AdultStuck TOPIC II (The Last Update Of The Topic)

[Doc_Mercury]

>FA: Slap TM. Then hug him.

Seconding this. Because why not.

Thirded.

[The Long Man]

>FA: Slap TM. Then hug him.

Seconding this. Because why not.

Thirded.

Number +1'ing this
>others:Boggle vacantly at this nonsense

[ArmsAreLoud]

LE: Slap TM. Just slap him.

[Lazyboy21350]

Just posting real quick to say that you have +1 reader. Been reading this for a while actually, just got around to saying something.

I probably won't participate much with commands or anything. Maybe i'll RP with you guys later, maybe not. See you around.

[kaoticAntagonist]

>CT: Get caught up in the moment. Punch sparklelord in the stomach.

[karmicOnion]

Jailbrawl: Break out.

[GenetiXientist]

>Everyone but tS: Get caught up in the moment. Dogpile attack sparklelord..

ftfy

[kaoticAntagonist]

>DT: Restrain the crazy bastard/bitch.
>DT: Punch LE in her stupid nose. For reasons completely unconnected to, oh, 5 or so sweeps ago and a foodpile.
>CT: Kick someone in the face.
>Glasses: Break
>LE: Take the jail bars and beat someone with them. Realize they aren't your specibus allocation and you can't use them to fight.
>TM: Attempt to diffuse situation. Make it worse.
>CT: Stop LE from her unprovoked attack. With kicks. In the face.
>TS: Use the Fairy Dust. Make everyone collapse into a sneeze-fit.
>Guard: Boglge strangely at these idiots.
>FE: Defend your moirail.
>Highbloods: Be caught up in your desire to destroy each other. Ignore everything else.
>Guard: Intervene.
>Help fellow Scientist.
>FE: Greet new people. Remember about that club you started yesterday. Extend invites.
>LE: Bend Bars.
>Jailbreak.
>Obtain key.
>Resolve in a perfectly sensible manner.
>Pick lock.
>Use the screwdriver.

[karmicOnion]

^That

[Turrnip]

>Jailbreak.
>Obtain key.
>Resolve in a perfectly sensible manner.
>Pick lock.
>Use the screwdriver.

I DIDNT KNOW ADULTSTUCK WAS AN ESCAPE GAME!

[kaoticAntagonist]

Every game is an escape game if you look closely enough.

>DT: Ask how the hell they got themselves locked up anyway.

i seem to be attempting to make up for all the commands i missed.

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>Have an orgy of hate and rage that only highbloods locked in a room together can have. Destroy stuff. Maim some things. All that jazz.

i don't even expect any of these commands to be used, i just like giving them. addiction is a powerful thing.

>DT: Explain human reproduction to the guards as a distraction.
>Knight: Dry heave at the images your brain has been assaulted with.
>Prisoners: Be to disgusted to take advantage of the temporary advantage.
>DT: Threaten Knight with exxplaining TROLL reproduction if they don't help yyou.

[Godfrey]

Just because you realize that she's a Mary Sue doesn't give you an excuse to make a Mary Sue. Should I try to make her less 'perfect'?
I'd just hate to see Godfrey's story messed up by perfect characters; every single character has a flaw in this story, and it;s usually a major one. (I'm sorry for being harsh, but I despise Mary Sues. They have never helped a story.)

Actually, given the story in question, I could turn being a Mary Sue into a tragic flaw.

At any rate, Sue or not, don't be too concerned with other people's submissions. I'm not going to put in any characters that don't work anyway.

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>FA: try to tell LE about your weird dream.

You yawn a little bit and shift uncomfortably in your seat on the bench. TM still looks very...uncomfortable about the fact that your head was just laying on his lap.

You attempt to tell LE about your dream.

FA: I had the strangest dream, LE...
LE: [|] Did You.
FA: Er, yes. The clown girl that attacked us was there, and there was some sort of...dragon god...thing...
LE: [|] Interesting.
FA: You're...Not even paying attention to me, are you?

