MSPA Lyric Re-writes and Singing: Nomination Time!

[alrieice]

You can get a free program called Audacity online. Just plug in a mic and you can record the asker bits as well as all the LIKE A HUSS lines. If you have a Mac, you can also use GarageBand.

Hehe, I'm downloading Audacity right now.
There is a shorter song that I'm going to record in a few minutes as a test to see if I can get it right.
I've never done stuff like this before, so if it isn't too much trouble, could you PM me so I can get an idea of how you want this recorded and stuff. I feel silly asking, but I don't want to mess up (OCD semi-perfectionist here, lol).

(When I looked at my subscription page and saw you posted I was like, "WHAT?!? Already? Wooot!" XD )

[ArmsAreLoud]

My new avatar compelled me.

Sa8otage

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You can't stand it, You know I planned it
Won't set it straight, just blaming fate
Makin' all my friends drop on the flo'
'Cause a talking cue ball he told me so

So while you sit back and wonder why
I gotta be a f---ing thorn in your side
Oh my God, it's a mirage
I'm tellin' y'all, it's a sabotage

So, so, so, so just shut up, cause ya rant 'bout my flaws
Why ya feelin' so smug with your lust for the law?
But you, I'm out and I'm gone
I'll tell you now, I keep it on and on

'Cause what you see might not be true
And I can bet, ya gettin' chumped by a fool
Basin' hate on a thing that's a mirage
I'm trying to tell you now, it's sabotage

Why
Our backs are now against the wall?
Listen all y'all, it's a sabotage
Listen all y'all, it's a sabotage
Listen all y'all, it's a sabotage
Listen all y'all, it's a sabotage

You can't stand it, you know I planned it
Won't set it straight, just blaming fate
Lord, I can't stand rockin' when I'm in this place
You should feel disgrace gettin' up in my face

But make no mistakes and switch up my channel
I'm Spinnerette when I fly off the handle
What could it be, it's a mirage
The clown's got it won, it's sabotage

[Shadonix]

Not 100% Homestuck, but I rewrote Don McLean's American Pie for Be the Seadweller Lowblood, and personally it's one of my proudest works. Colors aren't perfect, but Alrieice and I are gonna be singing this at some point.

A LONG, LONG TIME AGO
I CAN STILL REMEMBER HOW THAT MUSIC USED TO PISS ME OFF.
AND I KNEW I WAS IN A TRANCE
WHEN TEREZI PULLED ME INTO DANCE
AND BABY, I WAS HAPPY LONG ENOUGH.
BUT 2ND PERIGEE MADE ME SHIVER
WITH EVERY VERDICT SHE'D DELIVER
CRIMINALS ON THE GALLOWS
BUT YOU KNOW HOW THE WORLD GOES
I CAN'T REMEMBER IF I CRIED
WHEN HIS CROSSHAIRS SHOT ME BETWEEN THE EYES
BUT SOMETHING TOUCHED ME DEEP INSIDE
THE DAY I ALMOST DIED.

SO GO, GO, MR. AMPORA BRO
I PUT MY SICKLE ON YOUR PICKLE
BUT YOU'RE TAKING IT SLOW
WHEN YOU DELIVERED THAT LINE
AND YOU DOVE OFF WAY DOWN LOW
YOU SAID "I HATE YOU BUT NOW I HAVE TO GO,
I HATE YOU BUT NOW I HAVE TO GO."

D1D YOU WR1T3 TH3 BOOK OF LOV3
4ND DO YOU H4V3 F41TH 1N GOG 4BOVE
1F TH3 B1BL3 T3LLS YOU SO?
4ND NOW DO YOU W4NN4 B3 4 TROLL?
C4N POW3R L1FT YOUR SHR1V3LL3D SOUL?
4ND C4N YOU T34CH M3 HOW TO D4NC3 R333333344444L SLOOOOOOOOW? >;]
W3LL 1 KNOW YOU SYMP4TH1Z3 W1TH H1M
C4US3 1 S33 TH3 W4Y YOU H3LP H1M W1N
BUT YOU 4ND 1 BOTH KNOW
TH4T ON3LL ST4Y 4ND ON3LL GO, OH
YOU W3R3 4 LOWBLOOD 7-SW33P M4N1PUL4T1V3 B1TCH
BUT YOUR PL4NS W3R3 GONN4 H1T 4 GL1TCH
C4US3 1D M4K3 H1S 3MOT1ONS SW1TCH
TH3 D4Y H3 4LMOST D1ED
4ND H3 W4S S1NG1NG

GO, GO, MR. AMPORA BRO
I PUT MY SICKLE ON YOUR PICKLE
BUT YOU'RE TAKING IT SLOW
WHEN YOU DELIVERED THAT LINE
AND YOU DOVE OFF WAY DOWN LOW
YOU SAID "I HATE YOU BUT NOW I HAVE TO GO,
I HATE YOU BUT NOW I HAVE TO GO."

Now for five sweeps I've 8een on my own
Helping my flushed romance reach the throne
8ut that's not how it'd all play out
When I told him of my epic plot
On Trollian (very on-the-spot)
I thought he'd fall for me without a dou8t
8ut Terezi, she was in the room
And that moment would 8egin my doom.
My courting was adjourned.
Her verdict, oh it 8urned!
And while they 8oth sat there snogging red
A part of me inside was dead
I very nearly lost my head
The day he almost died.
And he was singing

GO, GO, MR. AMPORA BRO
I PUT MY SICKLE ON YOUR PICKLE
BUT YOU'RE TAKING IT SLOW
WHEN YOU DELIVERED THAT LINE
AND YOU DOVE OFF WAY DOWN LOW
YOU SAID "I HATE YOU BUT NOW I HAVE TO GO,
I HATE YOU BUT NOW I HAVE TO GO."

hELTER SKELTER IN THE HOSPITROLL SHELTER,
mY MOIRAIL'S DYING AND I'M IN A SWELTER
cAUSE HIS NEW WHEEL-LEG GIVES ME THE SCARES
...aND HE JUST FELL DOWN THE STAIRS
sHOOTING eQUIUS ALL THESE NASTY GLARES
bUT IT'S A BURDEN i GUESS WE HAVE TO BEAR
aND THE HOSPITROLL AIR WAS SMELLY AND DAMP
sO i WENT TO HELP gAMZEE FIND A RAMP
hE GOT UP TO LOOK
bUT i WAS ON A HOOK
cAUSE i WAS FLUSHED FOR EQUIUS
bUT i'M NOT SURE HE RETURNS THE CRUSH
tHESE QUADRANTS, THEY'RE JUST WAY TOO MUCH,
tHE DAY HE ALMOST DIED
kARKAT WAS SINGING

GO, GO, MR. AMPORA BRO
I PUT MY SICKLE ON YOUR PICKLE
BUT YOU'RE TAKING IT SLOW
WHEN YOU DELIVERED THAT LINE
AND YOU DOVE OFF WAY DOWN LOW
YOU SAID "I HATE YOU BUT NOW I HAVE TO GO,
I HATE YOU BUT NOW I HAVE TO GO."

