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[Thunder Reign]

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>Be the Haemotraitor Highblood
Fin, if u inƨƨħiƨƨt >:/



Your name is Fartface Buttskunk Gamina Echino and no matter how much you wish it were otherwise, you are a SEADWELLER. As much as you would love to live up to the wishes of your ESTRANGED, yet LOVING aquatic slitherbeast LUSUS, you are rather bitter about the weight of the EXPECTATIONS placed on your kind. She was however, a great lusus and while you haven't seen her for a whole SWEEP, you miss her more than you are willing to admit. While some trolls see your negative reaction to you privileged status as TREACHEROUS, you generally disregard them as being unable to understand your personal FEELINGS on the subject. You find most fellow seadwellers to be either ASININE or excessively BLOODTHIRSTY and consequently prefer the company of those far LOWER than yourself. You are still quite SOCIAL, though you struggle with PALE INFIDELITY by less scrupulous lowbloods preying on your NAIVETY. You find it hard to pin down a MATESPRIT; a problem you seem to accept begrudgingly, though you still have HOPE. By contrast, BLACKROM is far less of a concern for you, though you do tend to switch KISMEISES somewhat frequently. You have no shortage of seadwellers with AUSPISTATION requests regarding lowblood trolls; you sometimes act as a 'temporary auspistice' in return for somewhat exorbitant FEES. While you privately DESPISE being a HARLOT to the ashen quadrant, you try to see your SERVICE as a way of helping trolls of both castes co-operate and avoid ‘UNNECESSARY CULLING’.

Indeed, as with your approach to the caste structure, your views on ‘CULLING’ are atypical. While not extreme enough to consider anything close to pacifism, you believe that culling must be ’FAIR’, to ensure that the best genes are passed on to FUTURE GENERATIONS. You feel that the disparity in lusii, wealth and PRIVILEGE have to be countered in order to ‘BALANCE THE EQUATION’, as you see it. This has led you to get on the wrong end of some trolls and the LAW on occasion; but your DIPLOMATIC SKILLS, combat ability and status (much to your chagrin) have helped you survive life on Alternia. You unwillingness to INTERACT with most members of your caste occasionally works in your favour, as your COMPATRIOTS tend to see you as detached from their megalomaniac highblood shenanigans and your distance helps you keep it that way.

As a seadweller, you manage to find ample time to INDULGE your personal INTERESTS. You have a particular fascination with TROLL SOCIOLOGY and PHILOSOPHY, having taken to examining the inner workings of the hemospectrum and its influence on SOCIETY, activities which have placed you under heavy surveillance at times. In defiance, you possess a private collection of ILLICIT TEXTS, covering a variety of SUBJECTS, including ‘BLOOD WARFARE’ and all manner of taboo topics that could easily get the SUBJUGGULATORS chasing after your carapace. You are somewhat interested in ATTIRE and sew your own clothes, but you generally seek to EMULATE the FASHION of renegade land trolls. Like most seadwellers, you did spend some years FLARPing, but your personal mantras got in the way of some of your matches; leading to a few rather unfortunate incidents you refuse to divulge. The SCARS from said encounters remain, though you miss FLARP and occasionally discuss past sessions with your remaining former TEAMMATES.
The rest of your free time is generally dedicated to CARD GAMES and ‘IMPROVING’ your island home, which you hope will become the BEST HIVE EVER.

Your trolltag is tethysAdder, and your Typing ƨƨtyle reflectƨƨ ur ƨƨibliance-ricħ accent, witħ few ħiƨƨtakeƨƨ and the occaƨƨional pun. U alƨƨo tend to ƨƨħortn ur wordƨƨ to ƨƨave time when ur in a ħrry.

tee ell dee arr

Name - Gamina Echino
Age - 7 Sweeps
Hemospectrum - Red-Purple (B51580)
Trolltag - tethysAdder
Strife Specibi - 2xknifekind
Fetch Modus: Card game

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First fantroll, though actually a conversion of one I made for the BtSDLb AU. My main concern is that I've crammed a lot into her character, making it difficult to keep it all 'consistent'.