LE is too preoccupied with glaring daggers at TM to listen to you. ...That poor, poor bastard. You look at TM with concern and worry.

It rarely turns out well for people she's pissed off at.

>FA: Slap TM. Then hug him.

You blush a little as you entertain this thought. You don't know him well enough to hug him! Or slap him, for that matter! Why would you entertain the thought! That's silly! Silly brain!

You realize to your horror that you are blushing bright blue. If you had knowledge of everything facial expression your spidermom you mean Vriska experienced during Sburb and Sgrub you would probably toss yourself off a cliff right about now.


>LE: Slap TM. Just slap him.

You happen to witness this. You become violently enraged by the sight.

LE: HOW DARE YOU MAKE HER BLUSH, FUCKASS!
TM: ====# Huh?

You attack TM's face with a STRONG SLAP. You send TM flying across the room, landing on the ground with a loud thud and a bright red imprint of your hand.

There is a very uncomfortable moment as everyone stares at you.

FA: LE! No! He didn't do anythi-

>DT: Punch LE in her stupid nose. For reasons completely unconnected to, oh, 5 or so sweeps ago and a foodpile.

When asked after the fact why you thought this was a good idea, you will give many answers. You will particularly insist that she had punched a colleague of yours, and as a result you and Einstein simply had to react. Men of science have to stick together, after all. But, of course, that excuse and any others you happened to come up with - such as "i was feeling particularlyy purple that dayy" aren't entirely true. The fact is, you felt a deep-seated desire to punch her in her stupid face stemming from what seemed to be some sort of ancient feud you're not entirely clear on and are a little embarrassed by.

You slug her right in the snout, catching her off guard and sending her stumbling back a bit.

>CT: Get caught up in the moment. Punch sparklelord in the stomach.

Taking this as your cue, you roundhouse kick TS in the stomach.

He coughs up...Fairy dust? It's definitely some sort of sparkly, glittering substance.

The entire room is sent into a coughing fit. This does not keep LE from attempting to slug DT back. She manages to hit CT instead, who counters with another kick to her face.

After that, all hell pretty much breaks lose inside the scale, with people accidentally hitting each other while TM and FA attempt to shout at them and TS eventually just lying on the ground and pretending to be unconscious. There's also quite a bit of sneezing and coughing.

This general mayhem goes on for a while until the dust clears, in which case it becomes apparent that there are figures watching just outside the cell door.

Upon slightly closer inspection, they are Terezi and Kanaya.

The cell settles into an uncomfortable silence. Well, for the most part anyway.

LE: [|] What's Going On? I Can't See Anything. I Think I Lost My Glasses.

[ArmsAreLoud]

LE: Do the Velma.

Terezi: Make an applicable joke, followed by the phrase "H3 H3 H3".

[NeonProdigy]

> FA: Blush more than you've ever blushed before, but this time out of sheer mortification.

> TM: Time to meet your maybe-eventually-girlfriend's parent! Wait no, surely you'd have met Kanaya before...

> LE: Engage in SCOOBYDOOTECH: LEVEL 12: VELMA'S BLIND FLOOR SEARCH [Edit: D'oh! Ninja'd]

> Glasses: Have been smashed in the earlier fight.

> Kanaya: Begin SCOLDING.

[kaoticAntagonist]

LE: Attempt to Punch DT again.
>Miss. Again.

>Mourn the cracked glasses. Consider wearing them anyway.

[The Long Man]

>Everyone: be embarrassed
>LE: keep looking for glasses, ignore everything else

[Taveena]

Um, so, sorry to dump this here, but, uh. Here's RD, and, uh, I realise how sue-ish she sounds, but, um. She doesn't seem to be in RP, somehow, and people... um, yeah, sorry, I'll shut up.

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Trolltag: ruthlessDarwinist (#500001)

Desired Name: None yet.

Species: Troll

Clone of: Vriska, Sollux, Aradia, and Equius.

