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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    That's looking pretty solid, felicitousArtisan. We are in business.

    We don't know that the Dersites weren't actually present, but on the other hand, we don't actually know if they weren't present either. So I used creative license and added them to the storyboard to fill out the first part of the battle. Partially for rule of cool, partially because it lets some trolls get a bit of pre-battle spotlight, partially because I think it actually is a good question about where the Derse soldiers would be in a battle with the Black King.

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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus



    Da na na na will get the rest of the storyboard up da na na na. I really don't have anything else to say, so . . . this being the first few seconds (3:15 to 3:19 or 3:20), anything suggestions or crits?

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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    Seriously guise, this is just fucking amazing.

    No really, i cant wait.
    WOO GO AUSSIES

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    Quote Originally Posted by appleaerosol View Post


    Da na na na will get the rest of the storyboard up da na na na. I really don't have anything else to say, so . . . this being the first few seconds (3:15 to 3:19 or 3:20), anything suggestions or crits?
    That is...pretty kickass. :O

    Suggestion/thought: What if you cut panel 5 out, made panel 6 the new panel 5, and made the new panel 6 the current panel 6 except with a chainsaw?

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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    Quote Originally Posted by Windwaker View Post
    That is...pretty kickass. :O

    Suggestion/thought: What if you cut panel 5 out, made panel 6 the new panel 5, and made the new panel 6 the current panel 6 except with a chainsaw?
    W-Well . . . with panels 5 and 6, I was trying to show movement of the hand holding the lipstick from her face to her side, then I was going to have the next page which would have been a shot, from below, of her looking up at the black king (or some part of him), then two panels afterwards, she would be revving her chainsaw, with the panel before being her lipstick turning into a chainsaw.
    Last edited by appleaerosol; 04-30-2011 at 09:09 PM.

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    Okay, that pretty much has the same effect. Carry on. :P

    (But if that sequence is too slow for the pacing of the music at that point or somethin', I guess my suggestion would speed it up???)

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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    Quote Originally Posted by felicitousArtisan View Post
    Oh Look It's That Image Again. I Am Sure You Are Not In The Slightest Bit Sick Of The Sight Of it.
    That Was An Example Of Your Human Sarcasm.



    Hokay, so Now they're dressed in basically a black and white version. Are we cool? Can I call off my murderous rampage?

    I may draw some trolls before continuing with the Dersites just so I can cool off from my temporary intense hatred for these little buggers Actually, given that the next scene involves a bunch of shots of trolls killing Dersites, I may do some bits for that for catharsis.
    I'm sorry! I didn't mean to upset you... I only brought it up because it was something that Andrew specifically mentioned in Formspring once... ._.
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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    Okay guys so apparently Differential is kind of tied up at the moment, so we need somebody to do this:

    0:15 - 0:30 (15-30s) - Pan shot of the twelve trolls, in order of introduction (Karkat, Gamzee, Terezi, Sollux, Tavros, Aradia, Nepeta, Vriska, Equius, Kanaya, Eridan, Feferi).
    Everybody is angrily glaring back (about to get into the fight), except for Gamzee, who should have a zoned-out "What's going on?" expression.
    So that we can make progress.

    Any takers?

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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    Thought PolarBaroness was working on it, from that discussion in the Pesterchum memo a couple of nights ago.
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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    Oh.

    Right.

    Blech my memory.

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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    Spoilered for meteors being bigger than expected. =P



    Okay! If you let me know of these are actually useful, I can do more like them. Or I can do something else entirely different! =3 (That last one looks a bit funny animated, because it's means to be on a solid background as it jitters and it's on transparency for ease of use. Or something like that. Bluh.)
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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus


    Here it is with transparency.

    http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5924142/Transparent%20King.psd
    And there's the .psd, if anyone wants to muck about. You'll want to switch the grey to a white anyway, I'd imagine.

    EDIT: Oh my, let's see if we can't fix that speckle problem. I don't even know how that happened.
    EDIT2: there we go, it's all set. Sorry the legs are still cut off, though. Not much I can do about that.
    Last edited by Rotirt "YCobb" Kunset; 05-01-2011 at 02:24 PM.
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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    OH GOG MY KINGDOM FOR A SPOILER!

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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    Quote Originally Posted by WillSpark View Post
    OH GOG MY KINGDOM FOR A SPOILER!
    i offer up two kingdoms for it to stay out of a spoiler
    Last edited by Bellstrom; 05-01-2011 at 01:36 AM. Reason: gog damp spelling errors
    In the least offensive way possible.

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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    I have no idea what that means, ha ha
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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    Urgh, I'm going to bed. I just spent an hour working on this stupid storyboard for Gamzee's part.

    AND IT'S NOT EVEN FINISHED GOD

    but still, i tried to use whatever elements in this thread were made for his part and i honestly think the current product looks like rubbish but whatever if anyone wants to offer some recommendations i'd appreciate it

    EDIT - it's about as finished as it's gonna get with me working on it, if anyone wants the fla file, here
    Last edited by BluddoSW; 05-01-2011 at 09:50 AM.

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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    Quote Originally Posted by Rotirt "YCobb" Kunset View Post
    I have no idea what that means, ha ha
    Oh jegus, click that button at the bottom of your post that says "Edit Post" then press "Go Advanced". When that comes up use your mouse to select the IMG tags and all of the text between them and then press the button at the very end of the bar with the buttons that add bold and italic tags and stuff. Please do so before you crash everyone's computers.

