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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    @Raikonos: YAY! FANTASTIC! One minor gripe: I think the last transition isn't as clear as it could be (ie, the parallels between the kids and their previous incarnations aren't quite as strong as they should be) but still. SO. COOOOOOOL.

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    A Blessing

    So I was taking the AP English Literature test the other day, and while working through the multiple choice section, I came across an interesting piece of writing. I immediately recognized it as having been plagiarized from an old book of Alternian poetry I once read and quickly took note of the title and author so I could look it up when I returned home. While I was unable to locate the book I found the original poem in, I luckily managed to remember most of it. I have restored it to its former glory here for your reading pleasure.

    A Blessing
    by /James Wright/ Equius Zahhak

    Just off the Highway to /Rochester, Minnesota/ Hiveblock 7492
    Twilight bounds softly forth on the grass.
    And the eyes of those two /Indian ponies/ Alternian musclebeasts
    Darken with kindness.
    They have come gladly out of the willows
    To welcome my /friend/ moirall and me.
    We step over the barbed wire into the pasture
    Where they have been grazing all day, alone.
    They ripple /tensely/ STRONGLY, they can hardly contain their happiness
    That we have come.
    They bow shyly as wet /swans/ winged waterbeasts. They /love/ are in flushed romance with each other.
    There is no loneliness like theirs.
    At /home/ hive once more,
    They begin munching the young tufts of spring in the darkness.
    I would like to hold the slenderer one in my STRONG arms,
    For she has walked over to me
    And nuzzled my left hand.
    She is black and white,
    Her mane falls wild on her forehead,
    And the light breeze moves me to caress her long ear
    That is delicate as the skin over a /girl's/ female troll’s wrist.
    Suddenly I realize
    That if I stepped out of my body I would break
    Into /blossom/ an e%tremely intense sweat.

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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    Quote Originally Posted by lucidSeraph View Post
    @Raikonos: YAY! FANTASTIC! One minor gripe: I think the last transition isn't as clear as it could be (ie, the parallels between the kids and their previous incarnations aren't quite as strong as they should be) but still. SO. COOOOOOOL.
    I did that whole succession of pesterlogs at the beginning to establish that /// means the Scratch, and I had Saiivux's line in the middle to smooth the transition, but looking back on it it does kind of happen pretty quickly. Maybe I should have focused on the trolls as well?

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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    @ArmsAreLoud: I am tripping over all the missing close quotes in this, c'mon! You can clearly format better than this.

    @PingZing: Thought it was funny how Tarfus was internally lecturing Lucida about turning her back considering how things turned out.
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    Well, I figured based on your sentence structure and the like, and you were consistent with quirks, and there was never a point where I wasn't able to follow Karkat's narrative, so I'd say you did format well! Except the quote marks. They were just missing. I'm sure you can clear them up from there!
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    Anything that touches the BBCode is what I have a problem with. The BBCode makes me think "OK yeah sentence over" and I forget the quote marks.

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    Re: A Blessing

    i approve of this.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Coryn Sken View Post
    i approve of this.
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    I'm working on stuff but until I get something done here's a quick Pokemon thing. Because I named all my Pokemon in White after HS characters (except for Kamina, but he's still Bro in my heart), and this occurrence was just too funny to pass up.

    Unovastuck: Karkat Vs. Throh and Sawk




    EDIT: Pfft, I totally forgot about the Ka-mina --> Leslie Nielsen filter. Oh well.
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    Re: A Blessing



    Also, I'm going to merge this with the existing fanfiction thread. I thought about Lyric Rewrites but since it's a poem and not a song it'll go with the non-musical writings.


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    Re: A Blessing

    Quote Originally Posted by Blueberry View Post
    Agree'd.
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    AAAAAAAAAA SOMEONE MADE FANART OF RE: CHAMPION

    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA OF ALL THIS BLIND AMBITION MADE FANFIC RECS

    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA THERE'S A NEW CHAPTER OF RE: CHAMPION



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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    remember that story i did one time that was about rebels and karkat was in it.

    i redid it and this is the first chapter.

    Blood Runs Deep
    Act I: Uprising
    Chapter 1: Riots in the Street

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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    I approve of Karkat-Ancestor fics. More would be excellent.

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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    re:champion, hot blooded, blood runs deep
    i feel like there's some sort of pattern to all the series i'm paying attention to right now.

