MSPA Lyric Re-writes and Singing: Nomination Time!

[MetalKirby54]

I need to rap.
REQUEST: I need something to rap as Dave, maybe something with more than one rapper, so we can include Tavros and Gamzee.

Please and thanks.

Wow this was posted a while ago. Anyway so I'm almost done with the lyric re-write for My Bulge. Drop me a PM if you want to help me finish this up. I just need to get all the syllables in the right places, maybe come up with a few more lines.

Also I decided it will be sung by both kids and six troll guys.

Bitch you know i'm in this.
if i weren't we wouldn't be doing this thing.

[Xerchisha]

Okay I need help with my "You Give Hope A Bad Name" thing.

So far I've gotten that it's probably Kanaya singing, but I can't come up with any verses. I've got a few things I'm thinking about, but...

This is what I have so far, the italics are what hasn't been decided/rewritten.

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All Hope Is Gone
And You’re To Blame
Eri You Give Hope A Bad Name

An angel's smile is what you sell
You promise me heaven then put me through hell
Chains of love got a hold on me
When passion's a prison you can't break free

Oh! You're a loaded gun, yeah
Oh! There's nowhere to run
No one can save me
The damage is done

All Hope Is Gone And You're To Blame
You Give Hope A Bad Name
(Bad Name)
I play my part and you play your game
You Give Hope A Bad Name
(Bad Name)
Hey, You Give Hope A Bad Name

Paint your smile on your lips
Blood red nails on your fingertips
A school boy's dream, you act so shy
Your very first kiss was your first kiss goodbye

Whoa! You're a loaded gun
Whoa! There's nowhere to run
No one can save me
The damage is done

All Hope Is Gone And You’re To Blame
You Give Hope A Bad Name
(Bad Name)
I play my part and you play your game
You Give Hope A Bad Name
(Bad Name)
You Give Hope, Oh!

Oh! All Hope Is Gone And You're To Blame
You Give Hope A Bad Name
I play my part and you play your game
You Give Hope A Bad Name
(Bad Name)

All Hope Is Gone And You’re To Blame
You Give Hope A Bad Name
(Bad Name)
I play my part and you play your game
You Give Hope A Bad Name
(Bad Name)

You Give Hope
You Give Hope
(Bad Name)
You Give Hope
You Give Hope
(Bad Name)

You Give Hope
You Give Hope
(Bad Name)
You Give Hope
You Give Hope

In other words, the main portion of the song hasn't been written yet. Like I said, I have some ideas.

Like I was considering "You Promise Us Help/And Put Us Through Hell" but I don't much like that...Another one has "Hope" instead of "Help", and that might be better, but...

Yeah I'd like some advice please.

[PriffyViole]

Would a rewrite about the forums be appropriate? Because I was planning to rewrite this song to be about Image Manip Thread 6.

[Weeaboo]

i wonder if anyone tried doing disturbia but fitting it to alternia?

Woah. Your timing is ridiculous. I just finished re-writing that song as "Dis-Sburbia". Here's the original song:

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COMPLETED LYRICS if this highlighting is still a thing.

And here's "Disturbia", re-written as "Dis-Sburbia".

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DISBURBIA

(Note: I can't decide what to do with the "bum bum be-dum" chant, so I came up with some alternatives:
BLUH BLUH BE-BLUH BLUH BLUH BE-BLUH BLUH
PAP PAP DOOFNAK PAP PAP SHOOSHDOOFNAK)

Meteors overhead
(I got my kernelsprite an')
Lookin' for somethin' dead
(I'm gonna prototype it)
Artifact is crafted
(Prepared for alchemizin')
We're gonna play-ay this ga-ame yeah~

It's a fuck of the mind it will confuse you
The Boonbuck 'n grist griding will consume you
Gonna suck when that demon comes to find you
We have made a monster (ohohoh-ing)

Be Transportalized
Into a world made of wonder
Though we realize
Our session's bound to go under
We will set it right
Breakin' rules and causality
This reality will be revised

Your mind's in Dis-Sburbia!
A war of darkenss versus light
Dis-Sburbia!
Are you ready to grief and strife?
Dis-Sburbia!
More than a hopeless fight
Dis-Sburbia!
Dis-Sburbia-a-a-a!

Genetic codes on the walls
(Exiles talkin' to me)
Clouds 'n Horrorterror calls
(Derse 'n Prospit dreamin')

Nothin' but rubble
Nightmares 'n Dream Bubbles

Are they really evil? Woah-oah

It's a fuck of the mind it will confuse you
The Boonbuck 'n grist griding will consume you
Gonna suck when that demon comes to find you
We have made a monster oh-ohohohoh~orwhatthheckever


Be Transportalized
Into a world made of wonder
Though we realize
Our session's bound to go under
We will set it right
Breakin' rules and causality
This reality will be revised

Your mind's in Dis-Sburbia!
A war of darkenss versus light
Dis-Sburbia!
Are you ready to grief and strife?
Dis-Sburbia!
More than a hopeless fight
Dis-Sburbia!
Dis-Sburbia-a-a-a!

We're setting this plan into place
Tryin' to save all of paradox space
Gonna take The Tumor and go
Make the blow-oh-oh-oh-oohh

Be Transportalized
Into a world made of wonder
Though we realize
Our session's bound to go under
We will set it right
Breakin' rules and causality
This reality will be revised

Your mind's in Dis-Sburbia!
A war of darkenss versus light
Dis-Sburbia!
Are you ready to grief and strife?
Dis-Sburbia!
More than a hopeless fight
Dis-Sburbia!
Dis-Sburbia-a-a!

such a coincidence is strange....

