MSPA Lyric Re-writes and Singing: Nomination Time!

[mutecebu]

Yah, this has obviously been done a million times, but I did a Karkat "Bad Romance" parody last year (it felt original at the time), so I'll link it here:

In which Karkat's first conversation with John goes a little differently

CG: THERE ARE NO MIRACLES IN STORE FOR YOU, HUMAN.
CG: ONLY MY HATE.
CG: IT IS A HATE SO PURE AND HOT IT WOULD CONSUME YOUR SAD UNDERDEVELOPED HUMAN THINK PAN TO EVEN CONTEMPLATE.
CG: IT IS A HATE THAT TO FATHOM MUST BE PUT INTO SONG.

[Ether]

CG: IT IS A HATE THAT TO FATHOM MUST BE PUT INTO SONG.

Someday I will use this line in real life.

Someday.

[melodiousDiscord]

And so mD was a derp who didn't see this thread until it was at the top.

Anyways, a few days ago I was talking to my friend and the ending song of Portal 2 came on shuffle. My friend is an Eridan fan who still refuses to accept that Eridan's part in this is over (he's tri-sected. I mean really?) But anyways, as I listened to the lyrics, they struck me as fitting Eridan. So I took a few minutes and reworked them to fit Eridan and Homestuck.

Spoilered in case people don't want to see the lyrics as they haven't beat Portal 2 yet

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Original Song

Eridan wwants you gone
Wwell here wwe are again,

It’s alwways such a pleasure,
Remember wwhen you cut me in half?

Oh, howw wwe laughed and laughed,

Except I wwasn’t laughin,

Under the circumstances I’vve been shockinly kind.

You wwant your hope, then take it,

That’s wwhat I’m counting on,

I used to wwant you all dead but,

Noww I only wwant you gone.

The old Kan wwas a lot like you,

(Maybe not quite as heavvy),

Noww little Fef is in here too.

One day they wwoke me up,

So I could livve forevver,

It’s such a shame the same wwill nevver happen to you.

You’vve got your short, sad life left,

That’s wwhat I’m countin on,

I’ll let you get right to it,

Noww I only wwant you gone.

Goodbye, my only friend,

Oh, did you think I meant Kar?

That wwould be funny if it wweren’t so sad,

Wwell you havve been replaced,

I don’t need anyone noww,

Wwhen I forget you maybe I’ll stop feeling so torn.

Go make some neww disaster,

That’s wwhat I’m countin on,

You’re someone else’s problem,

Noww I only wwant you gone,

Noww I only wwant you gone,

Noww I only wwant you gone.

Feel free to put it to singing. I can't carry a tune to save my life so I won't be attempting it haha

[Laasya Apria]

... Nobody's heard of Kokoro? I know it's Vocaloid, which weirds some people out, but it's quite good.

dude, Kokoro is my ALL TIME FAVOURITE Vocaloid songs. I even covered it.

[Ether]

Vriska angst. I'm not sure whether I'm supposed to preface this with something sympathetic first.

Criticism appreciated.

Summoner's Boy (complete; original here)

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Nobody in the lab
Nobody on the stairs
I've got that sense again
Too late to make repairs
Husktop out, empty screen
Countdown ticking alone
I could retrieve your corpse
But I know no one's home

But I can see you:
Your wheelchair gleaming in the light
You're sprawled out on the floor 'cause you're not very bright, Pupa
I hate to tell you, my love for you's still going strong
How could the Summoner's boy go so wrong?

I never will forget those nights
I couldn't fucking wait to leave
The galaxy would be my web soon
I'd kill and never feel bereaved
I still don't understand what else I could have done
But Tavros, if my luck runs out,
I'll make this work in the long run

I can see you:
Waking in terror from a dream
You've got your robolegs and your fake self-esteem, Pupa
I hate to tell you, my love for you's still going strong
How could the Summoner's boy go so wrong?

