[S] Caliborn: Enter - With sounds! <WIP> [Updated 10/6]

[BouncyTEM]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KcET6SQGFIk

Bumping this because i'm doing something related to the original topic, but a different flash. Might as well recycle the topic.
Cascade's on hold - it's so huge and i'm really not happy with the first two minutes. @_@
So, here's Caliborn: Enter soundified! It's only a preview but this one's blazing along pretty quickly.

The creepy laugh when English unfolds from his cairo overcoat's temporary. It probably won't be there in the final version <unless people want it to be o.o >

Do leave comments!

Edit: and a bonus. The audio track without the song. Hear how much effort I put into this! =p
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/3238714/Caliborn.mp3

[Iydak]

I don't have time to do a second by second analysis right now, but I can say that you did a fairly good job of integrating the sounds with the music. There were a few sounds that didn't seem to match (0:21 sounds too mechanical for the mystical Cairo Overcoat), but overall it sounded pretty good. I'll see if I can get a more in-depth analysis done tomorrow.

[BouncyTEM]

Thanks for the comment! One thing though.

Regarding 0:21, are you sure you aren't mistaking the sounds for the big act 6 curtains for the cairo overcoat's? Because most of the mechanical stuff around there's for those.

[Iydak]

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0:00-0:18
This part is great, all the sounds match up well with the animation, particularly 0:05.

0:19-0:32
The hands of the curtain-clocks don't seem to be moving for some reason, check to see if that's just my computer.
The Cairo Overcoat is the main focus of the visuals, It should be the main focus of the sounds too, but it has no sound at all. Get the sound from 1:00 in here.

0:33-0:54
This part is excellent, particularly the disappearing noise at 0:33, and, the noise at 0:45 from before.

0:55-0:56
The sarcophagus appearing here is a bit weird; it appears quickly, but the fade-in makes it seem to be slower then the sound. I'm not sure how to deal with this, my best guess would be to try slowing down the last half of the sound you have by a tiny bit and see if that fits it better.

0:57-1:10
I like the flying sound here, except the bit at 1:05, which feels a little too sharp.

1:11-1:35
I'm not sure about the screaming here, as they seem to been less afraid, and more curious, but I'd get a second opinion on that. The scene switch sound is pretty good, but a little too loud.

1:36-end
This last part is spectacular, Lord English breaking out, the clanking chains as Caliborn sits up, and the noise as he opens his ankle cuff are great, but my favorite is the blinking eyes, it's just such a great noise, and it matches up rather well.

Off to a great start so far!

Edit: Most of this stuff is just me picking nits. The only major things I see are the lack of sound for the sarcophagus at the beginning, and the screaming near the end, and I still think you should get someone else's opinion on that.

[BouncyTEM]

Very nice breakdown. I appreciate it! It's helpful.

Most of the things you take issue with are easily fixed.

Because I can...

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0:19-0:32: The sound for the Overcoat *is* there, actually. I'll just have to bump it up in volume, it seems. Also, yeah, the visuals are glitched. This is due to me importing the swf directly into premiere. Allows a high resolution, clean export at the proper frame rates and such, but some animation things here and there <not many, but a few> won't work. Minor loss.

0:55-0:56: I'll see what I can do.

1:05: Minor fix. Easy enough.

1:11:-1:35: Yeah, it's too loud. It's supposed to be there as a very subtle element as there's bound to be one or two who have a very good sense of what they're in for.

:3 I'll get the next part out soon.

Edit: Wait.
1:05? Are you sure that isn't the horrorterror? Meep.
...I may need to look into a revised flight sound for the sarcophagus. hmm. It's been a rough one to nail out.

[SuperMagicalMusicalStuck]

I just wanna tell everyone here, put the song Sympathy for the Devil (The Rolling Stones) with this flash (no sound) and it fits perfectly.

[BouncyTEM]

New version! No stuff for Caliborn's voice yet but there will be. I'm still practicing it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sM7Chw-AFPU whee!

[invisibleTerrarium]

New version! No stuff for Caliborn's voice yet but there will be. I'm still practicing it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sM7Chw-AFPU whee!

I could do the caliborn voice eue
anything in particular needed?

I actually do voice acting as a hobby, and this is SO COOL.... please?

[BouncyTEM]

I kind of want to do the voice myself, actually, since I could use the practice, but tell you what;
If I attempt my voice for it and I just don't find it good enough or i'm just unhappy with it, I'll notify you for what I need. Sound good?

[CollapsibleWizards]

Wow. this is really awesome! You are doing a good job with Caliborn enter. The sounds are good and it is perfect timing. Can't wait to see it when it's done!