Legend of the Hunter: Chapter 4 - [S] Fight. Talk. Don't die.

[Professor zobot]

... Gwydian is now in charge of recaps. This is an elected position and I move that he is. Whose with me?

[siguard]

... Gwydian is now in charge of recaps. This is an elected position and I move that he is. Whose with me?

Actually i vote for a different character recapping each time. it would give a good bit of insight on what each character thinks of the current events and how it differs from our point of view.

[Torquemadras Trump]

I bow in the face of Gwydian's artistic skillz and prowess as a totally unbiased journalist. Although where'd he get the crayons?

[flyingBrick]

... Gwydian is now in charge of recaps. This is an elected position and I move that he is. Whose with me?

This idea is beautiful.

Actually i vote for a different character recapping each time. it would give a good bit of insight on what each character thinks of the current events and how it differs from our point of view.

But so is this one.

Oh woe is me! This is a dilemma of epic proportions!

[Professor zobot]

What I want to know is how he got access to a computer and a scanner.

Actually, making different people do recaps might be interesting, although right now the story's mainly centered around Gwydian and Sebastian so we'd have to see whose viable to do a recap next time it hits...

...can anyone see Ava and Tristian becoming some sort of "B-Team" following the Bros?

[Not The Author]

And the only thing I took away from that was

[The Clown] smells funny

[Chaos Waltz]

Oh woe is me! This is a dilemma of epic proportions!

Gwyddian is in charge, but he has a different assistant each time (starting with Ava, for lulz).

Also. . .
El Vandeval> find Ava still stunned at the gate.

Both> follow the bros, determined to do. . . something. You'll figure that out when you can think clearer. But you know you need to follow them.

[flyingBrick]

Gwyddian is in charge, but he has a different assistant each time (starting with Ava, for lulz).

Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.

[Kocel232]

> Okay, Gwyddi, we may disagree on many things, but it seems we agree on how "The Clown" should be treated.
I'm just disappointed that you didn't draw him with a big red nose and make-up.

[Shadow Phoenix]

I've finally caught up with this And managed to actually the flash sequence I've been hosting so far haha.

Well the stuff is amazing, so many clever puns, meta use of the game setting, plus the whole plot unravelling. Yeah above all the large use of nice animation that works really fine with your artstyle. The characters have all that very defined look and attitude it's impressive. Many intermediate panels are very clever and use effectively some of the awesome suggestions around.

EDIT : ah I missed the last couple pages. You know how to entertain your audience I'm gonna suggest when the chapter 3 starts.

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Seriously I don't even know how to continue writing my adventure, now. There is a far too strong concentration of badassitude and humor in this one I feel like spoiling readers'time

The only things that bugs me a bit are the quote numbers, make the whole thing a bit difficult to read, but of course you're paying tribute to these excellent suggestions.

[Torquemadras Trump]

Legend of the Hunter - 96

Chapter 3
In which one rises above the shadows
And an incentive is found
And journeys turn into escapes
And brothers travel

Hello and welcome back to "Legend of the Hunter"! Last chapter, everything that could possibly go bad DID, in fact, go bad for Sebastian and Gwydian. Pretty much all of their questionable decisions came back flying into their faces. Now, Aaron of the Silverknights is after them - not to mention that the attack on the great ceremony will definitely have consequences.

What will the dragon-crazed King Skal do? What will happen to those whose trust the brothers have broken? And what are they going to do now?

Find out: now, and in future chapters of Legend of the Hunter.

You don't know why you're here.



That is... YOU DO KNOW. As you descend onto the white and grey surface, you slowly reclaim your memories.

You've been possessed. There'd been a lot of BLOOD. And you start to remember that you are someone, a person, A SOUL.



First of all, you don't remember BEING A SPHERE.

Much better.



Aaaaand... you had COLORS. And a FACE.

Nice. You float down to the surface - because, naturally, YOU CAN FLOAT in a place like this - and you take your time to remember important things.
Like how it can be that you're left free to wander. Normally THE DEMON doesn't allow that kind of thing.

He doesn't want you to find all those hidden alcoves inside the GROVE OF THE SOUL.



(Man, this place is a bit void of color, isn't it. Kinda drags you down a bit...)

Now, on to remember other, VERY IMPORTANT THINGS...



...such as YOUR NAME.

NAMING TIME! Give this mysterious lady a name, and...

...not gonna acknowledge the lack of proper character portrait here...

...so that I no longer have to refer to our new character as "the possessed girl"!

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Aaaand third chapter START! Suggest away, folks!

I've finally caught up with this And managed to actually the flash sequence I've been hosting so far haha.

Well the stuff is amazing, so many clever puns, meta use of the game setting, plus the whole plot unravelling. Yeah above all the large use of nice animation that works really fine with your artstyle. The characters have all that very defined look and attitude it's impressive. Many intermediate panels are very clever and use effectively some of the awesome suggestions around.

EDIT : ah I missed the last couple pages. You know how to entertain your audience I'm gonna suggest when the chapter 3 starts.

Seriously I don't even know how to continue writing my adventure, now. There is a far too strong concentration of badassitude and humor in this one I feel like spoiling readers'time

The only things that bugs me a bit are the quote numbers, make the whole thing a bit difficult to read, but of course you're paying tribute to these excellent suggestions.

Thanks a lot! Remember, I still owe you one for hosting it. You got one Torquetaler for a picture of your choice!

Also, I've been bothered by the many quotes, too. Maybe I can do something about that...

[Mibbs]

Danielle Cervenka

[distainfulCatalyst]

Teeja Yeerly

[Solaris]

Esmeralda Windswept
Escaflone Device
Giana Feint

Stevena

[Shadow Phoenix]

Seelys Lavidia

[ProfessorLizzard]

>Sylvia Norog

[flyingBrick]

Possessee McDemonhost

[Professor zobot]

Our young lady deserves a fitting name of some sort. Something appropriate of what we know of her thus far and how tragic her previous experiences have been...

I'm not sure I am qualified to craft one. If I did it she'd either end up with a name as a reference to literature or something immature...

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>Input Name: Cassandra

...because in act one no one was listening to her!

[Fabricati]

> Michelle

[goldedge2]

>Input Name: Friyana Odinn

[OnBackorder]

Viera Kinsley

[Chaos Waltz]

Riza

[Kocel232]

>Kaila Seris

Or, alternatively, something similar I once did in Final Fantasy IX that led to short-lived plot humor...

>Possessed Girl

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Sky Castle, hm? That's pretty far in. Gonna keep an eye out for that place.

[Wessolf27]

>Seconding Esmeralda, though Cassandra's also a good pick for a name

[goldedge2]

>Input Name: Friyana Odinn