:33 < now there we were all in one place
:33 < the horrorterrors in her face
:33 < ill never go so pale again
:33 < so feferi be forceful, oh jadzia be quick
:33 < eridans got a pointed stick
:33 < cause he thinks he doesnt have any friends
:33 < cause when we met way up above
:33 < his heart was held in the grip of love
:33 < and no amount of roleplay
:33 < could stop his romantic way
:33 < and as he climbed down from karkats hive
:33 < to try and keep our love alive
:33 < i was even greener than a chive
:33 < the day he almost died
:33 < karkat was singing

GO, GO, MR. AMPORA BRO
I PUT MY SICKLE ON YOUR PICKLE
BUT YOU'RE TAKING IT SLOW
WHEN YOU DELIVERED THAT LINE
AND YOU DOVE OFF WAY DOWN LOW
YOU SAID "I HATE YOU BUT NOW I HAVE TO GO,
I HATE YOU BUT NOW I HAVE TO GO."

i wwas just a troll wwho sang the blues
wwaitin for some happy newws
but luck alwways seemed to turn awway
so i asked nep out on a date
hoping it would change my fate
but i ended up wwith a faceful of advvisiers rage
i made my wway to the royal halls
spilled kars blood on all the wwalls
stole his clothing for good measure
really bathing in the treasure
but then nep wwent and pale-zoned me
and then came along fef, you see
and here wwe are, spear turned towwards me
and noww
id like
to die

and noww im singing

wwhy, wwhy, could you do this to a guy?
first you put me in the friend zone now in tatters i lie
so i bid farewwell, i havve to say my goodbyes
because this wwill be the day that i die
this wwill be the day that i die

and theyre all singing

W)(at, w)(at, no you don't have the guts,
And you couldn't kill Nepeta cause your weapon's a dud.
so here i cry, fall to my knees wwith a thud
just a sea dwweller lovveless lowwblood

That's a more polished version than what's in the BTSDL thread.

[alrieice]

I've got the color codes for the different characters' text, ( http://puppetfetishist.livejournal.com/4071.html ) so I'll re-type that and get you the code later for when we are officially done.
And you should have seen my face when I saw how long the original song is (8 mins.) 0_0 XD

[ArmsAreLoud]

At the time it was the longest hit radio single. In fact, I don't think it was usurped up until the 90's with Dream Theater's "Pull Me Under". Anyways...

>Post first rewrite in like months
>Post is immediately followed by American Freaking Pie

[Apathy]

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i hate my life

Subjuggulating Demon Makara-chan

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Originals here

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and

Original rewritten into english here

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Pipiru pirupiru pipiru pi
Pipiru pirupiru pipiru pi
Omnipotent tetsubou of mine, Excalibol-uguu~!
Pipiru pirupiru pipiru pi
Pipiru pirupiru pipiru pi
With my spells and magical assistance, I’ll revive the same old you!

No… don’t act that way... quit it now! Blockheaded guy!
Please do not make such a frightening face… it’s too scary! I might cry!

Angel of the swinging mace! Bloody-splatters-everywhere, Dokuro-chan!
Angel of the swinging mace! Heart-attacking, bloody-handed Dokuro-chan!
Step on you, bind you and beat you up…
Kick you and tease you and hang you up
These are the ways in which I show my love for you~

Pipiru pirupiru pipiru pi
Pipiru pirupiru pipiru pi
Omnipotent tetsubou of mine, Excalibol-uguu~!
Pipiru pirupiru pipiru pi
Pipiru pirupiru pipiru pi
With my spells and magical assistance, I’ll revive the same old you!

No… don’t act that way... quit it now! Blockheaded guy!
Please do not make such a frightening face… it’s too scary! I might cry!

Angel of the swinging mace! Bloody-splatters-everywhere, Dokuro-chan!
Angel of the swinging mace! Heart-attacking, bloody-handed Dokuro-chan!
Shoot you and burn you and shake up your frame
Hide you, destroy you and put you to shame
These are the ways in which I show my love for you~

Angel of the swinging mace! Bloody-splatters-everywhere, Dokuro-chan!
Angel of the swinging mace! Heart-attacking, bloody-handed Dokuro-chan!
Cut, punch and toy with you every day
Stab, freeze and torture you every way
These are the ways in which I show my love for you~

Angel of the swinging mace! Clubbing you forever, Dokuro-chan!
Angel of the swinging mace! Stained and dripping bloody red, Dokuro-chan!
Rend you, accuse you, obliterate…
Choke you, coerce you, smile and wave…
These are the ways in which I show my love for you~

Pipiru pirupiru pipiru pi

and now this abomination

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Pipiru pirupiru pipiru pi
Pipiru pirupiru pipiru pi
Omnipotent weapon in my hands, Hammer of Zillyhoo~!
Pipiru pirupiru pipiru pi
Pipiru pirupiru pipiru pi
Running low on my special stardust – think I’ll make some more out of you!

What… you thought that I was really such a harmless troll!
Fuck, don’t cry so much you peasantbloods! I just want your heads to roll!

Demon of the laughing face! Bloody-splatters-everywhere, Makara-chan!
Demon of the laughing face! Heart-attacking, bloody-handed Makara-chan!
Step on you, bind you and beat you up…
Kick you and tease you and hang you up
These are the ways that I’ll subjuggulate you all~

Demon of the laughing face! Clubbing you forever, Makara-chan!
Demon of the laughing face! Stained and dripping bloody red, Makara-chan!
These are the ways that I’ll subjuggulate you all~

Pipiru pirupiru pipiru pi
Pipiru pirupiru pipiru pi
Omnipotent weapon in my hands, Hammer of Zillyhoo~!
Pipiru pirupiru pipiru pi
Pipiru pirupiru pipiru pi
Running low on my special stardust – think I’ll make some more out of you!

What… you thought that I was really such a harmless troll!
Fuck, don’t cry so much you peasantbloods! I just want your heads to roll!

Demon of the laughing face! Bloody-splatters-everywhere, Makara-chan!
Demon of the laughing face! Heart-attacking, bloody-handed Makara-chan!
Shoot you and burn you and shake up your frame
Hide you, destroy you and put you to shame
These are the ways that I’ll subjuggulate you all~

Demon of the laughing face! Clubbing you forever, Makara-chan!
Demon of the laughing face! Stained and dripping bloody red, Makara-chan!
Rend you, accuse you, obliterate…
Choke you, coerce you, smile and wave…
These are the ways that I’ll subjuggulate you all~

Pipiru pirupiru pipiru pi

replace the pirus with the most obnoxious horn sound effect you have on hand because whatever
rewrote both versions because it's like 4 total different lines seriously

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i love you guys too

Because I too "hate" my life, I'll provide you with a recording (unfortunately very little like Gamzee, ahaha orz) as soon as I get ahold of an instrumental and some obnoxious honking. And then maybe someone will step up to tell me that I'm doing it wrong by not doing a Gamzee voice and provide appropriately low vocals.

p.s. ilu okay?

Cool! I'd be honored to hear that.

Re: American Pie - it's been done before, many, many times, but I think this is the first time it's been done for BtSDLb. Top notch.

Re: actual rewrites - I'll be back in a bit.

[Shadonix]

Well, it is a sacred song.