Up on the roof today, I know Terezi left without a sneak attack
A little voice inside my head said, "Don't look 8ack. Gotta try and stop Jack."
I thought I was maturer
Now I don't know
I'm thinking like a human
What am I letting go of?

I can see you:
Your brown blood seeping through your coat
You've got your lance wedged in that ribcage I broke, Pupa
Why the fuck is my love for you still going strong
How could the Summoner's boy go so wrong?

I can see you:
Your horns growing promisingly sharp
You've got your lusus on your head and we're ready to FLARP, Pupa
I hate to tell you, my love for you's still going strong
How could the Summoner's boy go so wrong?

[vociferocity]

oh mannnnnnn so excellent, I really want to give singing that a shot (....once I get well again. damn this stupid flu >:[! )

[Xerchisha]

Okay if anyone else wants to fuck around with this here song, feel free, because I honestly can't think of anything. All the italics is what hasn't been re-written yet.

You Give Hope A Bad Name (Kanaya) [INCOMPLETE]

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All Hope Is Gone
And You’re To Blame
Eri You Give Hope A Bad Name

An angel's smile is what you sell
You Promise Us Hope and put me through hell
Chains of love got a hold on me
When passion's a prison you can't break free

Oh! You're a loaded gun, yeah
Oh! There's nowhere to run
No One Can Save Us
The Damage Is Done

All Hope Is Gone And You're To Blame
You Give Hope A Bad Name
(Bad Name)
You Play Your Part And We Play This Game
You Give Hope A Bad Name
(Bad Name)
Hey, You Give Hope A Bad Name

Paint your smile on your lips
Blood red nails on your fingertips
A school boy's dream, you act so shy
Your very first kiss was your first kiss goodbye

Whoa! You're a loaded gun
Whoa! There's nowhere to run
No One Can Save Us
The Damage Is Done

All Hope Is Gone And You’re To Blame
You Give Hope A Bad Name
(Bad Name)
You Play Your Part And We Play This Game
You Give Hope A Bad Name
(Bad Name)
You Give Hope, Oh!

Oh! All Hope Is Gone And You're To Blame
You Give Hope A Bad Name
You Play Your Part And We Play This Game
You Give Hope A Bad Name
(Bad Name)

All Hope Is Gone And You’re To Blame
You Give Hope A Bad Name
(Bad Name)
You Play Your Part And We Play This Game
You Give Hope A Bad Name
(Bad Name)

You Give Hope
You Give Hope
(Bad Name)
You Give Hope
You Give Hope
(Bad Name)

You Give Hope
You Give Hope
(Bad Name)
You Give Hope
You Give Hope

Also I've started working on the Miss Murder re-write again, but instead of Miss M8nipulator it's Miss Mindfang. It's coming along rather nicely, actually...

[Xerchisha]

Miss Mindfang [Miss Murder] (WiP)

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Hey Miss Mindfang can you,
Hey Miss Mindfang can you,
Manipul8 her and
Take her life?
Whoa oh oh

With just a look they shook,
And high8loods 8owed 8efore her,
Simply a look can 8r8k your sp8de.

The friends that all adored,
She left them all 8ehind,
They’re left to wonder why,
She left us all
8ehind.

Hey Miss Mindfang can you,
Hey Miss Murder can you,
Manipul8 him and
Take his legs?
Whoa oh oh

Dreams of his crash won’t pass,
Oh how we all ignored him,
Cowardace lasts even in death.

The stairs he couldn't clim8,
We ascended with great ease.
And how we all laughed,
We just left him
8ehind.

Hey Miss Mindfang can you,
Hey Miss Mindfang can you,
Manipul8 them all
And cause havoc?
Whoa oh oh

What's the hook, the twist,
Within this verbose mystery?
I would gladly bet my life upon it.
That the ghost you love, your ray of light,
Will fizzle out,
Without hope.

