MSPA Lyric Re-writes and Singing: Nomination Time!

[vociferocity]

Idea: "She Hates You"

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I don't even know where to begin with that idea...

if - if I had any idea at all what song you were referring to I would give it a shot lol

[Bezbozny]

"The Carnival" with lyrics.

"welcome to THE CARNIVAL" (Click the image)

[Doodled]

Idea: "She Hates You"

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I don't even know where to begin with that idea...

if - if I had any idea at all what song you were referring to I would give it a shot lol

The Beatles? "She Loves You"?

[termlesslyContingent]

Rose's Love Story (to Kanaya) C:
I'm putting the lyrics here, and I've also put them on deviantART.

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I was still young when you first watched me.
You viewed my life, my past, you saw
Me standing there,
Building snow-lusii in winter air.

You told me things that I didn't believe in.
You told me we talked in the future and I said
"Nonsense",
But now it makes so much sense,

That you were Kanaya,
You were told to troll me,
But you were trying so hard to be my friend.
And now theres not much time left,
You're begging me, "Please don't go".

And I say,
"Kanaya, take me somewhere where we'll be alright.
Beam me up, we'll ride in your spaceship through the greenest light.
I know you're an alien but won't you say yes?
Baby I love you now lets get out of this mess."

Our eighth conversation, I was pleased to see you,
I wanted to know the name that I
Could call you by,
Escape this land of rain and light.

And you're an Alien,
And I'm a human,
And you were trying so hard to be my friend.
But you are everything to me,
Now you're begging me, "Please don't go."

Now I say,
"Kanaya, take me somewhere where we'll be alright.
Beam me up, we'll ride in your spaceship through the greenest light.
I know you're an alien but won't you say yes?
Baby I love you now lets get out of this mess."

"My parents are dead, I don't think I can get through alone
I wish I never went grimdark, but now it's real.
I'm so afraid, all I want is to hold you!
Kanaya I love you, just tell me that its true.

Oh no

Well, you couldn't see me,
After the viewport just went black.
My humanity is fading,
But Kanaya I still want you back.

And I wanna say,
Kanaya I'm sorry but, what what was there for me to do?
Now its too late for me to feel these odd things for you,
I wish I could go back in time like Dave right now
But you warned me, you told me that this won't work out

"Stay with me, Rose, you'll never have to be alone.
I love you, and that's all I really know.
Stop with this dark magic, lets make you a new dress
It's a sad story, but please just say yes."

O-ooh noo

We were still young when I left you...

Original song: Love Story by Taylor Swift

[Dansrusse]

Ooh, have you recorded this? If you haven't, and aren't planning to, I would totally love to cover it! Crediting YOU, of course, your lyrics are really lovely!

[Dansrusse]

Hi guys! I'm kinda new on this forum, so I hope I'm doing things correctly...but I wrote and recorded a song! It's "Too Stong" and it's Equius's version of Britney Spears' Stronger.
http://tindeck.com/listen/qjcx

Guys, I am a CHICK. I sound like a CHICK. Can one of you please re-record this as Equius? I would be super flattered!

[BassicGuy]

@Dansrusse:
Might I ask what are the lyrics?

[mintt]

speaking of songs for Equius that ladies cannot sing...
Cher's "Believe"
just... look at the lyrics.
and... think about it. LOL

[Rhapsodyinaqua]

Well...I know I'm kind of late in joining the bandwagon but...I hope you don't mind that I tried to sing "mem0ries" @~@ I like that song...

[Rhapsodyinaqua]

Um...I also sang the Aradia version of "Kokoro" although there's tons wrong with it (partially because I'm an alto and this song is hiiiiigh) but if anyone would like to remix this and/or sing the duet version with me, I would be so 0kay with that y0u d0n't even kn0w! 0u0

[PriffyViole]

Hey, I've got some completed lyrics...kinda.

It's not for Rain8ow Drinkers in The Veil.

