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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    Quote Originally Posted by The NL Penguin View Post
    >FA: Slap TM. Then hug him.
    Seconding this. Because why not.
    Thirded.

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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    Quote Originally Posted by Mercury7 View Post
    Quote Originally Posted by The NL Penguin View Post
    >FA: Slap TM. Then hug him.
    Seconding this. Because why not.
    Thirded.
    Number +1'ing this
    >others:Boggle vacantly at this nonsense

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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    Just posting real quick to say that you have +1 reader. Been reading this for a while actually, just got around to saying something.

    I probably won't participate much with commands or anything. Maybe i'll RP with you guys later, maybe not. See you around.

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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    >CT: Get caught up in the moment. Punch sparklelord in the stomach.

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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    Jailbrawl: Break out.

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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    Quote Originally Posted by kaoticAntagonist View Post
    >Everyone but tS: Get caught up in the moment. Dogpile attack sparklelord..
    ftfy
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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    >DT: Restrain the crazy bastard/bitch.
    >DT: Punch LE in her stupid nose. For reasons completely unconnected to, oh, 5 or so sweeps ago and a foodpile.
    >CT: Kick someone in the face.
    >Glasses: Break
    >LE: Take the jail bars and beat someone with them. Realize they aren't your specibus allocation and you can't use them to fight.
    >TM: Attempt to diffuse situation. Make it worse.
    >CT: Stop LE from her unprovoked attack. With kicks. In the face.
    >TS: Use the Fairy Dust. Make everyone collapse into a sneeze-fit.
    >Guard: Boglge strangely at these idiots.
    >FE: Defend your moirail.
    >Highbloods: Be caught up in your desire to destroy each other. Ignore everything else.
    >Guard: Intervene.
    >Help fellow Scientist.
    >FE: Greet new people. Remember about that club you started yesterday. Extend invites.
    >LE: Bend Bars.
    >Jailbreak.
    >Obtain key.
    >Resolve in a perfectly sensible manner.
    >Pick lock.
    >Use the screwdriver.
    Last edited by kaoticAntagonist; 04-26-2011 at 04:49 PM.

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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    ^That

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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    Quote Originally Posted by kaoticAntagonist View Post
    >Jailbreak.
    >Obtain key.
    >Resolve in a perfectly sensible manner.
    >Pick lock.
    >Use the screwdriver.
    I DIDNT KNOW ADULTSTUCK WAS AN ESCAPE GAME!
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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    Every game is an escape game if you look closely enough.

    >DT: Ask how the hell they got themselves locked up anyway.

    i seem to be attempting to make up for all the commands i missed.



    >DT: Explain human reproduction to the guards as a distraction.
    >Knight: Dry heave at the images your brain has been assaulted with.
    >Prisoners: Be to disgusted to take advantage of the temporary advantage.
    >DT: Threaten Knight with exxplaining TROLL reproduction if they don't help yyou.
    Last edited by kaoticAntagonist; 04-26-2011 at 08:09 PM.

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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    Just because you realize that she's a Mary Sue doesn't give you an excuse to make a Mary Sue. Should I try to make her less 'perfect'?
    I'd just hate to see Godfrey's story messed up by perfect characters; every single character has a flaw in this story, and it;s usually a major one. (I'm sorry for being harsh, but I despise Mary Sues. They have never helped a story.)
    Actually, given the story in question, I could turn being a Mary Sue into a tragic flaw.

    At any rate, Sue or not, don't be too concerned with other people's submissions. I'm not going to put in any characters that don't work anyway.

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    >FA: try to tell LE about your weird dream.

    You yawn a little bit and shift uncomfortably in your seat on the bench. TM still looks very...uncomfortable about the fact that your head was just laying on his lap.

    You attempt to tell LE about your dream.

    FA: I had the strangest dream, LE...
    LE: [|] Did You.
    FA: Er, yes. The clown girl that attacked us was there, and there was some sort of...dragon god...thing...
    LE: [|] Interesting.
    FA: You're...Not even paying attention to me, are you?

    LE is too preoccupied with glaring daggers at TM to listen to you. ...That poor, poor bastard. You look at TM with concern and worry.

    It rarely turns out well for people she's pissed off at.

    >FA: Slap TM. Then hug him.

    You blush a little as you entertain this thought. You don't know him well enough to hug him! Or slap him, for that matter! Why would you entertain the thought! That's silly! Silly brain!