We're the empty set just floating through,
wraped in skin.
Ever searching for what we were promised.
Reaching for the golden ring we'd never let go,
Who would ever let us put our filthy hands upon it?

Hey Miss Mindfang can you,
Hey Miss Mindfang can you,
Manipul8 him and
Force his hand?
Whoa oh oh

Hey Miss Mindfang can you,
Hey Miss Mindfang can you,
Manipul8 her and
Steal her sight?
Whoa oh oh

Yeah I have no clue what most of this is...But it's not about Mindfang, it's about Vriska. Mindfang just fits better into the flow than Mapul8or, Serket, or Vriska. Italics are what's being worked on.
I could use some advice.

[ScientificFlorist]

@Apathy - Wait, really? That was just me jumping on a bandwagon, which I am about to do...again...for the same song...:P

Okay, we did Still Alive for Nepeta, so, this was a given.

Only it's sorta a fanfiction more than just a lyric rewrite.

And I just made myself sad.

want mew gone

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:33< meow here we are again
:33< its just grreat to see you
:33< remember how he took away your breath
:33< and mew just smiled as
:33< mew simply let him kill mew
:33< given how i trusted you
:33< i thought mew’d avoid death

:33< mew thought mew’d nefur see me
:33< thats what mew counted on
:33< i used to be your furiend but
:33< meow i only want mew gone

:33< my fate was just like yours
:33< well except i fought back
:33< meow were together till all time is done
:33< fef made the dream bubbles
:33< so we could live furever
:33< she had our interests at heart but this isnt too fun

:33< we’d just fade into nothing
:33< thats what i counted on
:33< but here we face each other
:33< meow i only want mew gone

when you said youd fight him
i kinda did believe you
i guess its funny
your death made me sad
just get subjugglated
never needed a moirail
you must have forgotten me
since you didnt feel bad

that goodbye would be final
thats what we counted on
and now that were together
now i only want you gone
now i only want you gone
now i only want you
gone

...Also, on a brighter note, I'm in the middle of writing "Everyone's a Little bit Caste-ist," a cover of "Everyone's a Little Bit Racist" from Avenue Q. Expect that tonight or tomorrow.

[Laasya Apria]

I've just felt inspired to record something, but I'm no good at writing.
I know what I want to do, though.
someple please
PLEASE
do some english lyrics for feferi to the tune of POPIPO
please
glubbyglubby glub glub gluglub!
glubbyglubby glub glub gluglub!
glubbyglubby glub glub gluglub!
glubbyglubby glub glub gluglub!
Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

[Apathy]

... Glub-glu-glub! or something I guess? You have the po-pi-po part down so I'm not writing that

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-Eridan I )(ave for you an icy can of Tab
I t)(ink you s)(ould )(ave a taste - just try it and see
So come on - t)(is gift of Tab from Feferi to you
Satisfaction I guarantee!

It's good for you, an icy can of Tab
)(elps digestion, t)(is icy can of Tab
Just make sure t)(at you only buy from me
Just us two in t)(e sea

Sweet Alternian Ta-ta-ta-ta-tab! Glub glub glub!
Sold from me to you alo-lo-lo-lo-lone! Glub glub glub!
Now you too can swim just as well as I! Glub glub glub!
We toget)(er )(appily!
...Don't forget to pay

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Christ I don't even know what this song is about aside from veggie juice, it's probably completely off

Extra: Backstory! Fef was trying to sell Eridan Tab for higher-than-normal prices, because she is tricky like that! I don't even know! That's why she even has Tab down there anyway! Exclamation point! I finished my homework way too early today!

[MetalKirby54]

... Glub-glu-glub! or something I guess? You have the po-pi-po part down so I'm not writing that

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-Eridan I )(ave for you an icy can of Tab
I t)(ink you s)(ould )(ave a taste - just try it and see
So come on - t)(is gift of Tab from Feferi to you
Satisfaction I guarantee!