It's a song for Feferi to the tune of Cool Tapes' "Limozeen is not very nice".

-Eridan is NOT V-ERY NIC-E!

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-Eridan is not very nice!
Killing off Lusii is not very nice!
T)(at's why I call t)(is song
-Eridan is not very nice!
Being overbearing is not very nice!
T)(at's why I call t)(is song
I'll sing it all nig)(t long
-ERIDAN IS NOT V-ERY NIC-E!
Witc)( of Life! Witc)( of Life!

Original:

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[Pinkehlicious]

I come bearing rewrites! Yay, I'm contributing!

I noticed that mintt wrote a "Blind" rewrite for Terezi, and I thought a Vriska version would be pretty cool too, so here!

COMPLETED: "8lind" / for Vriska, from Ke$ha's "Blind".

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I think you got the 8est of me,
You're avenging our team's enemy,
You've left me all alone, alone, alone, alone.
The or8 sparks, I'm so low,
You did this, I already know,
I'll leave you all alone, alone, alone, alone.

I'm sick and tired of the mess you've made this,
You're never gonna catch me cry.
(Oh whoa whoa)
You must 8e 8lind if you can't see
8ecause of the ghosts she had to die.
(Oh whoa whoa)
Without me, you're nothing!
(Oh whoa whoa)
You will 8e 8lind since you can't see
If you mess with me you'll have to die.
(Oh whoa whoa)

I've let go, finally over you,
This heart8r8k that you put me through,
I'm 8etter all alone, alone, alone, alone.
The lance drops, you're so low,
Your last chance, and it's gotten old,
Now look who's all alone, alone, alone, alone.

I'm sick and tired of the mess you've made this,
You're never gonna catch me cry.
(Oh whoa whoa)
You must 8e 8lind if you can't see
You'll mess this up, you have to die.
(Oh whoa whoa)
Without me, you're nothing!
(Oh whoa whoa)
You must 8e 8lind if you can't see
There's no way that you'll make me die.
(Oh whoa whoa)

You trusted me, you were my team,
Then I lied, I tore the seams,
I 8roke you down,
Now I look around,
I'm all alone........
I'm all alone now.

I'm sick and tired of the mess I've made this,
I will never let myself cry.
(Oh whoa whoa)
You must 8e 8lind if you can't see
I'll kill Jack so you all won't die.
(Oh whoa whoa)
Without me, you're nothing!!!!!!!!
(Oh whoa whoa)
I must 8e 8lind since I can't see
That 8ecause of this I have to die.

And anyone remember that "Love Me Dead" WIP I posted (a lot of) pages back? Well, I cleaned it up and finished it! Thanks to those who suggested parts, you're all awesome and helpful. :D

COMPLETED: "Love Me Dead" / Eridan/Vriska duet, from Ludo's "Love Me Dead".

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lovve me cancerously
like a salt sore soaked in the sea
your arrogance means you are the spider queen
narcissistic and mean
Kill me romantically!
Fill my vaults with treasure then sneak in and steal it 8ack.
8itter and dum8, you're high-8looded scum.
youre awwful
I h8 you!

she sails through moonbeams slowwly
she knowws just howw to scold me
and wwhen her edges soften
put her body in a coffin
I know he drains me slowly!
He wears me down to 8ones in FLARP.
Must 8e a sign on my heart!
It says, "ooooooooh love me dead!"
lovve me dead

You call yourself the Prince of Hope,
You're a genocidal sea-dwelling dope,
Dashing and 8old, looting for gold- leave me alone.
you suck so passionately
youre a no good connivvin fuckin backstabbin
land dwwellin sea wwench
ill call you up drunk (W8, isn’t that Feferi’s jo8?)
You're hideous!
and sexy

she sails through moonbeams slowwly
she knowws just howw to scold me
and wwhen her edges soften
put her body in a coffin
He doesn't drain me slowly.
I 8arely work up a sweat in FLARP.
Is there a sign on my heart?
That says, "ooooooooh love me dead?"
Love me dead!
wwoww uh

(Hey, Eridan, we need to talk.)
(ok about wwhat)
(Um, you see, I don’t really think this is going anywhere.)
(wwhat do you mean)
(Eridan, I think it’s 8est if we-)
(hold on my guitar solos comin up)
(Ughhhhhhhh.)