Also yeah I think I saw a few others bu I really didn't love them. :/

[alrieice]

Bec Noir's Rage (First Version)
Based on "Pumped Up Kicks" by Foster the People

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Noir's got a quick hand
He'll look around the field
No regret for his prey
He's got Bro's anime shades sitting on his snout
He's the big bad wolf
Yeah, he's got Dave's katana sword
Run through his stomach and trophies from his kills
Lil' Cal is back, all sewed up
Noir is coming for you, yeah, he's coming for you

All the little kids with their god tier hoods
Better run, better run, outrun my sword
All the little trolls with their blood caste class
Better run, better run, faster than my blade

All the little kids with their god tier hoods
Better run, better run, outrun my sword
All the little trolls with their blood caste class
Better run, better run, faster than my blade

Used to work for the Queen
Pushing papers all day, yeah, push papers all day
And watching all the monitors
Then the queen came in with the comical hat
"Part of being harlequin"
That's what the Black Queen said but it set our boy off
It's what made him flip the fuck out
Went to the battle field
Where he just lost his wits, yeah

All the little kids with their god tier hoods
Better run, better run, outrun my sword
All the little trolls with their blood caste class
Better run, better run, faster than my blade

All the little kids with their god tier hoods
Better run, better run, outrun my sword
All the little trolls with their blood caste class
Better run, better run, faster than my blade

(Run, run, run, run
R-R-R-Run, run, run
R-R-R-Run, run, run, run
R-R-R-Run
Run, run
Ru-Run, run)

[Whistling]

All the little kids with their god tier hoods
Better run, better run, outrun my sword
All the little trolls with their blood caste class
Better run, better run, faster than my blade

All the little kids with their god tier hoods
Better run, better run, outrun my sword
All the little trolls with their blood caste class
Better run, better run, faster than my blade

All the little kids with their god tier hoods
Better run, better run, outrun my sword
All the little trolls with their blood caste class
Better run, better run, faster than my blade

All the little kids with their god tier hoods
Better run, better run, outrun my sword
All the little trolls with their blood caste class
Better run, better run, faster than my blade

My first Homestuck-ified song.

I'm not sure who would sing the verse in third person, though Bec Noir would have to sing the first person ones.
I would appreciate feedback on this a whole lot.

[Apathy]

you guys
you guys you guys you guys
being meguca
is
WONDROUS

Connect - ClariS

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Original video - ... you seriously don't know the Puella Magi theme? Shame. Here you are. You poor, deprived child.

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Original Lyrics - yeah okay it's another of those Japanese songs I dug up the translation and rewrote it so it made sense in English before I could Homestuckify it. Go ahead, sue me.

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I will carry on
In the face of the shadows that loom overhead like a bird of prey
I’ll close my eyes and remember the oaths that we made on that day

When will that far off goal I’m working my way towards
Come into my field of view as I pass through this lonely trail?

Let’s go together, forward down into this world
Breaking through the negativity inside again and again

With emotion strong, we will find our way
As we shoulder hesitation, carry forth
We’ll continue on, though the road may be long
For the countdown clock is ticking on and on…

Let my heart awake
Come alive for the sake of a fate that we all can look forward to
A future bright, filled with smiles and the joy that we’ve long been denied
Even if I halt on a road rough and painful to walk, I will know to never give up
My heart knows to always carry on, for my blue sky…

No matter where I turned, my friends were always there
If they saw my worried face they’d laugh and embrace me warmly

In this distorted world of cruelty and despair
In their arms was my asylum from the pain that we all shared

From our faith and bond, we shall draw our strength
As we bear each other’s greatest hopes and fears
Let my voice be heard, reaching from me to you
And a miracle will rise up from our tears…


I will carry on
In the face of the shadows that loom overhead like a bird of prey
I’ll close my eyes and remember the oaths we exchanged on that day
Even if I find that a wall reaching up to the clouds far above is blocking my way
I know I can cross so long as I can hold my faith…

While I wandered through the ruins uncaring if I lived or died
I was always moving as if drawn to by your side…

Let my heart awake
Come alive for the sake of a fate that we all can look forward to
A future bright, filled with smiles and the joy that we’ve long been denied
Even if I halt on a road rough and painful to walk, I will know to never give up
My heart knows to always carry on, for one blue sky…

Yes, it will come someday…

And without further ado, Homestuckified. For your pleasure!

Connect - ver. Eridan

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i wwill carry on
in the face a the angels that loom ovverhead like a blindin sun
ill close my eyes an remember the vvowws that we made as i run

wwhen wwill you realize that im the guy for you
an come back ta me as i wwalk alone this bloody trail?

wwe wwere together, wwith our owwn piece a this wworld
but then you broke my heart an ran awway to be wwith him

i just wwant your love, so ill find some wway
as wwe play this game ill make you pity me
ill continue on, but im losin all hope
for the countdowwn clock is tickin on an on…

let your heart awwake
come alivve for the sake a some fate that wwe all can look forwward to
a future bright, filled wwith smiles an the joy that ivve long been denied
for im takin paths that are harsh rough and painful to wwalk
an i think i might just givve up
so please just come back to me before it gets too late

no matter wwhere I turned, i never had friends here
if they saww my wworried face theyd laugh an leavve me alone here

in this distorted wworld a cruelty and despair
in your arms wwas my asylum from the pain i only kneww

from our perfect bond, i once dreww my strength
as wwe bore each others greatest dreams an shames
but youvve blocked your ears, an you cant hear me plead
i need your help before i go insane…

said id carry on
in the face a the angels that loom ovverhead like a blindin sun
i close my eyes an remember the vvowws that we made as i run
but noww i have found that a wwall reachin up to the clouds far abovve is blockin my wway
i know i cant cross so long as you wwont hear me pray…

wwhile i wwandered through the trials uncarin if i livved or died
i wwas alwways movvin as if drawwn to by your side…

let your heart awwake
come alivve for the sake a some fate that wwe all can look forwward to
a future bright, filled wwith smiles an the joy that ivve long been denied
for im takin paths that are harsh rough and painful to wwalk
an i think i might just givve up
so please just come back to me before it gets too late

before i go insane…

[rhythmicSmasher]

Heh. Unlike you guys, I can't re-write songs on a dime. In fact, I've been sitting on some barely-started lyrics that until recently had no driving force behind them. With the story of the ancestors done and the Scratch upon us, I thought it'd be worth it to actually finish my Homestuck-ified version of Crush 40's "Live and Learn". I'm sure somebody could do better, though.

In-Complete
- Tweaks may be needed, input welcome
- It's late so I'm not sure if it flows right

"Skaia Bound"

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Can you feel winds as the session ends?
Ooh, it's almost time for the Scratch,
Nak!
Once this begins, pray for all your friends.
Ooh, looks like the Slayer is back.
Nak!

But they can barely survive,
Those honks and Noir.
When hope is on a revive,
You better ascend to God Tier.

Skaia bound!
Hanging on the edge of a far hope,
Skaia bound!
By the works of paradox space.
Skaia bound!
If you screw up like Sweet Bro,
Skaia bound!
You will never awaken.

Whoa, nak!

Can you type and send as your world starts to bend?
Naaak, all you see is bright green and black!
Oh!

But they can't bring back lost lives,
Just pile up more.
When hope is on a revive,
You better ascend to God Tier.

Skaia bound!
Hanging on the edge of a far hope,
Skaia bound!
By the works of paradox space.
Skaia bound!
If you screw up like Sweet Bro,
Skaia bound!
You will never awaken.

Hey, whoa, whoa,
Oh nak!

Nak, nak, nak, nak, nak!

There's a tale kept for sake, for sake of him.
There's a wail that echoes to help defend.
Where is that pumpkin?
Where is that pumpkin?

Skaia bound!
Hanging on the edge of a far hope,
Skaia bound!
By the works of paradox space.
Skaia bound!
If you screw up like Sweet Bro,
Skaia bound!
You will never awaken.