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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    Hey, you know that crossover thing that I really should be twice as far into writing as I actually am?

    Yeah, still doing that.

    New chapter up. It's embarrassingly short, but it's up.

    Chapter 13. You might as well read it. It'll take about 2 minutes of your time to do so, and Pickle Inspector is in it, which is always a plus.
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    DEAR FANFIC THREADERS:

    I am on a quest to sell someone on fanfic. I have already given him a few req's, but I require... moar.

    Things:

    - Not pairing-centric in any way, shape, or form. Keep it gen.
    - Excellent writing style = a must. The prose has to *sing*
    - No crossovers yet (I'll save that for later?)
    - Bonus points for either 1. HUMOR or 2. Really interesting explorations of character/canon concepts. Also 3. Dualscar / other ancestor shenanigans (No Karkancestor plz, there's 9 billion fics of him)

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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    Sounds like you need to steer him the hell away from everything I've ever written, then
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    @ lucidSeraph: It is ridiculously hard to think of really good stories that are not shippy or a crossover. Maybe some of Sionnan's Strider fics? Those are the only things that come to mind off the top of my head. Unfortunately, I don't read that many ancestor fics, so I dunno of anything there. Oh, and RedPen's Unhinged! That was really good as well, and not particularly shippy. Um. That's really all I can think of.

    EDIT: And omg guys where are all these amazing HS/Harry Potter crossovers coming from on AO3, what I don't even.
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    Man, I have all these IDEAS and PLOTS swimming in my head stemming from the whole "highbloods have longer lifespans" reveal. But, exams. I should have something up in a few days.

    (this is sadly irrelevant to lucidSeraph's request for recs because a. the stories I have in mind all have to do with the implications of lifespan discrepancies on trollmance, and b. I'm a terrible writer with a hideous case of Purple Prose. That said, I am in support of things along those lines getting written/discovered, and I'll keep an eye out.)
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    Sporkaganza: Still waiting to be poked about sprites. =P Is that still a thing you want, or are you not planning on it any more?

    anonymousComrade: Wh00, epic wartime heroics =3. Also, end it how you want, and if you have to slap an AU tag on it I don't care, it will be cool. XD

    PingZing: I can't wait for Karkatcestor and Solluxcestor frenemy interaction. =D
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    Quote Originally Posted by catastrophicGenesis View Post
    Sporkaganza: Still waiting to be poked about sprites. =P Is that still a thing you want, or are you not planning on it any more?

    anonymousComrade: Wh00, epic wartime heroics =3. Also, end it how you want, and if you have to slap an AU tag on it I don't care, it will be cool. XD

    PingZing: I can't wait for Karkatcestor and Solluxcestor frenemy interaction. =D
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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    Why did I even have this silly idea I have no idea...

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    Re: MSPA Fanfiction VI: Trashy Rainbow Drinker Fanfiction

    @lucidSeraph: a_mere_trifle's 'Inheritance' (Link) immediately springs to mind, as does liquidCitrus' 'four titles' (Link). I really wanna rec Red Pen's 'And We're Alive' (Link), but it's tagged Jade/Dave... I also want to rec SushiDatabase's 'Shenanigans' (Link), which is a nice exploration of the doomed timeline that spawned Davepsrite and dream!Rose, but it's been so long since I've read it that I can't be 100% certain it's a) non-shippy and b) up to your friend's standards.

    Well, now that I've done that, I can feel slightly less guilty *coughblatantliescough* about using my first post for requests...

    Soldiering on, there's a few plot bunnies that have been hopping around my head that I want to pawn off onto you poor saps because I'm a terrible writer and they won't leave me alone. Chances are someone's already written something along the same lines and I just can't find it, so if anyone is able to point me to a fic that will take any of the following bunnies and wrangle their necks for all they're worth, I'd be very much obliged.

    Ok, I just know someone, somewhere has already done this, but...

    Sourcetorn.


    Aaaaand musings on what might happen Post-Sburb if the world gets reset but the kids retain their powers and doomed timelines and such are still in effect.

    Will the Real Alpha Dave Please Stand Up.
    (Yes I realize the legal system doesn't work like that.)

    So yeah, if anyone can take these pesky bunnies off my hands I will shower them in net cookies and praise. Or I may simply tacklehug them at terminal velocity, whichever seems appropriate at the time.

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