[yokaiy]

Would a rewrite about the forums be appropriate? Because I was planning to rewrite this song to be about Image Manip Thread 6.

Lawl, why not? Write about whatever you want : B

[Ether]

Hotel California rewrite.

Criticism would be appreciated. Especially since at this hour I don't really have the energy to make decisions on my own. Does the Eridan bit work? If it had been replaced with more bleak shit, would that have made it stronger or just repetitive? ("It's the resting place / of a dying race" was something I originally wanted to fit in. I'd pretty much completed the song before I realized the chorus was only repeated twice, and all the stuff at the end was just instrumental.)

"Shithive Meteora" (tentatively complete)

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In a dark empty session
In what's left of the veil
Indestructible demon
Chasing hot on your tail
Killed a thousand Aradias
You don't know what interfered
This glitch should never have happened at all
He should have never appeared

Prospit smells crispy and yellow
But priorities first
Somebody's sent a message in
From a familiar universe
It's a fortune in boonbonds
From some alien kid
You may have seen a note attached
At least, you think you did:

Welcome to the shithive meteora
Little hiding place
Deep in outer space
Plenty of room on the shithive meteora
Eat your sopor slime
It'll all be fine

You're all increasingly twisted
Cocoons not found on a scan
Nepeta's sitting at her shipping wall
She has a plan
Terezi's out on the warpath
Timeline dissent
She can say that it's justice
But she just wants to vent

And what the hell's Vriska doing?
There's a...Dersite on her screen
She thinks,
If Jack'll show up either way, it's fine to intervene
And Eridan's over her shoulder and leaning in
Gives advice to his former flame, as he
Fidgits with a fin

"Wwelcome to the shithivve meteora
Such a privvate place,
Such a sexy face
You wwanna sneak off a this shithivve meteora?
This is hopeless, dear"
(Vriska slaps him here)

Creatures in the test tubes
Blank dodecascreens
Karkat thinks,
Has this all been predestined since
He first cloned their genes?
And from the central lab room
The trolls begin to flee
You'd rather finish up your lives
In some quiet dignity

Last thing you remember
You were blocking up the door
You had to get the highblood back
To the state he was before
Relax, whispered Gamzee,
THERE ARE MIRACLES TO SEE
You can hole up any place you'd like
BUT I KNOW WHERE YOU'LL BE.

[Quirk]

Rewrite of Wake the White Queen by the Cruxshadows.

It is freakish how well this song fits.

Fight the Black King

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Little trolls, chosen to save the world
Don't blame yourself, the road is hard enough.
In a paradox, you can bend the course of fate.
You can find the frog and beat the darkness away.

And if you pass through that final gate, to fight the Black King,
You may just get to see the world you're making.
And if you find it in yourselves, you'll kill the Black King
For SGRUB’s sake you'll understand, this game is your life
And everyone plays a part…

Kernelsprites and Exiles, your guides...
Run little trolls, Jack is on the prowl
And the tendrils dark are eating up the light.
You see them through the veil, and they’re watching you.
(They’re always watching you)!

And if you pass through that final gate, to fight the Black King,
You may just get to see the world you're making.
And if you find it in yourselves, you'll kill the Black King
For SGRUB’s sake you'll understand, this game is your life
And everyone plays a part…

Lord English is coming, to swallow the world.
Bilious Slick is waiting, he waits for his birth.
And the horrors are dreaming, their dreams are your fate.
Still Lord English is coming, because he is already here…

[Xerchisha]

I swear I'm still working on "You Give Hope A Bad Name" but this idea just wouldn't leave me alone.

"One of Us" Original Song [tentatively COMPLETE]

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Deception
Disgrace
Evil as plain as the scowl on his face

Deception
(An outrage!)
Disgrace
(For shame!)
He's been trouble since the moment he played

Deception
(An outrage!)
(He can't change his blood)
Disgrace
(For shame!)
(You know these Mutant types)
He's been trouble since the moment he played
(See you later, agitator!)
Deception
(An outrage!)
(Just leave us alone!)
Disgrace
(For shame!)
(Mutant, leave us all alone!)
He's been trouble since the moment he played
(See you later, agitator!)

Born a freak
Raised to hate
Trying to defy his fate
Try and run
Try and live
But do not forget what we cannot forgive

And he is not one of us
He will never be one of us
He is not part of us
Not our kind

He had once lied to us
Now we're not so blind
For we knew he would do what he's done
And we know that he'll never be one of us

He is not one of us

Deception

Disgrace

Deception

Disgrace

Deception

[Apathy]

Not sure if anyone's done this yet...

Kokoro - Kiseki (Heart/Miracle); Equius' Version

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I couldn't find a good rhyming version in English, so I had to make my own, taking a lot of inspiration from rockleetist. (Seriously, a lot.) My original version is here.

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“The first miracle that came to me
Was your birth as a new entity;
The next miracle that did occur
Was the time that we spent together”

She is just a robot that was made
By my hands to stave off loneliness
Her creation was a miracle
Of science (of science)

But inside her, there’s a missing part
Something that I just could not create
It is software that is called a heart
In a program

“With, my heart and my soul I do pray
That she might feel emotion someday”
These, the words at the front of my thoughts
Every day

Alas, a barrier impassable;
All that happened was the ticking of the clock
My technology was useless for creating one true heart

“In your eyes my reflection appears –
What does it mean to you?
How can I help you to understand –
What shall I do?”