Skaia bound!
Hanging on the edge of a far hope,
Skaia bound!
By the works of paradox space.
Skaia bound!
If you screw up like Sweet Bro,
Skaia bound!
You will never awaken.

Skaia bound!
Nak, nak, nak, nak, nak!
Skaia bound!
Nak, nak, nak, nak, nak!

Original Lyrics

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Can you feel life movin' through your mind?
Ooh, looks like it came back for more,
Yeah!
Can you feel time slippin' down your spine?
Ooh, You try and try to ignore,
Yeah!

But you can hardly swallow,
Your fears and pain.
When you can't help but follow,
It puts you right back where you came.

Live and learn!
Hanging on the edge of tomorrow,
Live and learn!
From the works of yesterday.
Live and learn!
If you beg or if you borrow,
Live and learn!
You may never find your way.

Whoa, yeah!

Can you feel your life tangle you up inside?
Yeah, now you're face down on the floor!
Oh!

But you can't save your sorrow,
You've paid in trade.
When you can't help but follow,
It puts you right back where you came.

Live and learn!
Hanging on the edge of tomorrow,
Live and learn!
From the works of yesterday.
Live and learn!
If you beg or if you borrow,
Live and learn!
You may never find your way.

Hey, whoa, whoa,
Oh yeah!

Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah!

There's a face searching far, so far and wide.
There's a place where you dreamed you'd never find.
Hold on to "what if?"
Hold on to "what if?"

Live and learn!
Hanging on the edge of tomorrow,
Live and learn!
From the works of yesterday.
Live and learn!
If you beg or if you borrow,
Live and learn!
You may never find your way.

Live and learn!
Hanging on the edge of tomorrow,
Live and learn!
From the works of yesterday.
Live and learn!
If you beg or if you borrow,
Live and learn!
You may never find your way.

Live and learn!
Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah!
Live and learn!
Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah!

Live and Learn Instrumental

[Apathy]

hi guys
got a medium and 3 shorts for you guys today
not sure which one I like best

First up, this is
X4B Aradia the Guardian

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Shut up, Digimon is awesome and Xros wars is amazing.

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Rewritten English lyrics! That bit about spirals is definitely a Gurren Lagann reference.

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Strong spiraling will flows through this world, aiming for bright skies
Yet, all through this world, evil too flows, running astray!
Still, heroes exist; they never die, fighting with soul ablaze –
When down come the hooves, know ye that all shall fall away!

Friends! Come and shake the ground! Let our comradeship and strength be known to all!
For, binding us all, is a heart that beats with life and virtue great… fighting on…

Oh!
X4B the guardian!
Pierce the shadowed world, with the sword of light and justice
Oh, charge onwards to the light, of the future bright…
Bringing love and peace to all the just
And bringing judgment to the villainous
This unmatched hero of us all, our guardian…

Then, wave upon wave, firing through eyes filled up with drying tears
I struggled to breathe trapped in the hell that was that day!
Soon, I could not stand, and so collapsed, body unmoving
When, there he appeared, out of the light, the savior so great!

Oh, freedom in his wings, drives this mighty guardian to greater heights
Foes, come and atone, fight to clear your name and stand for justice’ sake… take my hand

Oh, X4B the guardian!
Loose that blazing flame, into the heart of that foul darkness
Oh, raise up your battle cry! Dance across the sky…
Bringing love and peace to all the just
And bringing judgment to the villainous
This unmatched hero of us all, our guardian…

Friends! Forward let us go! Moving onwards towards a world of peace for all!
For, binding us all, is a heart that beats with life and virtue great… fighting on…

Oh! X4B the guardian!
Pierce the shadowed world, with the sword of light and justice
Oh, charge onwards to the light, of the future bright…
Bringing love and peace to all the just
And bringing judgment to the villainous
This unmatched hero of us all, our guardian…

X4B the guardian! For eternity…
Bringing love and peace to all the just
And bringing judgment to the villainous
This unmatched hero of us all, our guardian

And now, Homestuckified! I'm not actually sure who sings this. Sollux or Equius I'd guess. Or maybe one of her doomed selves...

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Strong spiraling will flows through this world, aiming for dark skies
Yet, all through this world, evil too flows, running astray!
Still, there is a maid who’ll never fall, fighting with soul ablaze –
When down come her feet, know ye that all shall fall away!

Fight! Come and shake the ground! Let our comradeship and strength be known to all!
For, guarding us all, is a troll who’s been beyond the grave and back… fighting on…

Aradia the guardian!
Give us back the dark, with your many selves (all doomed)
Oh, charge onwards, Maid of Time, for a future line …
Saving timelines that were doomed to die
And holding us all up from far behind
This unmatched hero of us all, our guardian…

Then, wave upon wave, blasting through eyes filled up with drying tears
I struggled to breathe trapped in the hell that was that day!
Soon, I could not stand, and so collapsed, body unmoving
When, there she appeared, out of the shade, the savior so great!

Oh, the soulbot she controls, drives this mighty guardian to greater heights
Foes, you have no hope – even Glb’golyb’s Vast Glub won’t stop her now… for she is…

Aradia the guardian!
Loose the meteors, into the heart of that foul brightness
Oh, raise up your battle cry! Dance across the sky…
Saving timelines that were doomed to die
And holding us all up from far behind
This unmatched hero of us all, our guardian…

Trolls! Forward let us go! Moving onwards towards the world we made, the world for all!
For, guarding us all, is a troll who’s been beyond the grave and back… fighting on…

Aradia the guardian!
Give us back the dark, with your many selves (all doomed)
Oh, charge onwards, Maid of Time, for a future line …
Saving timelines that were doomed to die
And holding us all up from far behind
This unmatched hero of us all, our guardian…

Aradia the guardian! For eternity…
Saving timelines that were doomed to die
And holding us all up from far behind
This unmatched hero of us all, our guardian…

Next up, another Japanese one... hey, guys! Come back!
:33< fukkireta

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English translation. Terrible grammar, but I don't know why people think it makes no sense.

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I always knew I love you
So take my hand and Kiss me
Because I never can forget my most important memory
“Dorayaki is not good like rice or staple foods” –
Why not just overwrite the norm and take a walk outside the box with me?

As you walk, I watch your back recede
From behind I keep you on your feet
Try to count the things that you can do
Left to right they – this that which – I can’t compete!

Are you there? Are you still waiting here?
For a birthday not to come this year
Please give up, this is no fairy tale
Strings of fate no longer rule the lovers, dear!

That dried-up heart you have
Just spouting off all that nonsense…
As your efforts are always frustrated
Can’t you just make a quick decision?

‘Cause I know it’ll make you happy, and that’s all I really must see
So let’s start with a greeting most detailed –
Are you ready?

I always knew I love you
So take my hand and Kiss me
Because I never can forget my most important memory
“Dorayaki is not good like rice or staple foods” –
Why not just overwrite the norm and take a walk outside the box with me?

Though the dream is –beepbeepbeep- falling down I just don’t want to wake…
I know this warmth will last until morning…
There must still be time left
So just 5 more minutes
… actually 10 more please, thank you!

Homestuckified!

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:33< i always knew i pitied you
X33< so take my paw and kiss me
:33< because i never can furget my most important memory
:33< *MEAT AND BLOOD’S NOT NORMAL FARE FOR GROWING TROLLS LIKE YOU* –
:33< why not just overwrite the norm and take a purrowl outside with me?

