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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

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    Hey guys, I brought poetry! If the trolls had been allowed to enter our universe and rule over us as gods...
    Well. We'd have gotten some interesting mythology.


    Twelve Gods



    (Inspired by something I read quite a while ago that had this same basic concept but with the four kids, and I can't remember who wrote it otherwise I would totally give them credit.)
    I love this! It brings to mind something almost Norse-like. Very old, very dark and very fickle gods.

    Also, your description of God!Gamzee reminded me a lot of The Comedian from Watchmen.
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    Twelve Gods
    Wow.
    That's freaking beautiful, especially Feferi's and Karkat's verses. Also Kanaya's. And Sollux's. But all of them really.

    (also, Alana, Indigo Terezi is pretty much the best thing ever.)
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    @Lucid Seraph- Things just can't get any better for the kids can it?

    @Nox- Poor Rose

    @Tenebrais- I kinda feel happy for Scratch in that one.

    @Alana- So, you basically turned Karkat into a laughing version of Judge Dredd, and Terezi into a crazy clown yandere. Awesome

    @Red Pen- They're all great, but Karkat's poem is the best of the bunch.

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    @Red Pen: Beautiful. F***ing beautiful. You need to submit these to a fantasy rag or something.
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    Quote Originally Posted by Red Pen View Post
    Hey guys, I brought poetry! If the trolls had been allowed to enter our universe and rule over us as gods...
    Well. We'd have gotten some interesting mythology.


    Twelve Gods



    (Inspired by something I read quite a while ago that had this same basic concept but with the four kids, and I can't remember who wrote it otherwise I would totally give them credit. I think it was titled "Pantheon"?)
    That was brilliant, please, write more.
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    @Red Pen: oh my god i love that so much why are you so awesomeeeeee.

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    @Tenebrais: Oh man, please tell me Shagghi is Gamzee's ancestor's name. That is the best thing.
    @Alana: I love me some red!Rose and I am totally excited to see her in this. Hope you come up with more soon!
    @Red Pen: Wow. That was quite excellent.

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    I wish I could dance to the music in my head too, Scratch. Oh how I wish.

    Does he learn how to dance to it once he realizes he's Cal?
    I am now imagining Doc Scratch breakdancing in baggy pants and a backward cap, 80's boombox blasting garage house in the background. It is glorious.

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    @ Lantadyme YES. Yes yes yes yes yes. Yes. that's all there is to say on the matter.

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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    Quote Originally Posted by lantadyme View Post
    @Tenebrais: Oh man, please tell me Shagghi is Gamzee's ancestor's name. That is the best thing.
    @Alana: I love me some red!Rose and I am totally excited to see her in this. Hope you come up with more soon!
    @Red Pen: Wow. That was quite excellent.

    Quote Originally Posted by Mirdan View Post
    I wish I could dance to the music in my head too, Scratch. Oh how I wish.

    Does he learn how to dance to it once he realizes he's Cal?
    I am now imagining Doc Scratch breakdancing in baggy pants and a backward cap, 80's boombox blasting garage house in the background. It is glorious.
    No boombox. Aradia is beatboxing.
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    Oh gosh. Chiming in with everyone else about that awesome poem. IT IS AWESOME.

    Quote Originally Posted by battlerek View Post
    @Alana- So, you basically turned Karkat into a laughing version of Judge Dredd, and Terezi into a crazy clown yandere. Awesome
    yep pretty much C: aren't they just the cutest?
    Quote Originally Posted by ceruleanTresses View Post
    (also, Alana, Indigo Terezi is pretty much the best thing ever.)
    thank you
    Quote Originally Posted by lantadyme View Post
    @Alana: I love me some red!Rose and I am totally excited to see her in this. Hope you come up with more soon!
    That is because she is the best C: and I don't think I'm gonna run out of steam anytime sooooooon~

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    @ alana: your Jade is hilarious, specifically:

    GG: OH MY GOD DAD IS GOING TO KILL ME
    GG: YOU KILLED ME JOHN
    GG: YOU ARE WHAT CAUSED THE DEATH I AM ABOUT TO HAVE
    @ Red Pen: Some of the rhymes were sketchy (Sollux caught my eye) but considering how hard it is to rhyme in English, I'll repeat what everyone else has said: nifty!

    @ lantadyme's dancing scratch: yes. hell yes.

    e: your name is hard to spell : n
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    @Seraph: Glad you approve, my good sir. /salutes
    @Decker: I bet Aradia is just awesome enough to beatbox garage house on the fly, too. That has to something to watch. Dave is all kinds of wicked jealous over it.

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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    It has many variations my classmates both spell it with two n's.
    @Alana Please continue the awesomeness
    @Red Pen continue as well.
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    Okay, so. Way behind in reading so I'm being a jackass who doesn't comment enough on all the good things going on, but I've got this new thing here (Warning, this is BEEFY):

    Walking Far from Home
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    A/N
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    Quote Originally Posted by wilySubversionist View Post
    Walking Far from Home
    (ii)



    A/N
    Not at all, I feel like you got Eridan's voice just right. He's just as petulant and annoying and pitiful as he should be. I loved the way you bookened the chapter with the "surgeon's smile" line, that was beautiful.
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    Okay, sorry for the delay on this but well, I had a hard time with it. Sorry if it's terrible; but it refuses to come out the way I want so...


    What It Takes
    Chapter 4


    A/N
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    @wilySubversionist: don't worry, I think your Eridan beats the hell out of mine, which probably isn't saying much, but I thought it was good

    @ProspitDreamer: you will cease this attempt to alter my shipping charts immediately
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    Another Crew



    A/N

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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

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    Was... was that Vriska?
    And is there any chance you'll be writing more of this?

    Lots more?

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    Quote Originally Posted by battlerek View Post
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    Was... was that Vriska?
    And is there any chance you'll be writing more of this?

    Lots more?
    Yep, Vriska Sleuth.

    I will now :3

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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    Wait. Wait. Wait.

    Wait.



    Awwwwesoooome.
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    This is my favourite thing.
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    ALL OF THIS

    I WANT MOOOOOORE!
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    Quote Originally Posted by PingZing View Post
    Not at all, I feel like you got Eridan's voice just right. He's just as petulant and annoying and pitiful as he should be. I loved the way you bookened the chapter with the "surgeon's smile" line, that was beautiful.
    Oh, thank you! I was worried I was going to be too sympathetic and ruin his natural awfulness.

    Quote Originally Posted by anonymousComrade View Post
    @wilySubversionist: don't worry, I think your Eridan beats the hell out of mine, which probably isn't saying much, but I thought it was good
    Pfft. Thank you, but nuts to your self-deprication. I liked Crossing Over a lot, and never thought there were any problems with your Eridan.

    @ProspitDreamer: That was fantastic, and I really like how the different pairs deal with the language barrier, really nails their differences.
    "'Cause these humans treat humans like humans treat hogs
    They get used up, coughed up, and fried in a pan
    But I wasn't born to die like a dog,
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