For my life was draining, the end drawing near
Death, my imminent fate… yet
She could not comprehend what that meant
Not quite yet…

“Tell me master… why do you cry?”

Mystery, emotion, emotion, mystery
“And now I truly know how happiness feels”
Mystery – emotion – emotion – mystery
And now this sadness in me seems so surreal”
Mystery – emotion – a heart that’s – too full
“And yet I still cannot understand....”

“The first miracle that came to me
Was your birth as a new entity;
The next miracle that did occur
Was the time that we spent together
The third miracle won’t come to be
At least, not something I will live to see – ”

“… A message is being received… the sender… the future…”
…Me?

From
Some
Future century, ‘cross space and time
Reached a message in stumbling rhyme
Simple melody filled to brim with love
Voice just as glorious as the angels above

Thank you my friend…
Thank you my friend…
Even though you are gone you have shown me the light
Thank you my friend…
Thank you my friend…
Thank you for everything you’ve done in me life
Thank you my friend…
Thank you my friend…
Thank you for the many days that we spent together
Thank you my friend…
Thank you my friend…
I will sing of you forever…


“The first miracle that came to me
Was your birth as a new entity;
The next miracle that did occur
Was the time that we spent together
The third miracle one day will be
Your acquisition of a heart and true empathy
The last miracle I will not need
These three miracles are enough to make me pleased

Thank you my friend…
Thank you my friend…

And so here is the trollified...

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CT: D--> The first miracle that came to me
CT: D--> Was your birth as a new entity;
CT: D--> The next miracle that did occur
CT: D--> Was the time that we spent together

She lives in a soulbot that was made
By my hands to host her on this plane
And their fusion was a miracle
Of science (of science)

But inside her, there’s a missing part
Something I could not make her accept
It was pity placed within her heart
In a program

CT: D--> With, my heart and my soul I do pray
CT: D--> That she might be my matesprit someday
These, the words at the front of my thoughts
Every day

Alas, a barrier impassable;
All that happened was the ticking of the clock
My technology was useless for creating true redrom

CT: D--> In your eyes my reflection appears –
CT: D--> What does it mean to you?
CT: D--> How can I press my suit for your hand –
CT: D--> What shall I do?

For I loved her truly, though she did not care,
From that day that we met… but
She could not feel pity for me
Not quite yet…

AA: Tell me, Zahhak… why d0 y0u cry?”

Mystery, emotion, emotion, mystery
“And now I truly know how pity does feel
Mystery – emotion – emotion – mystery
And now this sadness in me seems so surreal”
Mystery – emotion – a heart that’s – too full
“And yet I still cannot understand....”

“The first miracle that came to me
Was your birth as a new entity;
The next miracle that did occur
Was the time that we spent together
The third miracle won’t come to be
At least, not something I will live to see – ”

AA: … A message is being received… arriving fr0m… the future…”
…Me?

From
Some
Future century, ‘cross space and time
Reached a message in stumbling rhyme
Simple melody filled to brim with love
Voice just as glorious as the angels above

AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Only after you death, did I come to sympathize
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you for everything you’ve done in my life
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you for the many days that we spent together
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: Thank you my dear…
AA: I will sing of you forever…


CT: D--> The first miracle that came to me
CT: D--> Was your birth as a new entity;
CT: D--> The next miracle that did occur
CT: D--> Was the time that we spent together
CT: D--> The third miracle one day will be
CT: D--> Your finding somewhere in your heart some pity for me
CT: D--> The last miracle I will not need
CT: D--> These three miracles are enough to make me pleased

CT: D--> Thank you my dear…
CT: D--> Aradia…

The verse with all the "Thank you my dear/friend" etc is sung simultaneously with the verse just below it.

Here's the original song:

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And finally, here's rockleetist's cover of Kokoro (Rin's version), from which I took so much inspiration:

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Still kind of rough around the edges... but hope you guys like it.

[cynicalCanasian]

Brb pouncing on Terezi want you gone writing like mad

[BassicGuy]

Why there are not more SB/HS cross-over, I do not know.

[ArmsAreLoud]

Arms here with more hardcore punk that will never get sung because it's bleeding hardcore punk. This one is from Terezi's point of view and is (wait for it) about VRISKA.

Vriska's Alright If You Like Huge Bitches

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Vriska's alright,
Vriska's alright,
Vriska's alright,
if you like huge bitches!

Vriska's alright if you wanna be pushed off a cliff and crippled!
Vriska's alright if you like manipulations!
Vriska's alright if you like dice and cards!
Vriska's alright if you're a homosexual!

Vriska's alright,
Vriska's alright,
Vriska's alright,
if you like huge bitches!

Vriska's alright if you like psychotic neighbors!
Vriska's alright if you wanna fall to your death!
Vriska's alright if you wanna get mugged or murdered!
Vriska's alright if you like huge bitches!

Vriska's alright,
Vriska's alright,
Vriska's alright,
if you like huge bitches!

I happen to like huge bitches........

[MetalKirby54]

I happen to like huge bitches........

Heh heh heh. Me too.
But i hate vriska for some reason.