:33< as you walk, i watch your back recede
:33< from behind i pounce onto your feet
:33< try to count the things that you can do
X33< left to right they – this that which – i can’t compete!

:33< are you there? are you still waiting here?
:\\< fur a birthday never coming near
<:33< purrlease give up, this is no furry tail
>:33< strings of fate are redrom only, don’t you fear

:33< that dried-up heart you have
:33< why always your thoughts on blackrom…
<:33< as your efforts are always frustrated
<:33< can’t you just make a quick decision?

:33< cause i know you know how to smile, and that’s all that i really must see
:33< so let’s start with a greeting most detailed –
>:33< are you ready?

:33< i always knew i pitied you
X33< so take my paw and kiss me
:33< because i never can furget my most important memory
:33< *MEAT AND BLOOD’S NOT NORMAL FARE FOR GROWING TROLLS LIKE YOU* –
:33< why not just overwrite the norm and take a purrowl outside with me?

<:33< though this dream is
D--> nepeta
<:33< falling down i just don’t want to wake…
:33< i know this warmth will last until nightfall…
:33< there must still be time left
:33< so just 5 more minutes
X33< … actually 10 more please, Equius!

Guys I swear I can do English songs, look here
Avada Kedavra! - ver. Noir

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They call me the demon Bec Noir
I'm a sucker for evil of any sort
As long as I get to stab my foes away

And boy I love this magic ring
For murderin' people it's just the thing
It's such a blast
I use it every day

Okay!

There's a sword in my sternum! (Aaaah!)
Now it's stuck in your sternum! (Aaaah!)
Take a sword to the sternum! (Aaaah!)

It really rolls off the tongue

There's a sword in my sternum! (Aaaah!)
Now it's stuck in your sternum! (Aaaah!)
Take a sword to the sternum! (Aaaah!)

Killing people's never been this much fun

Check this out!

I'm the Archagent of Jazz! Yeah!

There's a sword in my sternum! (Aaaah!)
Now it's stuck in your sternum! (Aaaah!)
Take a sword, to the sternum!

And now, a duet for the ages
like kar - feat. the Prince of Hope and the Knight of Blood

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caligulasAquarium [CA] began trolling carcinoGeneticist [CG]
CA: you despise both the past
CA: an evven more the future you
CG: WHAT
CA: none a this surprises you
CG: WHAT THE FUCK
CA: wwhen you are kar
CG: ERIDAN WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT
CA: the endless halls a the lab
CA: in this VVeil wwhere wwe all hide
CG: I'M GOING TO PUNCH YOU
CA: make you feel like
CA: genocide
CG: WHAT THE EVERLOVING FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU
CA: wwhen you
CG: ERIDAN
CA: ARE
CG: ERIDAN CUT IT OUT
CA: KAR
CA: (oh no)
CG: JEGUS FUCK ARE YOU ON SOPOR OR SOMETHING
CA: but its okay to feel like kar
CG: YOU ARE AREN'T YOU
CA: to feel so mad and grumpity
CG: STOP FUCKING SINGING
CA: just make sure
CG: THIS SONG IS STUPID
CA: escape noir
CG: AND YOU ARE STUPID FOR MAKING ME LISTEN TO IT
CA: at least
CG: AND NOW I'M STUPID
CA: youre in good company
CG: FUCK YOU
CA: thaaats
CG: FUCK
CA: me~
CG: YOU
CA: so kar do you hate me yet
carcinoGeneticst [CG] blocked caligulasAquarium [CA]

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CA: it didnt wwork
CA: pay up
TA: 2eriiou2ly?
TA: fuck he2 fliippiing hii2 2hiit
TA: thii2 ii2 hiilariiou2

@rS: Looks pretty nice so far! If you're worried about flow, sing your lyrics along with the song playing. Each lyric should more or less match up with a word in the song. For a most natural flow, try to put accents in the same place - for instance, the words 'array' and 'murder' shouldn't be switched, but you could try 'today' because they have accents in the same place. (And they even rhyme! Bonus!)

[Snowmanne]

Made this a long while ago, and many people probably made better versions but meh

The Thresh Prince of Bel air

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Now this is the story all about how,
my life FLIPPED TURNWAYS upside down.
And I'd like to take a minute just sit right there,
I'll tell you how I became the prince of a colony called Troll-Bel-air.

In west Alternia born and raised,
On the trial course where I spent most of my days.
Chilling out, trolling, pailing all cool,
And all hunting some lusii outside of the hive.

When a couple of trolls, they were up to no good,
Started making trouble in my hive complex.
I got in one little STRIFE and my lusus got scared,
And said "You're moving with your modus and strife-deck to Bel-air!"

I whistled for a spaceship and when it came near, the
. driver's symbol looked thresh and had 8 dies in the mirror
If anything I could say that this ship was rare,
But I thought nah, forget it, yo homes to Bel-air!

I pulled up to a hive around seven or eight,
And I culled the driver with my "Homes, smell ya later!".
Looked at the royal colony I was finally there,
To sit on my throne as the thresh-prince of Bel-air!

[rhythmicSmasher]

@Apathy - Thanks.

(Spoilered for quick ramble.)

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The thing about "Live and Learn" is that it deviates from the pattern I'm used to.

A
B
A
B

With a C stuck in there somewhere. A and B end with the word to rhyme with, but in "Live and Learn" the rhyme comes up mid-sentence. It's more like

A (1/1)
B (2)
A (1/1)
B (2)

Where 1 is the primary rhyme that divides the sentence/segment and 2 is the secondary rhyme that only pops up at the end of the sentence/segment. If that makes any sense. Songs aren't my specialty.

I'm sorry if I sounded like a total goof explaining that.

[ch00_bakka]

Rewrite of http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hWTFG3J1CP8
A COMPLETE HISTORY OF THE GAME OF SGRUB, TOLD THROUGH THE EYES OF A HUMBLE REDBLOOD.

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To Alternia I came seeking fortune
But they’re making me work til I’m dead
The sea-dwellers have it so easy
The Empress puts gold on her bread
The people of Alternia are hungry
But think what a feast there could be
If we could create a socialist state
That cared for the lowbloods like me:

I am the troll who arranges the blocks
That descend upon me from up above.
They come down and I spin them around
Til they fit in the ground like claw in glove.
Sometimes it seems that to move blocks is fine
And the lines will be formed as they fall -
Then I see that I have misjudged it!
I should not have nudged it after all.
Can I have a long one please?
Why must these nooksucking blocks tease?

I am the troll who arranges the blocks
That continue to fall from up above.
Come all you trolls! Let the banners unfold!
A collective regime of peace and love.
I work so hard in arranging the blocks
But the Empress and blue-bloods bleed me dry
But the lowbloods will rise! We will not compromise
For we know that the old regime must die.
Long live Suff'rer, dead in flames!
We salute the manacles grey!

I am the troll who arranges the blocks
That SGRUB sends from up above.
The grist in your cache now belongs to the Jack
A collective regime of peace and love.
I have no choice in arranging the blocks
Under this damn game's rule, what it says goes.
The rule of the game is we all are the same
And my blocks must create unbroken rows.
Long live Jack Noir! He loves you!
Sing these words, or you know what he’ll do...