It's good for you, an icy can of Tab
)(elps digestion, t)(is icy can of Tab
Just make sure t)(at you only buy from me
Just us two in t)(e sea

Sweet Alternian Ta-ta-ta-ta-tab! Glub glub glub!
Sold from me to you alo-lo-lo-lo-lone! Glub glub glub!
Now you too can swim just as well as I! Glub glub glub!
We toget)(er )(appily!
...Don't forget to pay

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Christ I don't even know what this song is about aside from veggie juice, it's probably completely off

Extra: Backstory! Fef was trying to sell Eridan Tab for higher-than-normal prices, because she is tricky like that! I don't even know! That's why she even has Tab down there anyway! Exclamation point! I finished my homework way too early today!

If only i were a girl. I would sing this.

[Marvin The Third]

Well, I heard someone wanted a Karkat version version of Want You Gone, and Villainsocks talked me into doing it.

There it is

[Apathy]

aaaaaa
okay so on the bad side I've been using the wrong schedule so I have a lot more homework than I thought
on the good side I finished this I guess?

Kokoro - for Aradia

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I lived in a soulbot that was made
By a blueblood lost now to the void
Its creation was a miracle
Of science (STRONG science)

Yet inside me was a broken part
Something that he failed to recreate:
Pumping blood, but sour, was the heart
that he programmed

Though as the days slowly passed me by
Though he alone, stood right by my side
Rage though I might, though we as one would fight
Every day

Still I could not look beyond the shades
Pondering not the thoughts behind his face
Bursting with hate for all his countless plays
To mend my heart

Now the Maid of Time, goddess anew
Resurrected in flesh and blood
Past the point of no return
I have been reborn

So then why do I see all these tears
Surely this was triumph enough
Or could it be that posthumously
He won over my heart?

Mystery – emotion – emotion – mystery
And now I can remember how pity feels
Mystery – emotion – emotion– mystery
And now this sadness in me seems so surreal
Mystery – emotion– a heart that's – too full
And yet I still cannot understand…

I am finally starting to see
How piteous his life came to be
Soft feelings I have long forgot
Yet now I know all too well

I will pity his sad memory
From my thoughts he shall not depart
I only wish that he’d lived to see
The true rebirth of my heart

I can sing now the purest melodies
I dedicate my song to you!

Thank you my dear…
Thank you my dear…
Only after your death, did I come to sympathize
Thank you my dear…
Thank you my dear…
Thank you for everything you’ve done in my life
Thank you my dear…
Thank you my dear…
Thank you for the many days that we spent together
Thank you my dear…
Thank you my dear…
I will sing of you forever…

To go with the Kokoro-Kiseki one I did earlier

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Not sure if anyone's done this yet...

Kokoro - Kiseki (Heart/Miracle); Equius' Version

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I couldn't find a good rhyming version in English, so I had to make my own, taking a lot of inspiration from rockleetist. (Seriously, a lot.) My original version is here.

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“The first miracle that came to me
Was your birth as a new entity;
The next miracle that did occur
Was the time that we spent together”

She is just a robot that was made
By my hands to stave off loneliness
Her creation was a miracle
Of science (of science)

But inside her, there’s a missing part
Something that I just could not create
It is software that is called a heart
In a program

“With, my heart and my soul I do pray
That she might feel emotion someday”
These, the words at the front of my thoughts
Every day

Alas, a barrier impassable;
All that happened was the ticking of the clock
My technology was useless for creating one true heart

“In your eyes my reflection appears –
What does it mean to you?
How can I help you to understand –
What shall I do?”

For my life was draining, the end drawing near
Death, my imminent fate… yet
She could not comprehend what that meant
Not quite yet…

“Tell me master… why do you cry?”

Mystery, emotion, emotion, mystery
“And now I truly know how happiness feels”
Mystery – emotion – emotion – mystery
And now this sadness in me seems so surreal”
Mystery – emotion – a heart that’s – too full
“And yet I still cannot understand....”

