, who lives with Family who are having a baby? If I know my cliche's he'll be jealous due to lack of attention. But knowing that he's a bro clone, he's too cool for that.

    Oh, and if we name the Troll/Human Hybrid, it's gotta be called Truman.
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    Re: AdultStuck (Text AU. MEMO: Be up early)

    Quote Originally Posted by The NL Penguin View Post
    Wait so a kid, who lives with Family who are having a baby? If I know my cliche's he'll be jealous due to lack of attention. But knowing that he's a bro clone, he's too cool for that.

    Oh, and if we name the Troll/Human Hybrid, it's gotta be called Truman.
    Clone Harry Truman will be so pissed.

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