Her sprite head is tiny- like, really tiny- but I can't see anything else wrong. You've done a pretty good job with her bio.

[Phantom Gamer]

Her sprite head is tiny- like, really tiny- but I can't see anything else wrong. You've done a pretty good job with her bio.

I'm not seeing it. It looks the same size as all the others.

[Sandvich King]

I'm not seeing it. It looks the same size as all the others.

I think what TR means is that her head looks small because her hair does.
Hair should always several pixels above the top of a sprite's head (use Sollux as a minimum).



Also, her hair, horns, and symbol are anti-aliased (blurry).

[Thunder Reign]

pomf

[Quincunx]

Her horns are also not the right color, and her symbol is antialiased... actually her horns appear to be antialiased too.

[Crazy-8]

Here's sort of a WIP I'm making for my second of four fankids

>Be the repair girl

[SPRITE COMING EVENTUALLY]

got it!!!

Your name is Anna Wallace and you are a 13 year old living near MAINE

As a child you've always had a curious streak in terms of TINKERING WITH MECHANICAL DEVICES. You would disassemble a toaster to see how it worked, or stick a paperclip in an electrical outlet to see the outcome. Some may call that impulsive or perhaps unintelligent, but they just can't see the big picture! You desperately feel the need to "experiment and learn as much as you can, because there simply isn't enough TIME in the world to not take advantage of every opportunity that arises, are you getting this?!" It helps that your DAD owns a local REPAIR SHOP, you have access to a variety of different tools and plenty of devices to experiment on, which you can stick in your TOOLBOX modus, which cost a bundle but was totally worth it! However to economize on space in your modus you decide to keep your trusty WRENCH in your STRIFE SPECIBUS.

That isn't to say experimenting on mechanical devices is your ONLY interest, you enjoy a good exciting ACTION MOVIE, or equally exciting ANIMATION involving GIANT ROBOTS. You also really enjoy a variety of different video games, mostly ones that are in an OPEN WIDE SANDBOX or encourage EXPLORATION. Of course you also talk to some friends on Pesterchum when you feel like unwinding a bit.

If you were to play a GAME WITH CATACLYSMIC CONSEQUENCES you would be the THIEF OF TIME in the LAND OF TIDES AND TIME

Your chumhandle is mechanicallyPassionate and you are easily excitable by topics that excite you!!! you know?!

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Name: Anna Wallace
Age: 13
Guardian: Dad
Strife Specibus: Wrenchkind
Modus: Toolbox
Title: Thief of Time
Land: Land of Tides and Time
Chumhandle: mechanicallyPassionate

[Quizzle]

Your name is JOVIAN MAHMAT.

You have a passion for ANYTHING ELECTRIC but you lack ANY BUILDING SKILLS AT ALL. But what you do have skills in is TERRIBLE VIDEO GAMES, most of which are FIGHTING SIMULATORS.

You also often partake in ACTUAL FIGHTING, often using the axe you INHERITED from your ANCESTOR. You stay calm most of the time, but at certain points you fly into a RAGE. You FLARP, despite being NOT THAT GREAT AT ROLEPLAYING. You consider yourself KIND OF A BADASS, even if this is not necessarily true. You used to build up strength by CUTTING DOWN TREES with your axe, until you were STRUCK BY LIGHTNING. You were marked with many SCARS after this incident.

You don't keep tons of posters on the wall showing what your INTERESTS are, because you know GOD DAMN WELL what stuff you like. You study ANCIENT HISTORY, especially when it relates to WAR. You also have an interest in FRACTALS. You gained this interest because the SCARS you acquired in the lightning incident form a FRACTAL of sorts.

Your trolltag is fractalFulminator and you 5pEak with an air of calmnE55 mo5t of thE timE.

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Lusus: Eagle
Blood: Green
Symbol: Jupiter
Age: 7 Sweeps
Planet: Land of Steam and Platforms
Title: Heir of Rage
Strife Specibus: Axekind

[pseudoParadox]

===> Be Panthe Raaleo (pAN-theh rahLAYO)

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Name: Panthe Raaleo
Symbol: Two horozontal lines under three dots.
Trolltag: ---
Quirk: ---
Age: Eight Sweeps
Gender: Male
Height: 5'5"
Weight: 154 lbs.
Strife Specibi: Clubkind
Lusus: Tusked Marshbeast (Red River Hog)
Blood Color: Lowblood

[Quincunx]

Those lines should probably go through his eyebags as well. It looks kind of odd as it is.