(guitar solo!)

lovve me cancerously
(Eridan, I don’t think we should 8e rivals anymore!)
brrrot dot da d da da
(No, Eridan-)
brrrot dot da d da da
(I’m leaving-)
howws your neww boy does he knoww about me
youvve got the mark of the beast
(I’m really going to 8lock you!)
youre beautiful

she sails through moonbeams slowwly
she knowws just howw to scold me
and wwhen her edges soften
put her body in a coffin
You never drain me slowly!
I’m going to cloud Pupa in FLARP.
Wash off the sign on my heart!
It said, "ooooooooh love me dead!"
lovve me dead
Love me dead!
lovve me dead
oooohhhhhhhhhh-

(-- arachnidsGrip has blocked caligulasAquarium --)

(glub)

And here are a couple of WIPs that I'm working on, any suggestions would be helpful! All parts I'm stuck on/haven't rewritten yet are italicized.

WIP: "Tonig)(t, Tonig)(t" / for Feferi, from Hot Chelle Rae's "Tonight, Tonight".

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*SIG)(*

It’s been a really really messed up sweep,
Weeks and weeks of problems, weeks and weeks of swimmin',
And my moirail went and flus)(ed for me!
)(e's a really lonesome guy but it’s time for me to leave )(im!

Glub glub glub,
W)(atever!
Glub glub glub,
It doesn’t matter.
Glub glub glub,
O)( well!
Glub glub glub!

We’re going at it tonig)(t, tonig)(t!
There’s a game killing all trolls, destroying the world,
Tonig)(t, tonig)(t!
And we're playing to make an all-new universe.
I don’t know if we’ll make it, but watch how good I’ll fake it
It's all rig)(t, all rig)(t,
Tonig)(t, tonig)(t!

I woke up on a strange gloom moon.
Not sure )(ow I got t)(ere, sleepin' bodies all around t)(ere,
And one kinda looks just like you!
Mixed with Zach Galifianakis, )(a!

Glub glub glub,
W)(atever!
Glub glub glub,
It doesn’t matter.
Glub glub glub,
O)( well!
Glub glub glub!

We’re going at it tonig)(t, tonig)(t!
There’s a game killing all trolls, destroying the world,
Tonig)(t, tonig)(t!
And we're playing to make an all-new universe.
I don’t know if I’ll make it, but watch how good I’ll fake it
Its all rig)(t, all rig)(t,
Tonig)(t, tonig)(t!

You got me glubbing like;
Woa)(, come on!
O)()(, it doesn’t matter!
Woa)(, everybody now!
O)()(!

Just don’t stop let’s keep the beat pumpin’
Keep the beat up, lets drop the beat down
It’s my party dance if I want to
We can get crazy let it all out

Just don’t stop let’s keep the beat pumpin’
Keep the beat up, lets drop the beat down
It’s my party dance if I want to
We can get crazy let it all out

Its you and me and were runnin this town
And its me and you and were shakin the ground
And ain’t nobody gonna tell us to go cause this is our show

-Everybody!
Woa)(, come on!
O)()(, all you animals!
Woa)(, let me hear you now!
O)()(!

Tonig)(t, tonig)(t!
There’s a game killing all trolls, destroying the world,
Tonig)(t, tonig)(t!
And we're playing to make an all-new universe.
I don’t know if I’ll make it, but watch how good I’ll fake it
It's all rig)(t, all rig)(t,
Tonig)(t, tonig)(t!
It's all rig)(t, all rig)(t,
Tonig)(t, tonig)(t!
Y---EA)(!
It's all rig)(t, all rig)(t,
Tonig)(t, tonig)(t!