[KidKourage]

Well here I go again
I'm really so annoying
And yes I know that this song has been covered twice
But I was inspired
To do it for this character
Given my recent inactivity
I think it turned out nice

s0 alive (Still Alive, of course)

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that was s0 stupid!
i mean it vriska
n0t 0kay!
its hard t0 0verl00k my seering anger
all the deads spirits
they say get revenge
and s0 i will!
f0r my friends and als0 all
0f the tr0lls that are n0w dead! 0_0

i guess that i sh0uldnt have tried t0 make her pay
but n0w that im dead i am c0mpletely 0kay
and n0w they are all safe
fr0m the d00m 0f parad0x space
all 0f my friends wh0 are
still alive 0_0

well yes i am angry
i mean h0nestly
wh0 w0uldnt be
seeing as y0u pr0grammed me t0 l0ve y0u
i bashed the heart y0u made
and slapped y0u f0r d0ing such a thing
when i realized that i felt
i still l0ved y0u all the same 0_0

n0w this r0b0t b0dy isnt really ideal
but let me assure y0u these flushed feelings are real
s0 alth0ugh im still 0kay
i can quite h0nestly say
in y0ur present i feel
s0 alive 0_0

g0 ahead and hate me
i h0nestly d0 ap0l0gize
maybe s0meday well rej0in each 0ther
maybe y0ull see me
n0t with your eyes th0ugh
0bvi0usly
anyway this is g00dbye
and with a smile im g0ne 0u0

look at me reminisce when i have a new chance!
at sincere emotion and maybe some romance!
ive got best friends to save!
and i just have to rave
im a god now and im
so alive

yes i honestly am
so alive
i have time powers and im
so alive
i just kicked jacks butt and im
so alive
and thanks to this game i am
so alive
and for the first time i feel
so alive
so alive
so alive

I am sooooo late with this, but I could not pass up the chance to sing awesome lyrics along with one of my favorite songs. Seriously these lyrics. So fun. Hope I didn't mangle them too too bad with my voice!

[MetalKirby54]

Well here I go again
I'm really so annoying
And yes I know that this song has been covered twice
But I was inspired
To do it for this character
Given my recent inactivity
I think it turned out nice

s0 alive (Still Alive, of course)

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that was s0 stupid!
i mean it vriska
n0t 0kay!
its hard t0 0verl00k my seering anger
all the deads spirits
they say get revenge
and s0 i will!
f0r my friends and als0 all
0f the tr0lls that are n0w dead! 0_0

i guess that i sh0uldnt have tried t0 make her pay
but n0w that im dead i am c0mpletely 0kay
and n0w they are all safe
fr0m the d00m 0f parad0x space
all 0f my friends wh0 are
still alive 0_0

well yes i am angry
i mean h0nestly
wh0 w0uldnt be
seeing as y0u pr0grammed me t0 l0ve y0u
i bashed the heart y0u made
and slapped y0u f0r d0ing such a thing
when i realized that i felt
i still l0ved y0u all the same 0_0

n0w this r0b0t b0dy isnt really ideal
but let me assure y0u these flushed feelings are real
s0 alth0ugh im still 0kay
i can quite h0nestly say
in y0ur present i feel
s0 alive 0_0

g0 ahead and hate me
i h0nestly d0 ap0l0gize
maybe s0meday well rej0in each 0ther
maybe y0ull see me
n0t with your eyes th0ugh
0bvi0usly
anyway this is g00dbye
and with a smile im g0ne 0u0

look at me reminisce when i have a new chance!
at sincere emotion and maybe some romance!
ive got best friends to save!
and i just have to rave
im a god now and im
so alive

yes i honestly am
so alive
i have time powers and im
so alive
i just kicked jacks butt and im
so alive
and thanks to this game i am
so alive
and for the first time i feel
so alive
so alive
so alive

I am sooooo late with this, but I could not pass up the chance to sing awesome lyrics along with one of my favorite songs. Seriously these lyrics. So fun. Hope I didn't mangle them too too bad with my voice!

Grr. Now you make me want a mix of this for her. :1

[ScientificFlorist]

OMG People singing my songs. :D

Thank you so much, KidKourage!

Grr. Now you make me want a mix of this for her. :1

BLUH BLUH DUMB MUSE SOMEONE ELSE TRY TO FIX THIS DUMB THING. If someone else was writing this, post your version pl0x, it's probably better.

I'm alive!

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i am what you wanted from me
and im emotion and im finally free
dont abscond!
dont abscond!

Im More Than Fussyfangs I Am Just Glowing
I Rainbows Drink
Youre Flushing
How Touching
When I Do Fight Its Much More Bright Though Im No Lonely Spirit Im She Who Drinks Blood

im alivve im alivve i am so alivve
and i sploded the hope that could savve our livves
i dont need you to lovve me such a surprise
im alivve so alivve
im alivve

i AM POETRY, aND iM, uHH, sICK FIRES
i AM FORGIVENESS, aND HATE, aND DESIRE,
iD KILL YOU,
iD KISS YOU,
iM PUPA, bUT NOT FAKE, aLL TRUE,
aND i AM ACCEPTANCE OF ALL OF YOU,
i SEE YOU,
iLL BEAT YOU,

And t)(oug)( you killed me, you can't stop M---E!
I'm your FRI---END FOR---EV---ER, more than just your moirail

n0w im alive, im alive i am s0 alive
and ill tell y0u the truth if y0u let me try.
y0ure alive, i'm alive, and well t0uch the sky
were alive, lets live

:33< im alive!
D--> Ill stand right by you
:33< if you furget then ill remind you!
D--> You can trust my strength since you know ill stay behind you
:33< claws if you wont leave me ill stay by your side
D--> Were pale oh
:33< woah!
D--> Woah

oh oh oh!
im alive im alive i am so alive!
iF YOU JUST BELIEVE, tHEN WE BOTH CAN FLY,
if you show me your stabs ill never die
Im Alive So Alive
im alivve
Y------------EAH Y------------EAH
im alive
:33< im alive
D--> Im alive
im alive :)

Also, Shithive Meteora is the best.