    You realize to your horror that you are blushing bright blue. If you had knowledge of everything facial expression your spidermom you mean Vriska experienced during Sburb and Sgrub you would probably toss yourself off a cliff right about now.


    >LE: Slap TM. Just slap him.


    You happen to witness this. You become violently enraged by the sight.

    LE: HOW DARE YOU MAKE HER BLUSH, FUCKASS!
    TM: ====# Huh?

    You attack TM's face with a STRONG SLAP. You send TM flying across the room, landing on the ground with a loud thud and a bright red imprint of your hand.

    There is a very uncomfortable moment as everyone stares at you.

    FA: LE! No! He didn't do anythi-

    >DT: Punch LE in her stupid nose. For reasons completely unconnected to, oh, 5 or so sweeps ago and a foodpile.

    When asked after the fact why you thought this was a good idea, you will give many answers. You will particularly insist that she had punched a colleague of yours, and as a result you and Einstein simply had to react. Men of science have to stick together, after all. But, of course, that excuse and any others you happened to come up with - such as "i was feeling particularlyy purple that dayy" aren't entirely true. The fact is, you felt a deep-seated desire to punch her in her stupid face stemming from what seemed to be some sort of ancient feud you're not entirely clear on and are a little embarrassed by.

    You slug her right in the snout, catching her off guard and sending her stumbling back a bit.

    >CT: Get caught up in the moment. Punch sparklelord in the stomach.

    Taking this as your cue, you roundhouse kick TS in the stomach.

    He coughs up...Fairy dust? It's definitely some sort of sparkly, glittering substance.

    The entire room is sent into a coughing fit. This does not keep LE from attempting to slug DT back. She manages to hit CT instead, who counters with another kick to her face.

    After that, all hell pretty much breaks lose inside the scale, with people accidentally hitting each other while TM and FA attempt to shout at them and TS eventually just lying on the ground and pretending to be unconscious. There's also quite a bit of sneezing and coughing.

    This general mayhem goes on for a while until the dust clears, in which case it becomes apparent that there are figures watching just outside the cell door.

    Upon slightly closer inspection, they are Terezi and Kanaya.

    The cell settles into an uncomfortable silence. Well, for the most part anyway.

    LE: [|] What's Going On? I Can't See Anything. I Think I Lost My Glasses.

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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    > FA: Blush more than you've ever blushed before, but this time out of sheer mortification.

    > TM: Time to meet your maybe-eventually-girlfriend's parent! Wait no, surely you'd have met Kanaya before...

    > LE: Engage in SCOOBYDOOTECH: LEVEL 12: VELMA'S BLIND FLOOR SEARCH [Edit: D'oh! Ninja'd]

    > Glasses: Have been smashed in the earlier fight.

    > Kanaya: Begin SCOLDING.

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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    LE: Attempt to Punch DT again.
    >Miss. Again.

    >Mourn the cracked glasses. Consider wearing them anyway.
    Last edited by kaoticAntagonist; 04-26-2011 at 08:18 PM.

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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    >Everyone: be embarrassed
    >LE: keep looking for glasses, ignore everything else

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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    Quote Originally Posted by GenetiXientist View Post
    Quote Originally Posted by Taveena View Post
    Um, so, sorry to dump this here, but, uh. Here's RD, and, uh, I realise how sue-ish she sounds, but, um. She doesn't seem to be in RP, somehow, and people... um, yeah, sorry, I'll shut up.


    >FA: Slap TM. Then hug him.
    Just because you realize that she's a Mary Sue doesn't give you an excuse to make a Mary Sue. Should I try to make her less 'perfect'?
    I'd just hate to see Godfrey's story messed up by perfect characters; every single character has a flaw in this story, and it;s usually a major one. (I'm sorry for being harsh, but I despise Mary Sues. They have never helped a story.)
    Yeah, uh. Among other things, she can't kill (or, at least, is going to have nightmares for months because of it), insecure in every quadrant, really doesn't know when to stop screwing around with people, is pointlessly and needlessly cruel, her telekinesis and manipulation ARE at least mutually exclusive, she desperately wants a parent figure of some kind, nevermind that she's actually fairly stupid in any matters outside of combat... I dunno if adding flaws helps here, but your opinion is definitely appreciated.