Just glubbing like;
Woa)(, come on,
O)()(, we're gonna make it t)(roug)(,
Woa)(, all you singletons,
O)()(, even t)(e lowbloods!

Just don’t stop lets keep the beat pumpin’
Keep the beat up, lets drop the beat down
Its my party dance if I want to
We can get crazy let it all out

Just don’t stop lets keep the beat pumpin’
Keep the beat up, lets drop the beat down
Its my party dance if I want to
We can get crazy let it all out

WIP: "Tavros" / for Vriska, from Lady GaGa's "Judas".

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Ohhhhhhhh,
I’m in love with Tavro-os, Tavro-os.
Ohhhhhhhh,
I’m in love with Tavro-os, Tavro-os.

Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! 8luh 8luh!

Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! 8luh 8luh!

When he Flarps with me I am ready,
I’ll control him off a cliff if he needs,
Forgive me when I manipul8 through his 8rain,
Even after my help he 8etrays me!

Ohhhhhhhh, oh oh oh,
Ohhhhhhhh, oh oh oh,
I'll tear him down, tear him down, down,
Ohhhhhhhh, oh oh oh,
Ohhhhhhhh, oh oh oh,
With his 8lood of 8rown, 8lood of 8rown, 8rown!

He's just a skylark fool, oh 8a8y I'm so cruel,
8ut I’m still in love with Tavros, 8a8y.
He's just a criplled fool, oh 8a8y I'm so cruel,
8ut I’m still in love with Tavros, 8a8y.

Ohhhhhhhh,
I’m in love with Tavro-os, Tavro-os.
Ohhhhhhhh,
I’m in love with Tavro-os, Tavro-os.

Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! 8luh 8luh!

I couldn't h8 a man so purely,
Even Karkat forgave his spineless way,
I’ve learned love is like a 8rick, you can
8uild a hive or sink a dead 8ody.

Ohhhhhhhh, oh oh oh,
Ohhhhhhhh, oh oh oh,
Came to tear me down, tear me down, down,
Ohhhhhhhh, oh oh oh,
Ohhhhhhhh, oh oh oh,
Spilled his 8lood of 8rown, 8lood of 8rown, 8rown!

He's just a crippled fool, oh 8a8y I'm so cruel,
8ut I’m still in love with Tavros, 8a8y.
Now he's just a dead fool, didn't mean to 8e so cruel,
8ut I’m still in love with Tavros, 8a8y.

Ohhhhhhhh,
I’m in love with Tavro-os, Tavro-os.
Ohhhhhhhh,
I’m in love with Tavro-os, Tavro-os.

8luh.

In the most Biblical sense,
I am beyond repentance
Manipul8ing pirate wench, controls your mind.
But in the cultural sense
I just speak in future tense
Judas, kiss me if offenced,
Or wear an ear condom next time

I wanna h8 you,
8ut something’s pulling me away from you.
Jesus is my virtue,
Judas is the demon I cling to
I cling to

Now he's just a dead fool, didn't mean to 8e so cruel,
8ut I’m still in love with Tavros, 8a8y.
Now he's just a dead fool, didn't mean to 8e so cruel,
8ut I’m still in love with Tavros, 8a8y.

Ohhhhhhhh,
I’m in love with Tavro-os, Tavro-os.
Ohhhhhhhh,
I’m in love with Tavro-os, Tavro-os.

Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! 8luh 8luh!

[mintt]

oh my god that Love Me Dead rewrite ahhhhhhhh <333333
if I were a better Vriska I'd do that like whoa but as it is I am just about the worst Vriska ever
(and also what even is voicing as Eridan I can't)

[Pinkehlicious]

Oh gosh, you should totally go for it! ;v; I don't know about the Eridan part though, sadly, derp

Also, I recorded my 8lind rewrite, because I needed an excuse to stay on the computer a couple hours longer, also because it was fun!

[PriffyViole]

COMPLETED SONG PLUS VOCALS!!!