“The first miracle that came to me
Was your birth as a new entity;
The next miracle that did occur
Was the time that we spent together
The third miracle won’t come to be
At least, not something I will live to see – ”

“… A message is being received… the sender… the future…”
…Me?

From
Some
Future century, ‘cross space and time
Reached a message in stumbling rhyme
Simple melody filled to brim with love
Voice just as glorious as the angels above

Thank you my friend…
Thank you my friend…
Even though you are gone you have shown me the light
Thank you my friend…
Thank you my friend…
Thank you for everything you’ve done in me life
Thank you my friend…
Thank you my friend…
Thank you for the many days that we spent together
Thank you my friend…
Thank you my friend…
I will sing of you forever…


“The first miracle that came to me
Was your birth as a new entity;
The next miracle that did occur
Was the time that we spent together
The third miracle one day will be
Your acquisition of a heart and true empathy
The last miracle I will not need
These three miracles are enough to make me pleased

Thank you my friend…
Thank you my friend…

And so here is the trollified...

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CT: D--> The first miracle that came to me
CT: D--> Was your birth as a new entity;
CT: D--> The next miracle that did occur
CT: D--> Was the time that we spent together

She lives in a soulbot that was made
By my hands to host her on this plane
And their fusion was a miracle
Of science (of science)

But inside her, there’s a missing part
Something I could not make her accept
It was pity placed within her heart
In a program

CT: D--> With, my heart and my soul I do pray
CT: D--> That she might be my matesprit someday
These, the words at the front of my thoughts
Every day

Alas, a barrier impassable;
All that happened was the ticking of the clock
My technology was useless for creating true redrom

CT: D--> In your eyes my reflection appears –
CT: D--> What does it mean to you?
CT: D--> How can I press my suit for your hand –
CT: D--> What shall I do?

For I loved her truly, though she did not care,
From that day that we met… but
She could not feel pity for me
Not quite yet…

AA: Tell me, Zahhak… why d0 y0u cry?”

Mystery, emotion, emotion, mystery
“And now I truly know how pity does feel
Mystery – emotion – emotion – mystery
And now this sadness in me seems so surreal”
Mystery – emotion – a heart that’s – too full
“And yet I still cannot understand....”

“The first miracle that came to me
Was your birth as a new entity;
The next miracle that did occur
Was the time that we spent together
The third miracle won’t come to be
At least, not something I will live to see – ”

AA: … A message is being received… arriving fr0m… the future…”
…Me?

From
Some
Future century, ‘cross space and time
Reached a message in stumbling rhyme
Simple melody filled to brim with love
Voice just as glorious as the angels above

AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Only after you death, did I come to sympathize
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you for everything you’ve done in my life
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you for the many days that we spent together
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: I will sing of you forever…


CT: D--> The first miracle that came to me
CT: D--> Was your birth as a new entity;
CT: D--> The next miracle that did occur
CT: D--> Was the time that we spent together
CT: D--> The third miracle one day will be
CT: D--> Your finding somewhere in your heart some pity for me
CT: D--> The last miracle I will not need
CT: D--> These three miracles are enough to make me pleased

CT: D--> Thank you my dear…
CT: D--> Aradia…

The verse with all the "Thank you my dear/friend" etc is sung simultaneously with the verse just below it.

Here's the original song:

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And finally, here's rockleetist's cover of Kokoro (Rin's version), from which I took so much inspiration:

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Still kind of rough around the edges... but hope you guys like it.