I am the troll who arranges the blocks
That are made by the consorts in the planets.
They come two weeks late and they don’t tessellate
But we’re working to Jack Noir’s five year plan.
I am the troll who arranges the ships
That will make all of Prospit keep away
The White Queen is dead, and Skaia is Red!
Let us point all our guns at the Furthest Ring.
We shall live forever more!
We can start a dimensional war!

I am the troll who arranges the blocks
That are building a highly secret base.
Hip hip hurrah for Derse's dark hordes!
We are sending our pawns to non-euclidean space.
I work so hard in arranging the blocks
But each night I go home to my matesprit in tears -
What’s the point of it all, when you’re building a wall
And in front of your eyes it disappears?
Pointless work for pointless pay
This is one game I shall not play.

I am the troll who arranges the blocks!
But tomorrow I think I’ll stay in bed.
There's nothing but mist, I’ve got plenty of grist
And I’m standing in line for a loaf of bread
Maybe we’d be better off
If we brought down old Jack Noir!

I am the troll who arranges the blocks
That continue to fall from up above.
The markets are free! So much boonbucks for me!
Tell me, why should I care for peace and love?
The markets are free! So much boonbucks for me!
Tell me, why should I care for peace and love?
Peace and love, peace and love!

And screw the rest of the song. Also screw rhymes. And rhythm.

[alrieice]

No feedback on my song?

[PriffyViole]

I rewrote Trogdor.

PYRALSPITE

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PYRALSPITE!!!

PYRALSPITE!!!

Pyralspite was a troll
I mean, she was a dragon troll
Er, maybe she was just a dragon
But she was still

PYRALSPITE!!!

PYRALSPITE!!!

Burninating the countrysides
Burninating the lowbloods
Burninating the seagrifts
In their wooden PIRATE SHIPS!!!

WOODEN PIRATE SHIPS!!!

And Pyralspite comes in the NIIIIIIIIGHT!!!

[Shadonix]

I rewrote Trogdor.

PYRALSPITE

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PYRALSPITE!!!

PYRALSPITE!!!

Pyralspite was a troll
I mean, she was a dragon troll
Er, maybe she was just a dragon
But she was still

PYRALSPITE!!!

PYRALSPITE!!!

Burninating the countrysides
Burninating the lowbloods
Burninating the seagrifts
In their wooden PIRATE SHIPS!!!

WOODEN PIRATE SHIPS!!!

And Pyralspite comes in the NIIIIIIIIGHT!!!

You forgot the bridge and the second verse.

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PYRALSPITE!!!

PYRALSPITE!!!

Pyralspite was a troll
I mean, she was a dragon troll
Er, maybe she was just a dragon
But she was still

PYRALSPITE!!!

PYRALSPITE!!!

Burninating the countrysides
Burninating the lowbloods
Burninating the seagrifts
In their wooden PIRATE SHIPS!!!

WOODEN PIRATE SHIPS!!!

Whoa! Look at those wicked dueling guitar solos! It's like Vriska vs. Terezi over here! Go Terezi! Go Terezi! TEREZI WINS!!!!!

When all Alternia is in ruin
And burnination has forsaken the countryside
One lusus will remain.
My money's on...

PYRALSPITE!!!

PYRALSPITE!!!

And the Pyralspite comes in the DAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!

[apolloSun]

REQUEST: Kokoro by Rin Kagamine

Done for Aradia? Idk, I had the idea today, but I'm bad at rewrites. < A >

[-Benedict]

Okay, this isn't a rewrite, but the Trogdor rewrite sparked something hidden deep inside that made this have to happen:

SOMEBODY TOLD ME
THAT YOU WERE SO STUPID
BUT I DIDN'T BELIEVE THEM
BUT NOW I BELIEVE THEM!

SOMEBODY TOLD ME
THAT YOU WERE SO STUPID
BUT I DIDN'T BELIEVE THEM
BUT NOW I BELIEVE THEM!

EVERYBODY'S STUPID!
EVERYBODY'S STUPID!
AND EVERYBODY'S STUPID BUT MEEEEEE!

OH, SOMEBODY TOLD ME
THAT YOU WERE SO STUPID
BUT I DIDN'T BELIEVE THEM
BUT NOW I BELIEVE THEM!

SOMEBODY TOLD ME
THAT YOU WERE SO STUPID
BUT I DIDN'T BELIEVE THEM
BUT NOW I BELIEVE THEM!

YOU'RE NOT COOL.

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YOU'VE GOT AND UGLY BUTT, AND A STUPID, BUTT
OHHHHHHHH

OH JOHN, YOU'VE GOT AN UGLY BUTT! HEY!
OH DAVE, YOU'VE GOT A STUPID BUTT! HOO!
EGBERT, YOU'VE GOT AN UGLY BUTT! UH!
STRIDER, YOU'VE GOT A STUPID BUTT! HEY!
EGBERT! UGLY BUTT! UH!
ROSE, STUPID BUTT! OH!
FUCKASS, YOU'VE GOT AN UGLY BUTT! OOH!
JOHN EGBERT GOT A STUPID BUTT! UH!

i think i havve a chance wwith this guy
i think i havve a chance wwith this guy
i think i havve a chance wwith this guy
guy guy guy guy

i think i havve a chance wwith this guy
i hope i do a dance wwith this guy
i hope i put a trance on this guy
i think ill lend some pants to this guy
hope i go to france wwith this guy
think ill put some ants on this guy
guy guy guy guy

i think i havve a chance wwith this guy
i think i havve a chance wwith this guy
think i havve a chance wwith this guy
guy guy guy guy
bye

[Apathy]

REQUEST: Kokoro by Rin Kagamine

Done for Aradia? Idk, I had the idea today, but I'm bad at rewrites. < A >

It's been done!

Kokoro - for Aradia

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I lived in a soulbot that was made
By a blueblood lost now to the void
Its creation was a miracle
Of science (STRONG science)

Yet inside me was a broken part
Something that he failed to recreate:
Pumping blood, but sour, was the heart
that he programmed

Though as the days slowly passed me by
Though he alone, stood right by my side
Rage though I might, though we as one would fight
Every day

Still I could not look beyond the shades
Pondering not the thoughts behind his face
Bursting with hate for all his countless plays
To mend my heart

Now the Maid of Time, goddess anew
Resurrected in flesh and blood
Past the point of no return
I have been reborn

So then why do I see all these tears
Surely this was triumph enough
Or could it be that posthumously
He won over my heart?

Mystery – emotion – emotion – mystery
And now I can remember how pity feels
Mystery – emotion – emotion– mystery
And now this sadness in me seems so surreal
Mystery – emotion– a heart that's – too full
And yet I still cannot understand…

I am finally starting to see
How piteous his life came to be
Soft feelings I have long forgot
Yet now I know all too well

I will pity his sad memory
From my thoughts he shall not depart
I only wish that he’d lived to see
The true rebirth of my heart

I can sing now the purest melodies
I dedicate my song to you!

Thank you my dear…
Thank you my dear…
Only after your death, did I come to sympathize
Thank you my dear…
Thank you my dear…
Thank you for everything you’ve done in my life
Thank you my dear…
Thank you my dear…
Thank you for the many days that we spent together
Thank you my dear…
Thank you my dear…
I will sing of you forever…

Technically I did this one first.

Kokoro - Kiseki (Heart/Miracle); Equius' Version

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I couldn't find a good rhyming version in English, so I had to make my own, taking a lot of inspiration from rockleetist. (Seriously, a lot.) My original version is here.