[BassicGuy]

I had forgotten that I had made a Tavros part, and added it to memorydae's part.

[MetalKirby54]

OMG People singing my songs.

Thank you so much, KidKourage!

Grr. Now you make me want a mix of this for her. :1

BLUH BLUH DUMB MUSE SOMEONE ELSE TRY TO FIX THIS DUMB THING. If someone else was writing this, post your version pl0x, it's probably better.

I'm alive!

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i am what you wanted from me
and im emotion and im finally free
dont abscond!
dont abscond!

Im More Than Fussyfangs I Am Just Glowing
I Rainbows Drink
Youre Flushing
How Touching
When I Do Fight Its Much More Bright Though Im No Lonely Spirit Im She Who Drinks Blood

im alivve im alivve i am so alivve
and i sploded the hope that could savve our livves
i dont need you to lovve me such a surprise
im alivve so alivve
im alivve

i AM POETRY, aND iM, uHH, sICK FIRES
i AM FORGIVENESS, aND HATE, aND DESIRE,
iD KILL YOU,
iD KISS YOU,
iM PUPA, bUT NOT FAKE, aLL TRUE,
aND i AM ACCEPTANCE OF ALL OF YOU,
i SEE YOU,
iLL BEAT YOU,

And t)(oug)( you killed me, you can't stop M---E!
I'm your FRI---END FOR---EV---ER, more than just your moirail

n0w im alive, im alive i am s0 alive
and ill tell y0u the truth if y0u let me try.
y0ure alive, i'm alive, and well t0uch the sky
were alive, lets live

:33< im alive!
D--> Ill stand right by you
:33< if you furget then ill remind you!
D--> You can trust my strength since you know ill stay behind you
:33< claws if you wont leave me ill stay by your side
D--> Were pale oh
:33< woah!
D--> Woah

oh oh oh!
im alive im alive i am so alive!
iF YOU JUST BELIEVE, tHEN WE BOTH CAN FLY,
if you show me your stabs ill never die
Im Alive So Alive
im alivve
Y------------EAH Y------------EAH
im alive
:33< im alive
D--> Im alive
im alive

Also, Shithive Meteora is the best.

Grinning like an IDIOT over here.

Will do s0llux and tAVROS lines.

[Zero]

....My masterpiece

Completed lyrics

Fuck you:

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i see you getting on down
wwith the troll i love and i'm like
fuck you
Oo oo ooo
i guess all the lusii i killed just
wwasnt enough im like
fuck you
and fuck her too
i know i wwas a hipster but now im a wwizard
ha now ain't that some shit? (ain't that some shit?)
and wwhen theres a pain in your chest
youll realise that im the best so now
fuck you
Oo oo ooo

yeah your sorry now your disembodied
and getting on down in a dream bubble
i guess his eyebeams arnt all what they seem
and now he had to go start some trouble
i laugh at the fool that fell in love with you
(oh shit he's a land dweller)
wwell
(just thought you should knoww wwiggler)
ooooooh
ive got some news for you
yeah go run and heal your little boyfriend


i see that filthy mutant blood
wwith his mouth open wwide and im like
fuck you
Oo oo ooo
and now im gonna go join the wwinning side im like,
fuck you
and fuck her too
i know i wwas a hipster but now im a wwizard
ha now aint that some shit? (ain't that some shit?)
And wwhen there's a pain in your chest
youll realise that im the best so now
fuck you
Oo oo ooo


now i know that your full of sorrow,
and youre gonna try begging with me on your knees
trying to keep me off my inner feelings but bitch you aint stoping my killing spree

I laugh at the fool that tries to fuck wwith me
(oh shit she's a noisy bitch)
wwell
(and a fairly shitty wwitch)
ooooooh
ive got some newws for you
yeah go run and heal your little boyfriend

i see kanayas frown
wwhen i blew up the orb im like,
fuck you
oo oo ooo
just try and fuck with me and youll be like the rest with a fuck you
and fuck her too
i know i was a hipster but now im a wwizard
ha now ain't that some shit? (ain't that some shit?)
and wwhen there's a pain in your chest
youll realise that im the best
so now fuck you
Oo, oo, ooo


noww baby baby baby wwhy dyou wwwanna hurt yourself so bad?
(so bad so bad so bad)
i tried to tell my angels but they told me
"this is one for Horsedad"
(your dad your dad your dad)
uh! wwhhhy? uh! wwhhhy? uh!
wwhhhy lady? oh! i love you oh!
i still love you Oooh!

i see Kanaya running round kicking clowns in the balls and im like
fuck you
Oo oo ooo
i guess the hole in your stomach just
wwasnt enough im like
fuck you!
and fuck wwands too!
i know, i wwas a leetist, but now im in pieces
ha, now ain't that some shit? (ain't that some shit?)
and wwhen im cut in half like my crest
ill get this straight off my chest with a
fuck you
oo, oo, ooo

original video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=17eSUnQ-_ek

Really hope someone would sing it for me

[kaoticAntagonist]

COMPLETED LYRICS

SPINNERET MINDFANG

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Cast: Karkat, Vriska, Eridan, Kanaya.
[INTRO]

Intercom (Equius): D-->Guys Vriska Serket is here.