    Anyway, this is coming along awesomely.
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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    In the old forum format, it isn't auto resized, it's friggen huge.

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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    Quote Originally Posted by BluddoSW View Post
    Urgh, I'm going to bed. I just spent an hour working on this stupid storyboard for Gamzee's part.

    AND IT'S NOT EVEN FINISHED GOD

    but still, i tried to use whatever elements in this thread were made for his part and i honestly think the current product looks like rubbish but whatever if anyone wants to offer some recommendations i'd appreciate it
    Sweet. And I can't stop watching your avatar.... It's so, hypnotizing.
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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    Quote Originally Posted by Rotirt "YCobb" Kunset View Post

    Here it is with transparency.

    http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5924142/Transparent%20King.psd
    And there's the .psd, if anyone wants to muck about. You'll want to switch the grey to a white anyway, I'd imagine.

    EDIT: Oh my, let's see if we can't fix that speckle problem. I don't even know how that happened.
    EDIT2: there we go, it's all set. Sorry the legs are still cut off, though. Not much I can do about that.
    Oh my god please spoiler this at once. Damn.
    WOO GO AUSSIES

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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    W-Wow....That king. Just Wow.
    Umm, and now just to annoy everybody...didn't the King have Dragon Wings? From Terezi's Lusus? I mean, if he did, they're easy to add in at least, just throw 'em on a layer behind.
    http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=004492
    See, look at the back there, they're in brown because they're paler due to the distance because the King is so freaking huge. You can just make out the shape of enormous dragon wings back there.

    Oh, and Differential, I'm not upset with you. I was just being a bit dramatic ^_^; The Dersites aren't hard to draw, they're just rather tedious, so having to edit them was a minor irritation. Still, I'm glad you pointed it out. We want to have the canon straight and be consistent after all. Sweet Catch!

    Okay, so to be clear:

    The fight is taking place on a green lilypad-shaped platform which has a spirograph and a frog engraved on it, which is floating in the sky above the battlefield (because otherwise, they'd be attacking the King's ankles, I guess). The platform is of vague dimensions, but big enough for 12 trolls to stand on comfortably with at least 2 meters space between each other and between the outermost trolls at the edge. There are other lily pads floating in the sky randomly, some of which have colourful flowers resembling the giant lilies in the Lagoon part of Jade's Island. They have green bubbles beneath them in little trails. [edit] Closer inspection of the Aradiabot log indicates that the platform IS one of the lily pads.
    The sky is bright blue and dotted with clouds, some of which have spiralling tails. It is also full of meteors, most of which, particularly early on, will be winking out through Skaia's defence portals, which are canonically green in colour and look like spirographs.
    The minions of the Black King are Dersites. They are all black in colour, and due to the Trolls prototyping not involving harlequins or eldrich princesses and Trolls largely hating fashion, are dressed in black, white and grey (but I have kept the overall shape of the uniform the same). They wear the Derse crest on their right breast, which is a downwards-pointing black pentagon with two pointed towers coming out of the top, and the chess symbol for a king (which looks like the kanji for earth) in white in the middle. Pawns, as we have seen in-canon, are mostly armed with swords, but we have seen them with spears, bows, crossbows, large shields and apparently assault rifles (cannot find source of this, but was mentioned on wiki).
    Last edited by felicitousArtisan; 05-01-2011 at 04:18 AM.

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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    That's 99% right or so, felicitousArtisan. The Derse logo changes based on the number of people playing, so the Troll session's Derse logo looks like this.

    Everything else looks pretty spot on though.

    Also the soldiers wielded assault rifles in [S] Descend, I think, when they were lining up to fight Jack. My memory's a little fuzzy on that right now, so it may be [S]WV?: Rise Up, but there are assault rifles in at least one of those two.
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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    Quote Originally Posted by catastrophicGenesis View Post
    Spoilered for meteors being bigger than expected. =P



    Okay! If you let me know of these are actually useful, I can do more like them. Or I can do something else entirely different! =3 (That last one looks a bit funny animated, because it's means to be on a solid background as it jitters and it's on transparency for ease of use. Or something like that. Bluh.)
    Urgh, I don't like quoting myself, but I need to know what you want, Obselesence.

    That black king is hugely impressive though, in both senses of the word "hugely" =P
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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    Oh, sorry!

    I think the third one (with the straight tail) is going to be the most-needed. If we could get a meteor in that like the first and second ones and a bit of a jitter effect like the fourth one I think we should totally have a meteor that we can use throughout the Flash.

    The first and second ones might be good to hold onto for Sollux-Aradia purposes, though.

    Also, woaaaaaah, Rotirt. That Black King is ginormous.

    EDIT:

    Also, also, did some quick copy-paste and resize shenanigans involving Rotirt's Black King and felicitousArtisan's backgrounds to get a good idea of how the final image would go down. There maaaaaaaay be a bit of stylistic dissonance. :X



    It'd probably look better if the Black King were in sillohette, but ideally we'd maintain the holy cow awesome of the original image.
    Last edited by Obselescence; 05-01-2011 at 09:27 AM.

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    Re: [S] Rex Duodecim Angelus

    Seems like the background could have some darker effects going on, in both senses of the word.

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