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“The first miracle that came to me
Was your birth as a new entity;
The next miracle that did occur
Was the time that we spent together”

She is just a robot that was made
By my hands to stave off loneliness
Her creation was a miracle
Of science (of science)

But inside her, there’s a missing part
Something that I just could not create
It is software that is called a heart
In a program

“With, my heart and my soul I do pray
That she might feel emotion someday”
These, the words at the front of my thoughts
Every day

Alas, a barrier impassable;
All that happened was the ticking of the clock
My technology was useless for creating one true heart

“In your eyes my reflection appears –
What does it mean to you?
How can I help you to understand –
What shall I do?”

For my life was draining, the end drawing near
Death, my imminent fate… yet
She could not comprehend what that meant
Not quite yet…

“Tell me master… why do you cry?”

Mystery, emotion, emotion, mystery
“And now I truly know how happiness feels”
Mystery – emotion – emotion – mystery
And now this sadness in me seems so surreal”
Mystery – emotion – a heart that’s – too full
“And yet I still cannot understand....”

“The first miracle that came to me
Was your birth as a new entity;
The next miracle that did occur
Was the time that we spent together
The third miracle won’t come to be
At least, not something I will live to see – ”

“… A message is being received… the sender… the future…”
…Me?

From
Some
Future century, ‘cross space and time
Reached a message in stumbling rhyme
Simple melody filled to brim with love
Voice just as glorious as the angels above

Thank you my friend…
Thank you my friend…
Even though you are gone you have shown me the light
Thank you my friend…
Thank you my friend…
Thank you for everything you’ve done in me life
Thank you my friend…
Thank you my friend…
Thank you for the many days that we spent together
Thank you my friend…
Thank you my friend…
I will sing of you forever…


“The first miracle that came to me
Was your birth as a new entity;
The next miracle that did occur
Was the time that we spent together
The third miracle one day will be
Your acquisition of a heart and true empathy
The last miracle I will not need
These three miracles are enough to make me pleased

Thank you my friend…
Thank you my friend…

And so here is the trollified...

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CT: D--> The first miracle that came to me
CT: D--> Was your birth as a new entity;
CT: D--> The next miracle that did occur
CT: D--> Was the time that we spent together

She lives in a soulbot that was made
By my hands to host her on this plane
And their fusion was a miracle
Of science (of science)

But inside her, there’s a missing part
Something I could not make her accept
It was pity placed within her heart
In a program

CT: D--> With, my heart and my soul I do pray
CT: D--> That she might be my matesprit someday
These, the words at the front of my thoughts
Every day

Alas, a barrier impassable;
All that happened was the ticking of the clock
My technology was useless for creating true redrom

CT: D--> In your eyes my reflection appears –
CT: D--> What does it mean to you?
CT: D--> How can I press my suit for your hand –
CT: D--> What shall I do?

For I loved her truly, though she did not care,
From that day that we met… but
She could not feel pity for me
Not quite yet…

AA: Tell me, Zahhak… why d0 y0u cry?”

Mystery, emotion, emotion, mystery
“And now I truly know how pity does feel
Mystery – emotion – emotion – mystery
And now this sadness in me seems so surreal”
Mystery – emotion – a heart that’s – too full
“And yet I still cannot understand....”

“The first miracle that came to me
Was your birth as a new entity;
The next miracle that did occur
Was the time that we spent together
The third miracle won’t come to be
At least, not something I will live to see – ”

AA: … A message is being received… arriving fr0m… the future…”
…Me?

From
Some
Future century, ‘cross space and time
Reached a message in stumbling rhyme
Simple melody filled to brim with love
Voice just as glorious as the angels above

AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Only after you death, did I come to sympathize
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you for everything you’ve done in my life
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you for the many days that we spent together
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: I will sing of you forever…


CT: D--> The first miracle that came to me
CT: D--> Was your birth as a new entity;
CT: D--> The next miracle that did occur
CT: D--> Was the time that we spent together
CT: D--> The third miracle one day will be
CT: D--> Your finding somewhere in your heart some pity for me
CT: D--> The last miracle I will not need
CT: D--> These three miracles are enough to make me pleased

CT: D--> Thank you my dear…
CT: D--> Aradia…

The verse with all the "Thank you my dear/friend" etc is sung simultaneously with the verse just below it.

Here's the original song:

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And finally, here's rockleetist's cover of Kokoro (Rin's version), from which I took so much inspiration:

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Enjoy, if you like.

[apolloSun]

REQUEST: Kokoro by Rin Kagamine

Done for Aradia? Idk, I had the idea today, but I'm bad at rewrites. < A >

It's been done!

Kokoro - for Aradia

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I lived in a soulbot that was made
By a blueblood lost now to the void
Its creation was a miracle
Of science (STRONG science)

Yet inside me was a broken part
Something that he failed to recreate:
Pumping blood, but sour, was the heart
that he programmed

Though as the days slowly passed me by
Though he alone, stood right by my side
Rage though I might, though we as one would fight
Every day

Still I could not look beyond the shades
Pondering not the thoughts behind his face
Bursting with hate for all his countless plays
To mend my heart

Now the Maid of Time, goddess anew
Resurrected in flesh and blood
Past the point of no return
I have been reborn

So then why do I see all these tears
Surely this was triumph enough
Or could it be that posthumously
He won over my heart?

Mystery – emotion – emotion – mystery
And now I can remember how pity feels
Mystery – emotion – emotion– mystery
And now this sadness in me seems so surreal
Mystery – emotion– a heart that's – too full
And yet I still cannot understand…

I am finally starting to see
How piteous his life came to be
Soft feelings I have long forgot
Yet now I know all too well

I will pity his sad memory
From my thoughts he shall not depart
I only wish that he’d lived to see
The true rebirth of my heart

I can sing now the purest melodies
I dedicate my song to you!

Thank you my dear…
Thank you my dear…
Only after your death, did I come to sympathize
Thank you my dear…
Thank you my dear…
Thank you for everything you’ve done in my life
Thank you my dear…
Thank you my dear…
Thank you for the many days that we spent together
Thank you my dear…
Thank you my dear…
I will sing of you forever…

Technically I did this one first.

Kokoro - Kiseki (Heart/Miracle); Equius' Version

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I couldn't find a good rhyming version in English, so I had to make my own, taking a lot of inspiration from rockleetist. (Seriously, a lot.) My original version is here.

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“The first miracle that came to me
Was your birth as a new entity;
The next miracle that did occur
Was the time that we spent together”

She is just a robot that was made
By my hands to stave off loneliness
Her creation was a miracle
Of science (of science)

But inside her, there’s a missing part
Something that I just could not create
It is software that is called a heart
In a program

“With, my heart and my soul I do pray
That she might feel emotion someday”
These, the words at the front of my thoughts
Every day

Alas, a barrier impassable;
All that happened was the ticking of the clock
My technology was useless for creating one true heart

“In your eyes my reflection appears –
What does it mean to you?
How can I help you to understand –
What shall I do?”

For my life was draining, the end drawing near
Death, my imminent fate… yet
She could not comprehend what that meant
Not quite yet…

“Tell me master… why do you cry?”

Mystery, emotion, emotion, mystery
“And now I truly know how happiness feels”
Mystery – emotion – emotion – mystery
And now this sadness in me seems so surreal”
Mystery – emotion – a heart that’s – too full
“And yet I still cannot understand....”