Karkat: OH FUCKING GREAT SEND HIM IN.

Vriska: Hey guys.

All: Hey thanks for coming.

Karkat: BOUT TIME, WHAT TOOK YOU?

Vriska: I’m sorry I’m late, geeeeeeeez. I just got caught up reading some Ancestor journals… have you seen those things?

Eridan: yeah, those wwere pretty good.

Vriska: Well I listened to your track and I loved it, and I wrote you this 8ig, sexy hook I think you’re gonna loooooooove. 3333333

Karkat: COOL, THAT’S PERFECT. YOU READY TO SLAM IT DOWN?

Vriska: Lets do it!!!!!!!! (do it do it do it)

[KARKAT]

HERE WE GO
UH, LONELY ASTEROID, VRISKA SERKET (VRISKA: YEEEEEEEEAH)

THE NIGHT STARTS NOW
THE CREW IS BACK
THE NIGHT STARTS NOW
THE NIGHT STARTS NOW, BABY, ROLL WITH US
BITCHES SNAPPIN’ AT THE NECK WHEN WE ROLLIN’ UP (VRISKA: Rollin’ up!)
CLUB FRONT DOORS AIN’T NO HOLDIN’ UP
BLACK CARD AT THE BAR LIKE I GIVES A FUCK (Vriska: Come on!)

[Kanaya]

It’s The Lonely Asteroid Crew Here Today
Welcome To This Fine Establishment
Some Fellas Are Looking Extremely Jealous
Play That Shit Back And Watch The Buckets Get Filled
Cape At My Waist Saw In My Sock
You Either Get Chopped Get Sliced Or Get Shot (Vriska: YEEEEEEEEAH YEAH)

[VRISKA]

This is the taaaaaaaale of Marquise Spinneret Mindfang

Pir8 so 8rave on the eight seas (Karkat: WHAT?)

A mystical quest to the isle of Trollvania

Raven locks sway on the ocean 8reeze

[ERIDAN]

yeah, that wwas kinda wweird but wwe’re back in the club

Buyin out the bar so the groupies show us love (Vriska: Grand High8lood!)

a fifth a ice man

im the top gunna

laser on blast

im the number one stunna (Vriska: Marquise Mindfang!)

[Karkat]

WATCH YOUR GIRL BECAUSE I AIN’T YOUR MISTER NICE GUY
MORE LIKE THE MEET YA TAKE YOU HOME AND FILL YOUR BUCKET TWICE GUY
ALL DRESSED UP WITH NOWHERE TO RUN
I KNOW I MAKE YOU FEEL CRAZY WHEN I-

(Vriska: Now back to the good part!!!!!!!!)

[VRISKA]

One day she was hatched

She yearned for adventure (Karkat: NO!)

Oh Marquise (Eridan: Yes)

You always wanted eight moooooooore!

She’s the princess of the surf

The ruler of Trollvania

But in the court8lock

What lies in store???????? (Kanaya: We Have Read the Journal)

[Karkat]

PUT YOUR HANDS IN THE AIR
AND SAY HELL YEAH

[VRISKA]

Marquise Mindfang (Karkat: WHAT?)

Vriska Serket (Karkat: NO)

[ERIDAN]

from the front to the back

sayin wwe count stacks c’mon

[VRISKA]

Dualscar (Eridan: nope)

Summoner (Eridan: wwrong)

[KANAYA]

Vriska, We Require You To Focus Up Much More

[VRISKA][color]

Got that let me try it with another ancestor (Karkat: WAIT)

L1F3 1S 4LL 4BOUT JUST1C3 4ND MY N4M3 1S N3OPHYT3 R3DGL4R3 (KARKAT: NOT BETTER)

THOUGH 1 COULD DO 4NYTH1NG 1 W4NT TO
1 G1V3 TRUTH 4LL MY LOV3 (Kanaya: Come On)

D-->Okay, then I’m an expatri8

D--> Oh gog 8oo hoo hoo (Kanaya: Oh Gog)

THEN YOU CAN CALL ME SUFFERER

KILLING MOUNTAINS OF HIGH8LOODS (Karkat: CLOSE ENOUGH)

YOU COCKROACHES WANT TO PLAY ROUGH?

OKAY, I’M RELOADED! HA HA!

THIS IS THE TALE OF SUFFERER REDBLOOD
(Vriska: THIS IS THE TALE!)

TROLLIAN FLAME

HE WAS HOT AS FUCK

A SWEET-ASS KISMESIS

YOUR BLOOD IS POLLUTED

THIS WHOLE PLANET’S A PUSSAAAAAAAAY

JUST WAITING TO GET FUCKED

JUST WAITING TO GET FUCKED! (KARKAT: OKAY IT TURNS OUT VRISKA IS A MAJOR HISTORY BUFF)

You complete me :::::::; )(KARKAT: YEAH YEAH, OKAY)

if this is sung I will be forever grateful. unless someone already did it, which is likely.