I'd like someone else to do a better version, please.

[Rhapsodyinaqua]

This is the Feferi version of "Dreams to Dream" from Fival Goes West.

My buddy Nole wrote the lyrics and I gave singing them a try~!

[Dansrusse]

@Dansrusse:
Might I ask what are the lyrics?

I'm sorry it took me so long to get back to you..but of course you can have the lyrics. It's just that I'm not sure how to send them to you... *is pathetic*

[Dansrusse]

I come bearing rewrites! Yay, I'm contributing!

I noticed that mintt wrote a "Blind" rewrite for Terezi, and I thought a Vriska version would be pretty cool too, so here!

COMPLETED: "8lind" / for Vriska, from Ke$ha's "Blind".

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I think you got the 8est of me,
You're avenging our team's enemy,
You've left me all alone, alone, alone, alone.
The or8 sparks, I'm so low,
You did this, I already know,
I'll leave you all alone, alone, alone, alone.

I'm sick and tired of the mess you've made this,
You're never gonna catch me cry.
(Oh whoa whoa)
You must 8e 8lind if you can't see
8ecause of the ghosts she had to die.
(Oh whoa whoa)
Without me, you're nothing!
(Oh whoa whoa)
You will 8e 8lind since you can't see
If you mess with me you'll have to die.
(Oh whoa whoa)

I've let go, finally over you,
This heart8r8k that you put me through,
I'm 8etter all alone, alone, alone, alone.
The lance drops, you're so low,
Your last chance, and it's gotten old,
Now look who's all alone, alone, alone, alone.

I'm sick and tired of the mess you've made this,
You're never gonna catch me cry.
(Oh whoa whoa)
You must 8e 8lind if you can't see
You'll mess this up, you have to die.
(Oh whoa whoa)
Without me, you're nothing!
(Oh whoa whoa)
You must 8e 8lind if you can't see
There's no way that you'll make me die.
(Oh whoa whoa)

You trusted me, you were my team,
Then I lied, I tore the seams,
I 8roke you down,
Now I look around,
I'm all alone........
I'm all alone now.

I'm sick and tired of the mess I've made this,
I will never let myself cry.
(Oh whoa whoa)
You must 8e 8lind if you can't see
I'll kill Jack so you all won't die.
(Oh whoa whoa)
Without me, you're nothing!!!!!!!!
(Oh whoa whoa)
I must 8e 8lind since I can't see
That 8ecause of this I have to die.

And anyone remember that "Love Me Dead" WIP I posted (a lot of) pages back? Well, I cleaned it up and finished it! Thanks to those who suggested parts, you're all awesome and helpful.

COMPLETED: "Love Me Dead" / Eridan/Vriska duet, from Ludo's "Love Me Dead".

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lovve me cancerously
like a salt sore soaked in the sea
your arrogance means you are the spider queen
narcissistic and mean
Kill me romantically!
Fill my vaults with treasure then sneak in and steal it 8ack.
8itter and dum8, you're high-8looded scum.
youre awwful
I h8 you!

she sails through moonbeams slowwly
she knowws just howw to scold me
and wwhen her edges soften
put her body in a coffin
I know he drains me slowly!
He wears me down to 8ones in FLARP.
Must 8e a sign on my heart!
It says, "ooooooooh love me dead!"
lovve me dead

You call yourself the Prince of Hope,
You're a genocidal sea-dwelling dope,
Dashing and 8old, looting for gold- leave me alone.
you suck so passionately
youre a no good connivvin fuckin backstabbin
land dwwellin sea wwench
ill call you up drunk (W8, isn’t that Feferi’s jo8?)
You're hideous!
and sexy

she sails through moonbeams slowwly
she knowws just howw to scold me
and wwhen her edges soften
put her body in a coffin
He doesn't drain me slowly.
I 8arely work up a sweat in FLARP.
Is there a sign on my heart?
That says, "ooooooooh love me dead?"
Love me dead!
wwoww uh

(Hey, Eridan, we need to talk.)
(ok about wwhat)
(Um, you see, I don’t really think this is going anywhere.)
(wwhat do you mean)
(Eridan, I think it’s 8est if we-)
(hold on my guitar solos comin up)
(Ughhhhhhhh.)