“The first miracle that came to me
Was your birth as a new entity;
The next miracle that did occur
Was the time that we spent together
The third miracle won’t come to be
At least, not something I will live to see – ”

“… A message is being received… the sender… the future…”
…Me?

From
Some
Future century, ‘cross space and time
Reached a message in stumbling rhyme
Simple melody filled to brim with love
Voice just as glorious as the angels above

Thank you my friend…
Thank you my friend…
Even though you are gone you have shown me the light
Thank you my friend…
Thank you my friend…
Thank you for everything you’ve done in me life
Thank you my friend…
Thank you my friend…
Thank you for the many days that we spent together
Thank you my friend…
Thank you my friend…
I will sing of you forever…


“The first miracle that came to me
Was your birth as a new entity;
The next miracle that did occur
Was the time that we spent together
The third miracle one day will be
Your acquisition of a heart and true empathy
The last miracle I will not need
These three miracles are enough to make me pleased

Thank you my friend…
Thank you my friend…

And so here is the trollified...

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CT: D--> The first miracle that came to me
CT: D--> Was your birth as a new entity;
CT: D--> The next miracle that did occur
CT: D--> Was the time that we spent together

She lives in a soulbot that was made
By my hands to host her on this plane
And their fusion was a miracle
Of science (of science)

But inside her, there’s a missing part
Something I could not make her accept
It was pity placed within her heart
In a program

CT: D--> With, my heart and my soul I do pray
CT: D--> That she might be my matesprit someday
These, the words at the front of my thoughts
Every day

Alas, a barrier impassable;
All that happened was the ticking of the clock
My technology was useless for creating true redrom

CT: D--> In your eyes my reflection appears –
CT: D--> What does it mean to you?
CT: D--> How can I press my suit for your hand –
CT: D--> What shall I do?

For I loved her truly, though she did not care,
From that day that we met… but
She could not feel pity for me
Not quite yet…

AA: Tell me, Zahhak… why d0 y0u cry?”

Mystery, emotion, emotion, mystery
“And now I truly know how pity does feel
Mystery – emotion – emotion – mystery
And now this sadness in me seems so surreal”
Mystery – emotion – a heart that’s – too full
“And yet I still cannot understand....”

“The first miracle that came to me
Was your birth as a new entity;
The next miracle that did occur
Was the time that we spent together
The third miracle won’t come to be
At least, not something I will live to see – ”

AA: … A message is being received… arriving fr0m… the future…”
…Me?

From
Some
Future century, ‘cross space and time
Reached a message in stumbling rhyme
Simple melody filled to brim with love
Voice just as glorious as the angels above

AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Only after you death, did I come to sympathize
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you for everything you’ve done in my life
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you for the many days that we spent together
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: I will sing of you forever…


CT: D--> The first miracle that came to me
CT: D--> Was your birth as a new entity;
CT: D--> The next miracle that did occur
CT: D--> Was the time that we spent together
CT: D--> The third miracle one day will be
CT: D--> Your finding somewhere in your heart some pity for me
CT: D--> The last miracle I will not need
CT: D--> These three miracles are enough to make me pleased

CT: D--> Thank you my dear…
CT: D--> Aradia…

The verse with all the "Thank you my dear/friend" etc is sung simultaneously with the verse just below it.

Here's the original song:

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And finally, here's rockleetist's cover of Kokoro (Rin's version), from which I took so much inspiration:

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Enjoy, if you like.

Okay! Thanks! I'm sorry for the repeat, I'm bad at navigating forums. Haha!

[apolloSun]

I made another thing. This one is based on "Shadow of the Day" by Linkin Park. It is about Rose failing to resist the urge to seek revenge, because Grimdark!Rose is the best Rose.

In case anyone wants to voice it, the chorus might seem a bit weird. I had to fit two syllables where there used to be one, but it should work because it was a held note. I think it works best if "green" gets four beats, and "sun" gets one. As in "greeeen sun."

Shadow of the Horrorterrors (Completed Lyrics unless someone has an idea to improve them)

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I close the instant-message window.
There's nothing left for me to say.
Her blood is spattered on the crystal.
I know that you took her away.

And the Green Sun will set for you,
The Green Sun will set for you.
And the sting of needles' spark
Will embrace you in grimdark,
And the Green Sun will set for you.

I fly to meet you, wreathed in shadow.
My friends all plead for me to stay.
Sometimes decisions are so simple.
It's time you faced the Light of day.

And the Green Sun will set for you,
The Green Sun will set for you.
And the sting of needles' spark
Will embrace you in grimdark,
And the Green Sun will set for you.

And the sting of needles' spark
Will embrace you in grimdark,
And the Green Sun will set for you.

And I swear that you will rue
Everything you've made me do,
And the Green Sun will set for you.

I attempted this, that's fine, right?

[Laasya Apria]

I did this because I'm dumb
it's actually quite terrible imo but someone said I should keep posting on here so... @ w@;

[Rhapsodyinaqua]

I made another animu song parody...

This goes to the tune of Go Goin ni Mai Yeah from Sayonara Zetsubou Sensei (original: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nfERFk8F_Bg )

these divided days just keep 0n passing us by 0_0
This lifestyle is s--o outdated anyhow~! 3
n0 g00d can c0me 0f keeping maj0rities d0wn
Helping out others is what ruling's supposed to be all about!

i pretend t0 be 0kay with everything
I can face the world with a big toothy grin!
but n0thing will change if we h0ld 0ur all th0ughts in
That's why our new world we're making ourselves will be di-ffer-ent~!

facing the c0ld, facing the st0rm, i w0nt give up f0r anything!
No matter what he throws at us, we're gonna kick the glub out of the black king!

Come on, let's go, go work together in sgrub!
The future will be brighter, you'll see!
Even if we don't make it past the vast glub,
Our teamwork will shine on eternally!

Come on, let's go, go work together in sgrub!
This is our chance, just take it from me!
Somewhere we'll have a life of peace and of love,
And no more violence.
So, until then, bring it on!

I'll wake you with a kiss and we'll get moving along! 3
n0w i can see why y0u made this b0t s0 STR0NG...>_>
Relationship drama is the L---EAST of our qualms!
weve g0t t0 steel that queen's ring and then breed an army 0f fr0gs!

l00ping timelines, d00med other selves pass by me listless in the night.
Bubbles and dreams far in the sky, we're gonna find some way to make this end right!

Come on, let's go, go work together in sgrub!
It's time to fulfill our destinies!
Even if it seems hopeless, never give up!
We're not some squishy, pink Earth monkeys! (JUST TROLL THE LOT OF THEM!)

Go, go work together in sgrub!
Whether from Scratch or package, we'll be...
Able to show that cue ball what we're made of!
Can't keep us trapped, you see!
Some of us will make it through!

Go, go work together in sburb.
The future will be brighter, somehow...
With our new friends, we'll throw Lord English a curb
And Betty Crocker better's gonna have a cow!

Come on, let's go, go work together in sgrub!
This is our chance, just take it from me!
Somewhere we'll have a life of peace and of love,
And no more violence.
So, until then, bring it on!

And here's the one I sang on tindeck:

And here's the picture I drew to go with it: http://auditorysugar.tumblr.com/post...g-from-tindeck

[gremlinCrescendo]

here's a snippet of 6 foot 7 i did with tavros and gamzee.

homestuck needs more rap battles