Typing Quirks: She 1s even more dramaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat1c than her antescendants, espec16ally to stuck-up h16hbloods!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Replaces I and G with 1 and 6 respectively, might occasionally drop a 6 into somewhere where it doesn't make sense phonetically, sometimes uses sixteen letters when she feels dramatic, smileys have 16 eyes. That's right, sixteen.)

Blood: Russsssssssssssssstblood for the w1n!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (#500001)

Personality:

- BLUH BLUH HUGE BITCH

- Vriska is definitely dominant. She's got a penchant for the dramatic.

- Sollux also shows up - she loves symmetry, to the point that when her horn broke off (She had equius/sollux hybrid horns) she deliberately broke off the other three.

- Very millitary minded. Loves studying tactics and planning. Unlike Vriska, not afraid to back away from a fight she can't win, or is uncertain about.

- She does really look up to Vriska, though - her ambition is a large driving force. But ambition is nothing if you're dead.

- While she's very proud of being STRONG, she's not going to take it for granted.

- A little more tetchy about the hemospectrum than most trolls, due to being right at the bottom. She doesn't like being reminded of where she would have been if she'd been born on Alternia.

- Oddly, more heroic than Vriska. Maybe it's the Sollux or Aradia showing, but while she won't hesitate to break someone's legs while courting them in blackrom or manipulate someone for shits and giggles, or take a bribe, or cheat... she hates killing and will do anything she can to avoid it, she'll do what she can to save lives, and she does care about the city and the society. Hell, she might even make a heroic sacrifice for a friend or family member.

Appearance: Her hair is back in a messy, but long (Vriska long), ponytail. Being STRONG and not a risk taker, she wears plate mail absolutely EVERYWHERE, except if stealth is required. Wears her thick glasses all the time, as she's blind as a bat without them - she's trying to get someone to make something a little more practical for her, but vision 16fold is a damn hard impediment to correct, so contact lenses are probably out. Even without the 8 pupils per eye, she's still got the slight problem that her vision 16fold is literally too powerful to be of any use - it sees through anything, and everything. In other words, when it turns on, she sees nothing at all. Her horns were a mix between Sollux and Equius's, but one broke off in a sparring accident, so she deliberately broke the other three. As such, her glasses are almost ALWAYS cracked, partly because of her enormous STRENGTH and partly because they get damaged while fighting.

Abilities: She picked up Equius's strength, Sollux and Aradia's telekinesis, Sollux's vision twofold, Vriska's vision eightfold, and Vriska's manipulation. Unfortunately Vision 16Fold is entirely useless and she just has eight pupils in each eye. Her vision is totally useless without her glasses which would be hipster glasses if she didn't actually NEED glasses that big.

Job: Knight of Blood, and a damn good one! Sort of. Good in the sense of 'experienced', or 'impressive', rather than 'altruistic'. She's a huge suckup to Karkat and trains with Vriska and Karkat whenever she's not reading or chatting.

Interests: History! Mostly war history - she studies as many Alternian and Human battles and tactics as she can possibly find. Weapon theory is interesting too, and she tries to master as many techniques as possible.

Strife Specibus: glaiveKind - she uses a pair of two eight-bladed warglaives. She can spin them to act as an effective shield against arrows and melee weapons, but it's not going to do much against a bullet. Uses them as discuses, guided by her telekinesis, at range.

Sylladex: 8-Ball Encryption modus - a combination of Karkat's and Vriska's. The balls from Vriska's are basically more reinforced. Which she breaks with her STRONG telekinesis. Or just muscles. Either works.

Shipping: While not actually interested in anyone yet, she plans ahead.She's sowing the seeds for several potential blackroms, but she hasn't found any suitable redrom candidates.Blackrom candidates include solderingRhythm, leviathanWrangler, and aggroPaladin.

Friends (known): Uh. Well, she's getting along with GI, FF is a fellow spidertroll and seems nice, she approves of EA's opinions about a lot of stuff, and is interested in meeting DM.

Enemies (known): All her potential blackroms dislike her to some extent. TM seems wary, but not hostile.

Status: Havin' fun with my friiiieeeeends. (RPing actively, no status in canon.)