(guitar solo!)

lovve me cancerously
(Eridan, I don’t think we should 8e rivals anymore!)
brrrot dot da d da da
(No, Eridan-)
brrrot dot da d da da
(I’m leaving-)
howws your neww boy does he knoww about me
youvve got the mark of the beast
(I’m really going to 8lock you!)
youre beautiful

she sails through moonbeams slowwly
she knowws just howw to scold me
and wwhen her edges soften
put her body in a coffin
You never drain me slowly!
I’m going to cloud Pupa in FLARP.
Wash off the sign on my heart!
It said, "ooooooooh love me dead!"
lovve me dead
Love me dead!
lovve me dead
oooohhhhhhhhhh-

(-- arachnidsGrip has blocked caligulasAquarium --)

(glub)

And here are a couple of WIPs that I'm working on, any suggestions would be helpful! All parts I'm stuck on/haven't rewritten yet are italicized.

WIP: "Tonig)(t, Tonig)(t" / for Feferi, from Hot Chelle Rae's "Tonight, Tonight".

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*SIG)(*

It’s been a really really messed up sweep,
Weeks and weeks of problems, weeks and weeks of swimmin',
And my moirail went and flus)(ed for me!
)(e's a really lonesome guy but it’s time for me to leave )(im!

Glub glub glub,
W)(atever!
Glub glub glub,
It doesn’t matter.
Glub glub glub,
O)( well!
Glub glub glub!

We’re going at it tonig)(t, tonig)(t!
There’s a game killing all trolls, destroying the world,
Tonig)(t, tonig)(t!
And we're playing to make an all-new universe.
I don’t know if we’ll make it, but watch how good I’ll fake it
It's all rig)(t, all rig)(t,
Tonig)(t, tonig)(t!

I woke up on a strange gloom moon.
Not sure )(ow I got t)(ere, sleepin' bodies all around t)(ere,
And one kinda looks just like you!
Mixed with Zach Galifianakis, )(a!

Glub glub glub,
W)(atever!
Glub glub glub,
It doesn’t matter.
Glub glub glub,
O)( well!
Glub glub glub!

We’re going at it tonig)(t, tonig)(t!
There’s a game killing all trolls, destroying the world,
Tonig)(t, tonig)(t!
And we're playing to make an all-new universe.
I don’t know if I’ll make it, but watch how good I’ll fake it
Its all rig)(t, all rig)(t,
Tonig)(t, tonig)(t!

You got me glubbing like;
Woa)(, come on!
O)()(, it doesn’t matter!
Woa)(, everybody now!
O)()(!

Just don’t stop let’s keep the beat pumpin’
Keep the beat up, lets drop the beat down
It’s my party dance if I want to
We can get crazy let it all out

Just don’t stop let’s keep the beat pumpin’
Keep the beat up, lets drop the beat down
It’s my party dance if I want to
We can get crazy let it all out

Its you and me and were runnin this town
And its me and you and were shakin the ground
And ain’t nobody gonna tell us to go cause this is our show

-Everybody!
Woa)(, come on!
O)()(, all you animals!
Woa)(, let me hear you now!
O)()(!

Tonig)(t, tonig)(t!
There’s a game killing all trolls, destroying the world,
Tonig)(t, tonig)(t!
And we're playing to make an all-new universe.
I don’t know if I’ll make it, but watch how good I’ll fake it
It's all rig)(t, all rig)(t,
Tonig)(t, tonig)(t!
It's all rig)(t, all rig)(t,
Tonig)(t, tonig)(t!
Y---EA)(!
It's all rig)(t, all rig)(t,
Tonig)(t, tonig)(t!