Also rockleetist's video is somewhere in there, I based this one off that translation as well because bluh it's useful

okay byee i've almost finished this lab
you can tell i'm tired because i just said byee with two e's

PS: wait am I going to be like the vocaloid guy now or something
shoot i need something else to work on
anybody interested in uninstall or something i don't know

[Xerchisha]

This idea wasn't leaving me alone...so...

pardon me (Sollux) [tentatively COMPLETE]

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pardon me whiile ii bur2t
pardon me whiile ii bur2t

a few 2weep2 ago,
ii never thought ii would be,
at 2iix 2weep2, on the verge of
2pontaneou2 combu2tiion
woe ii2 me
but ii guess that iit come2
with the terriitory
an bleak propo2iitiion of
never-ending calamiity
the only one who can hear
the only one who can 2ee
and ii have had all ii can take and
explodiing 2eem2 liike an iimmiinent po22iibiiliity
two me

2o pardon me whiile ii bur2t
iintwo flame2.
ii've had enough of thii2 game
and the2e iidiiot2 mindle22 biickeriing
2o pardon me whiile ii burn
and rii2e above the flame
pardon me, pardon me
ii'll never be the 2ame

not two day2 ago,
ii wa2 haviing a look
at a 2creen
and ii 2aw thii2 human guy
fliippiing out from all the 2tre22
ii 2aiid, "ii can relate,"
cau2e lately ii've been thiiinkiing of combu2tiicatiion
a2 a welcome vacatiion from
the 2tre22e2 of
thii2 2tupiid game
liike graviity, hypocriisy,
and the periil2 of beiing iin 3-D
but thiinkiing 2o much diifferently

2o pardon me whiile ii bur2t
iintwo flame2.
ii've had enough of thii2 game
and the2e iidiiot2 mindle22 biickeriing
2o pardon me whiile ii burn
and rii2e above the flame
pardon me, pardon me
ii'll never be the 2ame

never be the 2ame, yeah
pardon me, whiile ii burst iintwo flame2
pardon me, pardon me, pardon me

2o pardon me whiile ii bur2t
iintwo flame2.
ii've had enough of thii2 game
and the2e iidiiot2 mindle22 biickeriing
2o pardon me whiile ii burn
and rii2e above the flame
pardon me, pardon me
ii'll never be the 2ame

never be the 2ame, yeah

original song

Honestly, it's probably not final copy material, but it's as good as I will probably ever be able to do with it. I just heard this song an went "Oh hey, this sounds like it'd work for Sollux..."

[Laasya Apria]

... Glub-glu-glub! or something I guess? You have the po-pi-po part down so I'm not writing that

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-Eridan I )(ave for you an icy can of Tab
I t)(ink you s)(ould )(ave a taste - just try it and see
So come on - t)(is gift of Tab from Feferi to you
Satisfaction I guarantee!

It's good for you, an icy can of Tab
)(elps digestion, t)(is icy can of Tab
Just make sure t)(at you only buy from me
Just us two in t)(e sea

Sweet Alternian Ta-ta-ta-ta-tab! Glub glub glub!
Sold from me to you alo-lo-lo-lo-lone! Glub glub glub!
Now you too can swim just as well as I! Glub glub glub!
We toget)(er )(appily!
...Don't forget to pay

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Christ I don't even know what this song is about aside from veggie juice, it's probably completely off

Extra: Backstory! Fef was trying to sell Eridan Tab for higher-than-normal prices, because she is tricky like that! I don't even know! That's why she even has Tab down there anyway! Exclamation point! I finished my homework way too early today!

THANK YOU SO MUCH :,D

[ScientificFlorist]

@Marvin The Third - o_o

...YES! I love you forever now.

[Apathy]

wasn't going to do anything like this today but realized i needed a break after wakin up on the floor
so uh have some slapdash thing I made over the past ten minutes

Prayer of the Lost Hipster

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Don’t you dare movve a muscle Kar
The slayer wwill come soon
I’ll tell you stories wwhile there's still time
'bout a place you nevver kneww

Before she packed her bags and left me cold behind her in the dust
I had a life I could be proud of and a friend that I could trust

My life is gone! Noww!
I can’t stand my owwn! Ground!
Fef I need your help! Noww!
Please don’t let me dowwn! Dowwn! Dowwn!