    ((Sorry for not mentioning these earlier, these characterisation happened after I started RPing her.))
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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    >cT: Turn out to be completely unharmed, having only kicked, and not been on the receiving end of an attack after LE's punch, which you blocked with your foot.

    Sorry Godfrey, I just hate Mary Sues. I should have realized that you wouldn't just add a character at random.

    Quote Originally Posted by Taveena View Post
    Yeah, uh. Among other things, she can't kill (which might not sound like a flaw, but considering her bloodthirsty nature and that she IS a troll), insecure in every quadrant, really doesn't know when to stop screwing around with people, is pointlessly and needlessly cruel, her telekinesis and manipulation ARE at least mutually exclusive, she desperately wants a parent figure of some kind... I dunno if adding flaws helps here, but your opinion is definitely appreciated.
    Here are the major points of contention for me:
    Last edited by GenetiXientist; 04-26-2011 at 08:36 PM.
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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    Didn't LE punch him trying to get DT?

    >DT: Ask how the hell TS coughed up Sparkledust. Seriously, does he eat that stuff?

    >DT: Make an appeal for you and your fellow scientists. You have all been locked up for the wrong reasons (probably). Add that since technically you only did the experiment for the gods it can't be considered unnatural. Address Terezi since Kanaya... unsettles you

    >TM: Be in compromising position. With FA's mother watching. Be assured the universe hates you.

    >TS: Slap CT on the back of the head. Ask why he kicked you.
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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    Quote Originally Posted by Steel Dragon View Post
    Quote Originally Posted by SORD View Post
    I registered specifically to say that you got +1 reader

    AN EASTER MIRACLE???
    I can already tell we are going to be the best of friends.
    A bestfriendship after my very first post?
    EASTER MIRACLE 2X COMBO!!!

    What's that? You want me to make some awesome suggestions?
    Well, if you INSIST!

    >Kanaya: MOMTECH lvl 45: GUILT TRIPPER (I'M NOT ANGRY I'M JUST DISAPPOINTED)

    >All: Engage KIDTECH lvl 18: FINGERPOINT FRENZY -- BUT HE STARTED IT

    TS: Vomit up some sparkly puke onto CT's shoes

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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    Quote Originally Posted by kaoticAntagonist View Post
    Didn't LE punch him trying to get DT?

    >DT: Ask how the hell TS coughed up Sparkledust. Seriously, does he eat that stuff?

    >DT: Make an appeal for you and your fellow scientists. You have all been locked up for the wrong reasons (probably). Add that since technically you only did the experiment for the gods it can't be considered unnatural. Address Terezi since Kanaya... unsettles you

    >TM: Be in compromising position. With FE's mother watching. Be assured the universe hates you.

    >TS: Slap CT on the back of the head. Ask why he kicked you.
    FA. She is FA. FE is the sassacre clone, and his roommate.

    Also command

    TM: Try and make things some semblance of better. She may have slapped you, but she's FA's friend and the adults are watching; time to make a good impression. Pick up LE's glasses and hand them to her.
    Last edited by The NL Penguin; 04-26-2011 at 09:58 PM.
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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    > Kanaya: Mediate

    (Continuing RD discussion in spoiler)


    With those, the newer RD is here.
    Last edited by Taveena; 04-27-2011 at 05:42 AM.

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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    And that is perfect! Your adding the quirks in, and generally trying to fix any ridiculous overpowerings, worked well. Sorry for my tone, but I recently read My Immortal for a bet, and, well...

    Anyway, that character looks interesting now, rather than overpowered. You should give her back her glaive proficiency; I just listed it as being too much on top of her other powers. Right now, without it, she seems a little weak.
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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    Ah, my immortal. That horrible, horrible, glorious mess. I like to think even RD at her worst wasn't as bad as Eboby. (Lost my virility. Eek.)

    (Also, thanks so much for your help!)

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    Re: AdultStuck TOPIC II

    No problem; I didn't mean that RD was as bad as Enoby, just that My Immortal has given me an amazing dislike for Mary Sues of any sort.

    Now then, commands:

    Quote Originally Posted by SORD View Post

    >Kanaya: MOMTECH lvl 45: GUILT TRIPPER (I'M NOT ANGRY I'M JUST DISAPPOINTED)

    >All: Engage KIDTECH lvl 18: FINGERPOINT FRENZY -- BUT HE STARTED IT

    TS: Vomit up some sparkly puke onto CT's shoes
    I second all of these. The middle one especially, because it made me laugh.
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