Just glubbing like;
Woa)(, come on,
O)()(, we're gonna make it t)(roug)(,
Woa)(, all you singletons,
O)()(, even t)(e lowbloods!

Just don’t stop lets keep the beat pumpin’
Keep the beat up, lets drop the beat down
Its my party dance if I want to
We can get crazy let it all out

Just don’t stop lets keep the beat pumpin’
Keep the beat up, lets drop the beat down
Its my party dance if I want to
We can get crazy let it all out

WIP: "Tavros" / for Vriska, from Lady GaGa's "Judas".

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Ohhhhhhhh,
I’m in love with Tavro-os, Tavro-os.
Ohhhhhhhh,
I’m in love with Tavro-os, Tavro-os.

Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! 8luh 8luh!

Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! 8luh 8luh!

When he Flarps with me I am ready,
I’ll control him off a cliff if he needs,
Forgive me when I manipul8 through his 8rain,
Even after my help he 8etrays me!

Ohhhhhhhh, oh oh oh,
Ohhhhhhhh, oh oh oh,
I'll tear him down, tear him down, down,
Ohhhhhhhh, oh oh oh,
Ohhhhhhhh, oh oh oh,
With his 8lood of 8rown, 8lood of 8rown, 8rown!

He's just a skylark fool, oh 8a8y I'm so cruel,
8ut I’m still in love with Tavros, 8a8y.
He's just a criplled fool, oh 8a8y I'm so cruel,
8ut I’m still in love with Tavros, 8a8y.

Ohhhhhhhh,
I’m in love with Tavro-os, Tavro-os.
Ohhhhhhhh,
I’m in love with Tavro-os, Tavro-os.

Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! 8luh 8luh!

I couldn't h8 a man so purely,
Even Karkat forgave his spineless way,
I’ve learned love is like a 8rick, you can
8uild a hive or sink a dead 8ody.

Ohhhhhhhh, oh oh oh,
Ohhhhhhhh, oh oh oh,
Came to tear me down, tear me down, down,
Ohhhhhhhh, oh oh oh,
Ohhhhhhhh, oh oh oh,
Spilled his 8lood of 8rown, 8lood of 8rown, 8rown!

He's just a crippled fool, oh 8a8y I'm so cruel,
8ut I’m still in love with Tavros, 8a8y.
Now he's just a dead fool, didn't mean to 8e so cruel,
8ut I’m still in love with Tavros, 8a8y.

Ohhhhhhhh,
I’m in love with Tavro-os, Tavro-os.
Ohhhhhhhh,
I’m in love with Tavro-os, Tavro-os.

8luh.

In the most Biblical sense,
I am beyond repentance
Manipul8ing pirate wench, controls your mind.
But in the cultural sense
I just speak in future tense
Judas, kiss me if offenced,
Or wear an ear condom next time

I wanna h8 you,
8ut something’s pulling me away from you.
Jesus is my virtue,
Judas is the demon I cling to
I cling to

Now he's just a dead fool, didn't mean to 8e so cruel,
8ut I’m still in love with Tavros, 8a8y.
Now he's just a dead fool, didn't mean to 8e so cruel,
8ut I’m still in love with Tavros, 8a8y.

Ohhhhhhhh,
I’m in love with Tavro-os, Tavro-os.
Ohhhhhhhh,
I’m in love with Tavro-os, Tavro-os.

Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! Pupa-ah-ah!
Puuuuuuuupa! 8luh 8luh!

ALL OF YOUR LYRICS ARE SO AMAZING.
I might have someone who will do Eridan...and if she can do it, I would love to cover that...

[termlesslyContingent]

Ooh, have you recorded this? If you haven't, and aren't planning to, I would totally love to cover it! Crediting YOU, of course, your lyrics are really lovely!

I haven't recorded it yet, so go ahead if you want! Thank you so much! c:

[termlesslyContingent]

Also, I have another rewrite! It's called D&D, rewritten from S&M. It's Vriska to Terezi. I'm waiting for an opportunity to record this one, because I like it a lot more than the first one I did.