>FA: Slap TM. Then hug him.

Just because you realize that she's a Mary Sue doesn't give you an excuse to make a Mary Sue. Should I try to make her less 'perfect'?
I'd just hate to see Godfrey's story messed up by perfect characters; every single character has a flaw in this story, and it;s usually a major one. (I'm sorry for being harsh, but I despise Mary Sues. They have never helped a story.)

Yeah, uh. Among other things, she can't kill (or, at least, is going to have nightmares for months because of it), insecure in every quadrant, really doesn't know when to stop screwing around with people, is pointlessly and needlessly cruel, her telekinesis and manipulation ARE at least mutually exclusive, she desperately wants a parent figure of some kind, nevermind that she's actually fairly stupid in any matters outside of combat... I dunno if adding flaws helps here, but your opinion is definitely appreciated.

((Sorry for not mentioning these earlier, these characterisation happened after I started RPing her.))

[GenetiXientist]

>cT: Turn out to be completely unharmed, having only kicked, and not been on the receiving end of an attack after LE's punch, which you blocked with your foot.

Sorry Godfrey, I just hate Mary Sues. I should have realized that you wouldn't just add a character at random.

Yeah, uh. Among other things, she can't kill (which might not sound like a flaw, but considering her bloodthirsty nature and that she IS a troll), insecure in every quadrant, really doesn't know when to stop screwing around with people, is pointlessly and needlessly cruel, her telekinesis and manipulation ARE at least mutually exclusive, she desperately wants a parent figure of some kind... I dunno if adding flaws helps here, but your opinion is definitely appreciated.

Here are the major points of contention for me:

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1. You have given her too many abilities/ positive character traits, without counterbalancing them with enough truly negative traits. Let me quote:

"While she's very proud of being STRONG, she's not going to take it for granted."

"Oddly, more heroic than Vriska. Maybe it's the Sollux or Aradia showing, but while she won't hesitate to break someone's legs while courting them in blackrom or manipulate someone for shits and giggles, or take a bribe, or cheat... she hates killing and will do anything she can to avoid it, she'll do what she can to save lives, and she does care about the city and the society. Hell, she might even make a heroic sacrifice for a friend or family member."

"Sollux and Aradia's telekinesis"

"Knight of Blood, and a damn good one! Sort of. Good in the sense of 'experienced', or 'impressive'"

"glaiveKind - she uses a pair of two eight-bladed warglaives. She can spin them to act as an effective shield against arrows and melee weapons, but it's not going to do much against a bullet. Uses them as discuses, guided by her telekinesis, at range."

2. She's already being RP'ed. This means that you have already given her far too much of a personality, without giving Godfrey much space to work with.

3. None of the flaws you mentioned give her a different personality/ abilities than Vriska, if Vriska had all of the given powers. This is very important. DON'T JUST ADD POWERS TO A CHARACTER, RENAME THEM, AND CALL THEM YOUR OWN. So she likes Vriska. That shouldn't mean that literally none of her other parents even matter in terms of her personality.

[kaoticAntagonist]

Didn't LE punch him trying to get DT?

>DT: Ask how the hell TS coughed up Sparkledust. Seriously, does he eat that stuff?

>DT: Make an appeal for you and your fellow scientists. You have all been locked up for the wrong reasons (probably). Add that since technically you only did the experiment for the gods it can't be considered unnatural. Address Terezi since Kanaya... unsettles you

>TM: Be in compromising position. With FA's mother watching. Be assured the universe hates you.

>TS: Slap CT on the back of the head. Ask why he kicked you.

[SORD]

I registered specifically to say that you got +1 reader

AN EASTER MIRACLE???

I can already tell we are going to be the best of friends.

A bestfriendship after my very first post?
EASTER MIRACLE 2X COMBO!!!

What's that? You want me to make some awesome suggestions?
Well, if you INSIST!