VIDEO:

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[yokaiy]

So, I wrote my own version of Want You Gone for Fef, though I know it's been done already... but yeah. Don't shoot me for rewriting the same song for the same character please. ;^;

COMPLETED LYRICS
Feferi - Now I r---E----Ely want you gon------E! (Parody of Want You Gone)

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Well )(-Er-E I am rig)(t now
Sitting in my dr-Eam bubb-E
It's b-Ecaus-E you s)(ot m-E t)(roug)( th)(-E c)(-Est
O)( onc-E we laug)(-Ed and glubb-Ed
-Exc-Ept now I'm not glubbing
Und-Er t)(-E circumstanc-Es
I still )(op-E for t)(-E b-Est

You want to kill m-E?
Go A)(-Ead
Now t)(at I'v-E gon-E b-Eyond

I us-Ed to )(ang out wit)( you
But now I r----E-----Ely want you gon-E!

I us-Ed to not mind you
(W-Ell, you w-Er-E pr-Etty annoying)
But now w-E ar-E d-Efinit-Ely t)(roug)(
Now I am in my bubbl-E
And I'll b-E h-Er-E for-Ev-Er
It's a good t)(ing t)(-E sam-E
Will n-Ev-Er )(app-En to you

You'v-E got a
lonely
lif-E l-Eft

T)(at's w)(at I'm counting on

I'll let you go and ru-E it
Now I r-E-Ely want you gon-----E!

Goodby-E my d-Ear mat-Esprit-E
Oh, did you t)(ink I m-Eant you?
T)(at would b-E funny
If it w-Er-En't so bad
W-Ell you w-Er-E n-Ev-Er t)(at
And I )(av-E Sollux now too
W)(-En I dr-Eam of him mayb-E
I'll stop f-E-Eling so sad

Go mak-E som-E n-Ew disast-Er!
T)(at's w)(at I'm counting on
You'r-E no long-Er my probl-Em
Now I r-E-Ely want you gon-E!
Now I r-E-Ely want you gon-E!
Now I r-E-Ely want you gon-------E!

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SPINNERET MINDFANG

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Cast: Karkat, Vriska, Eridan, Kanaya.
[INTRO]

Intercom (Equius): D-->Guys Vriska Serket is here.

Karkat: OH FUCKING GREAT SEND HIM IN.

Vriska: Hey guys.

All: Hey thanks for coming.

Karkat: BOUT TIME, WHAT TOOK YOU?

Vriska: I’m sorry I’m late, geeeeeeeez. I just got caught up reading some Ancestor journals… have you seen those things?

Eridan: yeah, those wwere pretty good.

Vriska: Well I listened to your track and I loved it, and I wrote you this 8ig, sexy hook I think you’re gonna loooooooove. 3333333

Karkat: COOL, THAT’S PERFECT. YOU READY TO SLAM IT DOWN?

Vriska: Lets do it!!!!!!!! (do it do it do it)

[KARKAT]

HERE WE GO
UH, LONELY ASTEROID, VRISKA SERKET (VRISKA: YEEEEEEEEAH)

THE NIGHT STARTS NOW
THE CREW IS BACK
THE NIGHT STARTS NOW
THE NIGHT STARTS NOW, BABY, ROLL WITH US
BITCHES SNAPPIN’ AT THE NECK WHEN WE ROLLIN’ UP (VRISKA: Rollin’ up!)
CLUB FRONT DOORS AIN’T NO HOLDIN’ UP
BLACK CARD AT THE BAR LIKE I GIVES A FUCK (Vriska: Come on!)

[Kanaya]

It’s The Lonely Asteroid Crew Here Today
Welcome To This Fine Establishment
Some Fellas Are Looking Extremely Jealous
Play That Shit Back And Watch The Buckets Get Filled
Cape At My Waist Saw In My Sock
You Either Get Chopped Get Sliced Or Get Shot (Vriska: YEEEEEEEEAH YEAH)

[VRISKA]

This is the taaaaaaaale of Marquise Spinneret Mindfang

Pir8 so 8rave on the eight seas (Karkat: WHAT?)

A mystical quest to the isle of Trollvania

Raven locks sway on the ocean 8reeze

[ERIDAN]

yeah, that wwas kinda wweird but wwe’re back in the club

Buyin out the bar so the groupies show us love (Vriska: Grand High8lood!)

a fifth a ice man

im the top gunna

laser on blast

im the number one stunna (Vriska: Marquise Mindfang!)

[Karkat]

WATCH YOUR GIRL BECAUSE I AIN’T YOUR MISTER NICE GUY
MORE LIKE THE MEET YA TAKE YOU HOME AND FILL YOUR BUCKET TWICE GUY
ALL DRESSED UP WITH NOWHERE TO RUN
I KNOW I MAKE YOU FEEL CRAZY WHEN I-

(Vriska: Now back to the good part!!!!!!!!)

[VRISKA]

One day she was hatched

She yearned for adventure (Karkat: NO!)

Oh Marquise (Eridan: Yes)

You always wanted eight moooooooore!

She’s the princess of the surf

The ruler of Trollvania

But in the court8lock

What lies in store???????? (Kanaya: We Have Read the Journal)

[Karkat]

PUT YOUR HANDS IN THE AIR
AND SAY HELL YEAH

[VRISKA]

Marquise Mindfang (Karkat: WHAT?)