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8r-8r8k it come on!
8r-8r8k it come on!
8r-8r-8r-8r8k it come on!
8r-8r8k it come on, come on, come on!
8r-8r8k it come on!
8r-8r8k it come on!
8r-8r-8r-8r8k it come on!
8r-8r8k it come on, come on, come on!
8r-8r-8r-8r8k

Feels so good 8eing 8ad,
There's no way I'm turning 8ack!
Now your pain is my pleasure,
Like searching for treasure. (Oh oh oh oh oh)

We were great, we did fine.
Our team was the 8est of all time!
8ut now it's no longer,
8esides, I was stronger! (Oh oh oh oh oh)

Cause I may 8e 8ad, 8ut
You'll never stop me from it!
This rivalry's great,
I know that you love the smell of it!
Sticks and stones may 8r8k my 8ones,
8ut FLARPing games excite me.

Cause I may 8e 8ad, 8ut
You'll never stop me from it!
This rivalry's great,
I know that you love the smell of it!
Sticks and stones may 8r8k my 8ones,
8ut FLARPing games excite me.

8r-8r8k it come on, come on, come on
Roll-roll your dice girl, come on, come on, come on
Sugar and spice, now come on, come on, come on
Roll-roll your dice girl, come on, come on, come on
8r-8r8k it 8r8k it

We were great, we did fine.
Our team was the 8est of all time!
8ut no time to linger,
You're wrapped 'round my finger! (Oh oh oh oh oh)

Cause I may 8e 8ad, 8ut
You'll never stop me from it!
This rivalry's great,
I know that you love the smell of it!
Sticks and stones may 8r8k my 8ones,
8ut FLARPing games excite me.

8r-8r8k it come on, come on, come on
Roll-roll your dice girl, come on, come on, come on
Sugar and spice, now come on, come on, come on
Roll-roll your dice girl, come on, come on, come on
8r-8r8k it 8r8k it

D-D-D&D-D-D
D-D-D&D-D-D
Ooohh

I loved our team like nothing 8efore,
We could do it all,
I wish I could 8ring it 8ack,
8ut I know you hate what I've 8ecome,
So meet me on the roof,
I'll give you the proof that I I
I liked it, liked it

Cause I may 8e 8ad, 8ut
You'll never stop me from it!
This rivalry's great,
I know that you love the smell of it!
Sticks and stones may 8r8k my 8ones,
8ut FLARPing games excite me.

Cause I may 8e 8ad, 8ut
You'll never stop me from it!
This rivalry's great,
I know that you love the smell of it!
Sticks and stones may 8r8k my 8ones,
8ut FLARPing games excite me.

8r-8r8k it come on, come on, come on
Roll-roll your dice girl, come on, come on, come on
Sugar and spice, now come on, come on, come on
Roll-roll your dice girl, come on, come on, come on
8r-8r8k it 8r8k it

D-D-D&D-D-D
D-D-D&D-D-D
D-D-D&D-D-D
D-D-D&D-D-D

[mintt]

whoops, looks like I ended up making another jade song! haha

[Bezbozny]

MeGaLoVainian RhapSody.

By redemptionDot, joeCoolieo, CharredAsperity, and Bezbozny

MeGaLoVania by Toby "Radiation" Fox, guitar by Joren "Tensei" de Bruin

(Click cover to listen)

[Sprinkles]

whoops, looks like I ended up making another jade song! haha

I first listened to this and went "hey, cool! I love Shiny Toy Guns songs!"
And then I read the lyrics with the song.... and at that moment, sadness was born.

Nevertheless, you did a great cover!

[ch00_bakka]

An idea: Karkat the Red-Blood Wiggler. Like Rudolph the Red-Nose reindeer but with Karkat.

[Coasterman29]

Has a Miracles parody been done?

Gamzee 2 Dope and Violent Dave.