OK, then here's the current version. It's close enough to the top of the page that it should last us for a while.
W I P: I AM THE VERY MODEL OF A FUCKING AWESOME GENERAL
I AM THE VERY MODEL OF A FUCKING AWESOME GENERAL,
WELL VERSED IN THINGS AUTHORITATIVE, ROMANTIC, AND TEMPORAL.
THAT BRAINLESS JUGGALO BELIEVES MY LEADERSHIP'S A MIRACLE.
IF YOU REFUSE TO FOLLOW ME, THEN YOU ARE FUCKING TERRIBLE.
I'M VERY WELL ACQUAINTED, TOO, WITH EVERYTHING TO DO WITH PAILS,
WITH MATESPRITSHIP AND KISMESIS, WITH AUSPISTICES AND MORAILS
About binomial theorem I'm teeming with a lot o' news,
With many cheerful facts about the square of the hypotenuse.
MY REALISTIC SELF-IMAGE IS JUST ONE FORM OF MY MASTERY—
I NEVER SHY FROM POINTING OUT MISTAKES MADE BY A PASTER ME.
IN SHORT, IN THINGS AUTHORITATIVE, ROMANTIC, AND TEMPORAL
I AM THE VERY MODEL OF A FUCKING AWESOME GENERAL.
I know our mythic history, King Arthur's and Sir Caradoc's;
I answer hard acrostics, I've a pretty taste for paradox,
THE DERSIAN KING WILL TELL YOU THAT MY TRIUMPH'S INESCAPABLE,
FOR NEVER IN TROLL HIST'RY HAS A LEADER BEEN SO CAPABLE.
I CAN WIELD MY SICKLE WHILE PERFORMING YOUTH ROLLS ACROBATICALLY,
AND MAKE A SERIES OF INSPIRING SPEECHES CHARISMATICALLY.
INDEED, I'D SAY MY GREATEST STRENGTH IS MY ADAPTABILITY,
WHICH SERVES ME WELL WHEN I AM QUELCHING INTRA-TEAM HOSTILITY.
I'LL ALWAYS KEEP THINGS RUNNING TO THE BEST OF MY ABILITIES,
I'VE NEVER BEEN A TROLL TO SHIRK FROM MY RESPONSIBILITIES.
IN SHORT, IN THINGS AUTHORITATIVE, ROMANTIC, AND TEMPORAL
I AM THE VERY MODEL OF A FUCKING AWESOME GENERAL.
IN FACT, WHEN I KNOW HOW TO STOP A DOZEN TROLLS FROM FLIPPING OUT
WHEN HALF OF THEM ARE PSYCHOPATHS AND ONE OF THEM IS TRIPPING OUT,
When such affairs as sorties and surprises I'm more wary at,
And when I know precisely what is meant by "commissariat",
When I have learnt what progress has been made in modern gunnery,
When I know more of tactics than a novice in a nunnery—
WHEN I CAN PACIFY THE GRUBBERS WHO CRY "LET ME OUT OF THIS"
WELL, THEN IT CAN BE SAID THAT I AM EVERYBODY’S AUSPISTICE.
For my military knowledge, though I'm plucky and adventury,
Has only been brought down to the beginning of the century;
BUT STILL, IN THINGS AUTHORITATIVE, ROMANTIC, AND TEMPORAL
I AM THE VERY MODEL OF A FUCKING AWESOME GENERAL.
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03-27-2011, 08:30 PM #251Maid of Awesome
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OK, then here's the current version. It's close enough to the top of the page that it should last us for a while.
W I P: I AM THE VERY MODEL OF A FUCKING AWESOME GENERAL
(Contains material from me, Zero, vexatiousIdler, and rhythmicSmasher.)Last edited by ceruleanTresses; 03-29-2011 at 07:35 PM.
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03-27-2011, 08:47 PM #252Knight of Balance
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Written and sung by me. v_v
Lyrics under spoiler.
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03-27-2011, 09:10 PM #253Maid of Awesome
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Oh my god yokaiy. That is awesome and you are awesome by extension.
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WIP FINAL Karkat's part
I'm sorry...the syllable count was off.Beating up anons since 1994
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Ffff thanks CT.
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@CT - Heh. Nice so far.
@yokaiy - Glub! Two fins up!
Complete
Okay, this is the most ridiculous thing I have ever done. It's on the edge of lyric rewriting and a full-blown scene. But decide for yourself which direction it leans in.
Mother 1's "Eight Melodies" rewritten. Only in WIP form because of freakin' Eridan. XD Not sure he should have so many lines.
EDIT: Changed status to complete since the lyrics were already done and all I did was tweak Vriska's line a bit from 8 o's to 8 exclamation marks. The version with acts, however, is still WIP due to a lack of lines and will continue to be so unless somebody wants to try their hand at it.