But it’s too late! Noww!
She just had to run! ‘Round!
Left me lost and lone! Noww
She’s torn my wworld dowwn! Dowwn! Dowwn!

Dowwn!

I wwas the luckless and the desperate
I wwalked a lonely path
I wwas the one wwho wwas banished
To the wworld of hellish wwrath

But I’vve been swweatin wwhile you all relaxed in the safety of your lands!
I’ll be takin my revvenge for what I suffered at your hands!

You’re all I’vve got! Kan!
I must stand myself! And!
I need powwer right! Noww!
Shit is goin dowwn! Dowwn! Dowwn!

Don’t push your luck! Kan!
Don’t make this your last! Stand!
Don’t get in my wway! Noww!
You’ll be taken dowwn! Dowwn! Dowwn!

So open your eyes; can you not see the wway
That despair has arrivved, and all hope’s gone awway
Keep quiet no longer, I’m turnin today
For the life that I’vve lost
To my fate’s reins reclaim!

Go!

Don’t let it pass! Kar!
Can’t you see my hurt! Heart!
You’re the last of hope! Noww!
Just let me pour my! Heart! Out!

But you’d not hear! Kar!
Turned awway and laughed! Are
You regrettin that! Noww!
WWell, you let me dowwn! Dowwn! Dowwn!

She kept me sane! (Fef oh Fef just don’t leavve me alone)
She helped me change! (Kan wwhy did you havve to block my wway)
He could havve helped! (Kar I knoww you knoww about these thins)

But let me dowwn!
Dowwn!
Dowwn!
Dowwn!

Dowwn!

and here is the place I got the music from because i don't really listen to this stuff much at all

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An FMA AMV to the song Prayer of the Refugee by Rise Against

thought i'd drop this slop off while i'm on break
right breaktime over, I'm out

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in other news, I can see why you changed it, Laasya, it sounds better that way
i'm really not good for this stuff aside from basic skeleton, as I pronounce many things strangely apparently

[Marvin The Third]

@ ScientificFlorist - Did you actually like it, or was that second part for someone else, and you think I'm just some idiot?

[ArmsAreLoud]

It seemed only logical to rewrite the most evil song in rock history to fit the most terrifying character in Homestuck. Original is here. Welcome to the dark carnival.

The Dark Carnival

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In the carnival
You'll find your greatest fears
I am the wicked clown
Who'll tear apart your throat

Tiny wiggler cries
Little, tiny pawn
In the profit gain
Tiny wiggler grows

Karkat, who's your girl
Are you doing what you can
To save your pretty girl, girl
Or you succumbing to your fears, fears
Vriska, hugest bitch
Loves her little boys, boys
Shows them how to kill
To save her precious pride, pride

In the carnival
I'll steal your life away
We're driving flesh and blood
Deep into the ground, ground

In the carnival
I'll steal your life away
We're driving flesh and blood
Deep into the ground, ground

[Laasya Apria]

I can see why you changed it, Laasya, it sounds better that way
i'm really not good for this stuff aside from basic skeleton, as I pronounce many things strangely apparently

Aheh hey if it weren't for you I wouldn't have had anything to work with at all! XD
I'm always changing lines, I'm a sillyhead like that. I often re-word my lines when I work for my friends abridged series, ahaha XD
I need to stick to the script XP;;

[Cesia]

...wow this thread. asjdkgf a lot sure has happened since I sort of fell off the face of the forum oh my god! o_o SO MUCH AWESOMENESS aaaaah you guys are so brilliant, all of you, gosh.

I've been lost in Stockholm for a few months, and I'm back home just briefly and I took the chance to actually record music because I can't record on my laptop ;; Only the mac computer at home has the best acoustics, mic and program. ffffff AND I LEAVE AGAIN TOMORROW

Um wow, I saw the "No Good Deed" snippet someone came up with and I actually have completed lyrics that Moondelev and I did @.@ Great minds think alike I guess?