>Kanaya: MOMTECH lvl 45: GUILT TRIPPER (I'M NOT ANGRY I'M JUST DISAPPOINTED)

>All: Engage KIDTECH lvl 18: FINGERPOINT FRENZY -- BUT HE STARTED IT

TS: Vomit up some sparkly puke onto CT's shoes

[The NL Penguin]

Didn't LE punch him trying to get DT?

>DT: Ask how the hell TS coughed up Sparkledust. Seriously, does he eat that stuff?

>DT: Make an appeal for you and your fellow scientists. You have all been locked up for the wrong reasons (probably). Add that since technically you only did the experiment for the gods it can't be considered unnatural. Address Terezi since Kanaya... unsettles you

>TM: Be in compromising position. With FE's mother watching. Be assured the universe hates you.

>TS: Slap CT on the back of the head. Ask why he kicked you.

FA. She is FA. FE is the sassacre clone, and his roommate.

Also command

TM: Try and make things some semblance of better. She may have slapped you, but she's FA's friend and the adults are watching; time to make a good impression. Pick up LE's glasses and hand them to her.

[Taveena]

> Kanaya: Mediate

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So, I was thinking I could drop the telekinesis and Aradia ancestry COMPLETELY. It's not contributing anything to her character and is just overpowering her further.

As for the 'being unable to kill' thing, I mean. Well. Vriska was able to feed trolls she didn't know to spidermom, at least - RD, I was thinking, would be loathe to kill anyone, regardless of how much or little she knows them. Hell, she's probably also a vegetarian and doesn't like killing animals.

Another thought was making her a worse combatant. She can fight, but she's average for Gallifrey. She studies, because she finds it interesting, but she's still not very good at it. For that matter, she's an idiot when it comes to anything OUTSIDE combat.

With those, the newer RD is here.

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Trolltag: ruthlessDarwinist (#500001)

Desired Name: None yet.

Species: Troll

Clone of: Vriska, Sollux, and Equius.

Typing Quirks: She 1s even more dramaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat1c than her antescendants, espec16ally to stuck-up h16hbloods!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Replaces I and G with 1 and 6 respectively, might occasionally drop a 6 into somewhere where it doesn't make sense phonetically, sometimes uses sixteen letters when she feels dramatic, smileys have 16 eyes. That's right, sixteen.)

Blood: Russsssssssssssssstblood for the w1n!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (#500001)

Personality:

- BLUH BLUH HUGE BITCH

- VriskaTrolltag: ruthlessDarwinist (#500001)

Desired Name: None yet.

Species: Troll

Clone of: Vriska, Sollux, and Equius.

Typing Quirks: She 1s even more dramaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat1c than her antescendants, espec16ally to stuck-up h16hbloods!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Replaces I and G with 1 and 6 respectively, might occasionally drop a 6 into somewhere where it doesn't make sense phonetically, sometimes uses sixteen letters when she feels dramatic, smileys have 16 eyes. That's right, sixteen.)

Blood: Russsssssssssssssstblood for the w1n!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (#500001)

Personality:

- BLUH BLUH HUGE BITCH

- Vriska is definitely dominant. She's got a penchant for the dramatic.

- Sollux also shows up - she loves symmetry, to the point that when her horn broke off (She had equius/sollux hybrid horns) she deliberately broke off the other three.

- Very millitary minded. Loves studying tactics and planning. Unlike Vriska, not afraid to back away from a fight she can't win, or is uncertain about.

- She does really look up to Vriska, though - her ambition is a large driving force. But ambition is nothing if you're dead.

- While she's very proud of being STRONG, she's not going to take it for granted.

- A little more tetchy about the hemospectrum than most trolls, due to being right at the bottom. She doesn't like being reminded of where she would have been if she'd been born on Alternia.

- Oddly, more heroic than Vriska. Maybe it's the Sollux showing, but while she won't hesitate to break someone's legs while courting them in blackrom or manipulate someone for shits and giggles, or take a bribe, or cheat... she hates killing and will do anything she can to avoid it, she'll do what she can to save lives, and she does care about the city and the society. Hell, she might even make a heroic sacrifice for a friend or family member.