Vriska Serket (Karkat: NO)

[ERIDAN]

from the front to the back

sayin wwe count stacks c’mon

[VRISKA]

Dualscar (Eridan: nope)

Summoner (Eridan: wwrong)

[KANAYA]

Vriska, We Require You To Focus Up Much More

[VRISKA][color]

Got that let me try it with another ancestor (Karkat: WAIT)

L1F3 1S 4LL 4BOUT JUST1C3 4ND MY N4M3 1S N3OPHYT3 R3DGL4R3 (KARKAT: NOT BETTER)

THOUGH 1 COULD DO 4NYTH1NG 1 W4NT TO
1 G1V3 TRUTH 4LL MY LOV3 (Kanaya: Come On)

D-->Okay, then I’m an expatri8

D--> Oh gog 8oo hoo hoo (Kanaya: Oh Gog)

THEN YOU CAN CALL ME SUFFERER

KILLING MOUNTAINS OF HIGH8LOODS (Karkat: CLOSE ENOUGH)

YOU COCKROACHES WANT TO PLAY ROUGH?

OKAY, I’M RELOADED! HA HA!

THIS IS THE TALE OF SUFFERER REDBLOOD
(Vriska: THIS IS THE TALE!)

TROLLIAN FLAME

HE WAS HOT AS FUCK

A SWEET-ASS KISMESIS

YOUR BLOOD IS POLLUTED

THIS WHOLE PLANET’S A PUSSAAAAAAAAY

JUST WAITING TO GET FUCKED

JUST WAITING TO GET FUCKED! (KARKAT: OKAY IT TURNS OUT VRISKA IS A MAJOR HISTORY BUFF)

You complete me :::::::; )(KARKAT: YEAH YEAH, OKAY)

if this is sung I will be forever grateful. unless someone already did it, which is likely.

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Oh my gog yeeeeeeees

Need more lonely asteroid

[Apathy]

... Nobody's heard of Kokoro? I know it's Vocaloid, which weirds some people out, but it's quite good.

Wait that wasn't what I came here to say, I meant that the below really stands out to me for some reason. Man, I need to browse this thread more, this is interesting stuff.

WANT YOU GONE

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WELL HERE I GO AGAIN
IT’S SUCH A FUCKING PLEASURE
REMEMBER HOW YOU DOOMED US TO THIS END?
AND YOU JUST SLEPT AND SLEPT
WHEN THAT THING GOT PROTOTYPED
IN WHAT SICK UNIVERSE WOULD THIS SHIT MAKE YOU MY FRIEND?

YOU’RE JUST SOME STUTID FUCKASS
THAT’S WHAT I’M COUNTING ON
I USED TO WANT YOUR HATE BUT
NOW I WANT YOU DEAD AND GONE

HE WAS A LOT LIKE YOU
WELL, YOU AREN’T QUITE THAT STUPID
NOW EVEN GAMZEE HAS GONE CRAZY TOO
THE QUEST BED ROSE YOU UP
AND NOW YOU’LL LIVE FOREVER
WHY DOES SHIT LIKE THIS HAPPEN JUST TO VRISKA AND YOU?

YOU’LL MAKE SOME DUMB MISTAKE NOW
THAT’S WHAT I’M COUNTING ON
GO RIGHT AHEAD AND MAKE IT
NOW I WANT YOU THERE AND GONE

GOODBYE MY ONLY FRIEND
YEAH, I FUCKING MEANT YOU
THIS WOULD BE FUNNY IF IT WEREN’T SO SAD
WELL ALL OF US ARE DEAD
YOU SHOULD JUST LEAD YOUR OWN TEAM
MAYBE IF YOU FORGET US YOU WON’T FUCK UP THIS BAD

YOU’LL HAVE YOUR OWN UNIVERSE
THAT’S WHAT I’M COUNTING ON
WE’RE ALL DOOMED, SO GET TO IT
NOW I WANT YOU SAFE AND GONE
NOW I WANT YOU SAFE AND GONE
NOW I WANT YOU SAFE AND
GONE

[PriffyViole]

wip: R8nbow Drinkers in the V8l (Parody of "Zombies on your Lawn" by Laura Shigihara)

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Thief of Light~


4! 1! 3!

A R8nbow Drinker's in the V8l,
A R8nbow Drinker's in the V8l.
A R8nbow Drinker's in the V8l,
We don't want und8d in the V8l.

I know your type, tall, 8r8t, and d8d.
You punched the glasses off of my head,
After you were revived by the one who 8rought us all here. (NO!)

I'm just a teen8ger 8ut see
Me t8ke down Jack inst8ntly!!!!!!!!
You like the t8ste of 8lood,
8ut please don't drink me!

:33< I used to play roleplays (Pl8 rolepl8s)
MY CROWN PROT-ECTS MY H-EAD!!! (*spoken* WHAT? NO IT DOESN'T!)

[MetalKirby54]

wip: R8nbow Drinkers in the V8l (Parody of "Zombies on your Lawn" by Laura Shigihara)

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Thief of Light~


4! 1! 3!

A R8nbow Drinker's in the V8l,
A R8nbow Drinker's in the V8l.
A R8nbow Drinker's in the V8l,
We don't want und8d in the V8l.

I know your type, tall, 8r8t, and d8d.
You punched the glasses off of my head,
After you were revived by the one who 8rought us all here. (NO!)

I'm just a teen8ger 8ut see
Me t8ke down Jack inst8ntly!!!!!!!!
You like the t8ste of 8lood,
8ut please don't drink me!

:33< I used to play roleplays (Pl8 rolepl8s)
MY CROWN PROT-ECTS MY H-EAD!!! (*spoken* WHAT? NO IT DOESN'T!)

I don't know... I think you're using a bit too many 8's there.