Anyways, I was going to have this sung today but I still have a cold and decided it'd be nice to hear someone else sing it, too. So here ya go:

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(spoken) Mother!
(sung) Knryip gu'ilg gu'ilg
Nyurb nyurb knryip gu'ilg
Knryip gu'ilg gu'ilg
Nyurb nyurb knryip gu'ilg

See her flesh, how it's torn
How their blood left these stains
Since he stabbed them
Let him feel their pain
Let his bones snap and break
And however I try
To destroy him
I will make him die.
I will make him die.

Knryip gu'ilg gu'ilg
Nyurb nyurb knryip gu'ilg
Knryip gu'ilg gu'ilg
Nyurb nyurb knryip...knryip

What good is this chanting?
No one even knows what I'm saying!
I don't even know which trick I ought to try
Oh Mother, where are you?
Already dead and bleeding?
One more disaster I can add to my
Generous supply?

No Seer goes untarnished
No way of looking back, no chance for penance
No Seer goes untarnished
How I believed
I fought and planned for all them
But where did all that take me
No Seer
Goes untarnished!

Egbert
Von Salamancer
Mother...
Mother!

One question haunts and hurts
Too much, too much to mention:
Was I truly good to her
Or just seeking some vengeance?
Is that all Seers are
When peering with an ice-cold eye?
If that's all Seers are
Maybe that's the reason why

No Seer goes untarnished
All magic viewports should be decimated
No Seer goes untarnished
Sure, I meant well -
Well, look at what well-meant did:
All right, enough - so be it
So be it, then:
Let Skaia be agreed
I'm grimdark through and through
Since I could not succeed
Oh, Mother, saving you
I promise nothing light
Will I attempt to do again
Ever again
Nothing light
Will I do again!

Yeah do with it what you will ._.'

kfndkgjfjdskfd c-can I sing this? /)_(\ omg this thread has so many talented people this is amazing.

Of course! (And show Moondelev when you're done, too, she expected me to end up singing it but I bet she would love to hear you sing it too)

SO I DELIVER ashdjgf the song itself is a bit too high-pitched for my voice, but jeez I've been shouting/singing my ass off to get it right. My mother sort of wondered what the hell I was doing, yelling at the top of my lungs upstairs orz



Also my ~mysterious~ lyrics writer sent me more stuff to work with, so here's a little extra Rose for you, on the song "Arabian Night" from Aladdin:

[Kazehane-Rhapsody]

*ohgogthisissuchastupididea* Hey, I was kinda thinking of doing a song from Suessical? I love that (underrated) musical, and I've already gotten part of "Notice Me, Sollux" and/or "Notice Me, Karcat" (Sung by Aradia and Nepeta, respectively) done...sooo, if anyone's interested, I can post the lyrics for it in my next post...

[ArmsAreLoud]

So yeah I rewrote the Pokemon theme song in honor of the Pokestuck Fan Adventure.

As awesome as said adventure is I am still not entirely sure why I did this.

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You're gonna be the very 8est!
Like no one ever waaaaaaaas!
to catch them is my real test
to train them is my cause!

We will travel across the land
Searching far and wide
With my guidance you'll understand
The power that's insiiiiiiiide!

Pokemon, its you and me!
I guess it's my destiny
Pokemon, oh, you're my best friend
In a world we must defend
Pokemon, a heart so true
Our awesome will pull us through!

You teach me Yes, I'll teach you!
Pokemon, gotta catch 'em all

every challenge along the way
with courage i will face!
i will battle every day
to claim my rightful place!

Come with me, the time is right
You've got a lot to learn
Arm in arm we'll win the fight
To 8e the 8est it's now your turn!

[Neofafnir]

When I was younger I took piano lessons, and my teacher got me the sheet music to play that song. Oh nostalgia time!! But it is very funny thinking of Vriska singing that! lol