- Unable to kill. While Vriska was able to feed trolls she didn't know to spidermom, at least - RD would be loathe to kill anyone, regardless of how much or little she knows them. She's even a vegetarian, unwilling to kill animals, though she won't hesitate to wound someone in combat. She'd pull what Vriska did on Tavros or Terezi with even less reason, but would never do what Vriska did to Aradia.

Appearance: Her hair is back in a messy, but long (Vriska long), high ponytail. Being STRONG and not a risk taker, she wears plate mail absolutely EVERYWHERE, except if stealth is required. Wears her thick glasses all the time, as she's blind as a bat without them - she's trying to get someone to make something a little more practical for her, but vision 16fold is a damn hard impediment to correct, so contact lenses are probably out. Even without the 8 pupils per eye, she's still got the slight problem that her vision 16fold is literally too powerful to be of any use - it sees through anything, and everything. In other words, when it turns on, she sees nothing at all. Her horns were a mix between Sollux and Equius's, but one broke off in a sparring accident, so she deliberately broke the other three. As such, her glasses are almost ALWAYS cracked, partly because of her enormous STRENGTH and partly because they get damaged while fighting.

Abilities: She picked up Equius's strength, Sollux's vision twofold, Vriska's vision eightfold, and Vriska's manipulation. Unfortunately Vision 16Fold is entirely useless and she just has eight pupils in each eye. Her vision is totally useless without her glasses which would be hipster glasses if she didn't actually NEED glasses that big.

Job: Knight of Blood, though a rather low-ranking one. Accepting bribes has gotten her in trouble before and they're keeping a close eye on her. She's a huge suckup to Karkat and trains with Vriska and Karkat whenever she's not reading or chatting.She gets pummeled. A lot - though mostly out of choice. (In the sense that she chose to fight, not that she chose to lose.)

Interests: History! Mostly war history - she studies as many Alternian and Human battles and tactics as she can possibly find. Weapon theory is interesting too, and she tries to master as many techniques as possible.

Strife Specibus: glaiveKind - she uses a pair of two eight-bladed warglaives. She's a good fighter with them, and can parry arrows and small weapons by spinning them rapidly.

Sylladex: 8-Ball Encryption modus - a combination of Karkat's and Vriska's. The balls from Vriska's are basically more reinforced. Which she breaks.

Shipping: While not actually interested in anyone yet, she plans ahead.She's sowing the seeds for several potential blackroms, but she hasn't found any suitable redrom candidates.Blackrom candidates include solderingRhythm, leviathanWrangler, and aggroPaladin.

Friends (known): Uh. Well, she's getting along with GI, FF is a fellow spidertroll and seems nice, she approves of EA's opinions about a lot of stuff, and is interested in meeting DM.

Enemies (known): All her potential blackroms dislike her to some extent. TM seems wary, but not hostile.

Status: Havin' fun with my friiiieeeeends. (RPing actively, no status in canon.)

[GenetiXientist]

And that is perfect! Your adding the quirks in, and generally trying to fix any ridiculous overpowerings, worked well. Sorry for my tone, but I recently read My Immortal for a bet, and, well...

Anyway, that character looks interesting now, rather than overpowered. You should give her back her glaive proficiency; I just listed it as being too much on top of her other powers. Right now, without it, she seems a little weak.

[Taveena]

Ah, my immortal. That horrible, horrible, glorious mess. I like to think even RD at her worst wasn't as bad as Eboby. (Lost my virility. Eek.)

(Also, thanks so much for your help!)

[GenetiXientist]

No problem; I didn't mean that RD was as bad as Enoby, just that My Immortal has given me an amazing dislike for Mary Sues of any sort.

Now then, commands:

>Kanaya: MOMTECH lvl 45: GUILT TRIPPER (I'M NOT ANGRY I'M JUST DISAPPOINTED)

>All: Engage KIDTECH lvl 18: FINGERPOINT FRENZY -- BUT HE STARTED IT

TS: Vomit up some sparkly puke onto CT's shoes

I second all of these. The middle one especially, because it made me laugh.