Eight Melodies, Twelve Trolls (final title)
Lyrics alone:
With "acts"
Original Lyrics
The two goals here were:
1. To assign each troll at least one line. They would never sing together like in the original song, so they had to have their own lines.
2. Dialogue. In the original there is a lot of "la la la la la" and we know that not even half of the trolls would stand to sing through that. Unfortunately I'm horrible with capturing their voices. Soooo if anybody wants to take a shot at recording some of this you'll know what to fill the "la la la" portions with. :P Doesn't even have to be what I typed up there. Go with your gut!
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yokaiy.....
that was beautiful
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Ffffff you guys are too kind ;o;
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03-27-2011, 09:58 PM #259Finally Back!
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U can't bust me
Singing this shall be my project this week! [/ohgodifinallygottasing]
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@BassicGuy THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUAWESOMEFINALLYAKARKATINEED EDAKARKAT
Also, I'm doing this as a bit of a reference guide of how I intended the syllables to be in IF YOU COULD HATE(Although I am a bit female to be Karkat. I don't want to have any part in the finished product, just mapping out the syllables. Also I put no effort into the voice in this because I have a bit of a sore throat and it's just a syllable guide.)
@Ace Problem Inspector - You are so cool, and thank you.
@SquirrelPants - Awesome, thanks.Last edited by ScientificFlorist; 03-27-2011 at 11:23 PM.
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03-27-2011, 11:45 PM #261Witch of Doom
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Hello :D So, I rewrote the lyrics to Under the Sea from the Little Mermaid with Sun Stealer and with help from codeGnave and Whatever You Say =) It's with Feferi and Eridan singing, so once we record it I'll post it :D
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Would anyone kill me if I posted all my old stuff?
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03-28-2011, 01:34 AM #263The X of Y
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YES. >| (nah, we would only maim you slightly)
Originally Posted by cynicalCanasian
A buddy of mine wrote another Boom De Yada from a fan's POV I guess? And I was kind of wondering If we could get a bunch of people to sing it and make a whole big World Peace MSPA Mashup going on!
Sing it in your own voice, sing it with a friend, just say the words in rhythm, I don't care!
Lyrics, original and an instrumental version in the spoiler:
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03-28-2011, 01:55 AM #264Maid of Awesome
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Do it, everyone else has been. Including me. Originally Posted by cynicalCanasian
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There will be no maiming in this thread Originally Posted by Zosephine
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On another topic, am I wrong in thinking that someone already set up a project thread for the Radio deal? Or was it just the free radio website that was made?
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03-28-2011, 12:06 PM #266Maid of Awesome
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What is wrong with me?
Original song.
im all alone (Completed Lyrics)
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03-28-2011, 12:48 PM #267Witch of Doom
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NOTHING. ABSOLUTELY NOTHING. THAT WAS FUCKING HILARIOUS. XD KARAT AS PATSY. FFFFFFFFT. Originally Posted by ceruleanTresses
/has not listened to the original song yet because i have no headphones and i'm in the dining hall =P
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AGREED. Originally Posted by Rocketship Potter
NOTHING. ABSOLUTELY NOTHING. THAT WAS FUCKING HILARIOUS. XD KARAT AS PATSY. FFFFFFFFT. Originally Posted by ceruleanTresses
/has not listened to the original song yet because i have no headphones and i'm in the dining hall =P
That was amazing, CT.
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03-28-2011, 01:41 PM #269Maid of Awesome
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Aww, thanks guys! I made the connection halfway through Genetics class and I was like, "Oh. My. GOG. That is Eridan's song."
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WELP Originally Posted by ceruleanTresses
SURE IS ME RECORDING FOUR ERIDAN SONGS THIS WEEK
WHY YOU DO DIS, CT
WHY YOU DO DIS
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03-28-2011, 03:08 PM #271Keeper of stars
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regarding pirates of penzance
What do you think? Hope i got the rhyming pattern right this time, I think i might pronounce words differently to how you do it or something....meh
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03-28-2011, 03:26 PM #272Maid of Awesome
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I definitely like the first lines of both of those couplets! The only thing is that for the second couplet, I might have to move anything I take from it to a verse other than the seventh verse, or else rephrase it. The reason for that is that the seventh and eighth verses follow a theme of "when I can do this, when I can do that," all leading up to the conclusion that all these skills make Karkat everybody's auspistice.
Once I'm done with my homework for the day, I'll work on incorporating this new material. Thanks for contributing! Keep it up--this is a tough song and we will only complete it by working together.
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03-28-2011, 03:29 PM #273
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Yes! XD That portrays Eridan so perfectly. Originally Posted by ceruleanTresses
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I'm a little late to the party, but this is so amazing and perfect. X'D Bravo. Originally Posted by ceruleanTresses
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03-28-2011, 03:44 PM #275Maid of Awesome
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Ahahaha, thanks guys. The best part was that I hardly had to change Eridan's lines at all, because it was pretty much perfect for him already. Most of the effort involved was in Karkat's lines.
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