[pseudoParadox]

Yeah I'm fixing that right now. ^^; Just a sec.

Edit: Fixed.

[Strider]

>Be the troll obssessed with fighting

Hey! Fights are awesome man, don't be hating!

>Be Horrin Keshka.

You are now Horrin Keshka, and you're on a Saiyan ship! You are a total geek, and love watching or playing anything that involves fighting. Of course that is not the only thing you do. You've seen such things as Trolls Wars, Dragontroll Z, not to mentioned it's HILARIOUS abridged counterpart, and some other really geeky shit. You like a good fight every now and again, but lately you have found that you are becoming less interested in fighting due to a rising concern of what may or may not happen if you come across someone you either can't defeat, or simply aren't able to due to the rather LARGE handicap that you give everyone. You mean, hey, that's the downside of being the deathmatch champion extraordinaire. You end up becoming a much better fighter than most others.

Deathmatches aren't the only reason why you have such good fighting skills. You see, you have a Kangaroo Lusus. It's name is Jack, it loves fighting even more than you did, if that's even possible, and you and your Lusus train practically every night. That said, there have been some times when the fights would drag on for hours, either because you both wanted to continue, or because your Lusus just didn't want to stop. As a result of all of this training, you have gained a heightened battle sense that helps you to be aware of when someone wants to do you harm. It can't be turned off though, so if one of your friends walk up to you all pissed and stuff and you don't see it's them, you could end up inadvertently hurting them, which kind of sucks. You are also faster than normal trolls due to your training, and have trained yourself to use a technique you call 'at one with the sword' where you close your eyes and attempt to heighten your other senses. You've only ever had to use this once thus far, and that is because a certain troll was a cheap ass that had to use something to disorient you in battle instead of fighting fairly, the prick.

Speaking of fighting, death matches aren't the only thing you've done. You have time and again over the past sweep, donned a rather fancy suit without a symbol to hide who you really are and have gone flarping on occassion. In all your life, this was the only time that you did not give your opponents any form of handicaps, and as such have completely defeated many teams that you have come across, simply introducing yourself as 'Chaos' when they asked who you were. They eventually took to calling you Dark Demise, and even though you haven't flarped in a while, that name for you has apparently taken on a bit of a legend amongst flarping circles.

Speaking of Flarping and Flarpers, your Matesprit Pirana Flarps. You think it's pretty amusing that she wear a Piranha Plant suit from Troll Mario when flarping, which is why when you join her you are wearing your Troll Mario outfit. You are both a little slow in some areas, you not always being adept at socializing and her giving hugs to everyone when that is not a normal thing, but you like to think that the two of you are Good Matesprits. You also have a Moirail, a hacker named Skehth. You haven't seen him for a while though, due to his Matesprit doing everything he can to keep him away from you.

Your view on the Hemospectrum isn't really much of a view at all. Your opinion is that it is there, and that that is all that there is to it. You really don't care who lands where on the Spectrum, as long as they are good guys that are nerdy, good at fighting, or both. You have yet to talk to one that is not one of those two things at any length, so your view on things is a bit narrow because of that. Your Strife Specibus is Bladekind, and your primary weapon is this HUGE FUCKING SWORD that your ancestor left you, which can apparently be used for Shadow Smoke shenanigans. You are tired of the shadow smoke and tired of being tied to your ancestor though, so you decided to seal that away, if you can.

Your Trolltag is mysteriousHellian, and you )))Tend to leave your statements rather open ended.(((

New and updated app on Horrin Keshka after who knows how long worth of development. Any questions, comments, requests, plain stupid statements?

[ASBusinessMagnet]

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pomf

I thought perhaps I have the opposite of this problem, but seems not.

[ashdenej]

I thought perhaps I have the opposite of this problem, but seems not.

I'd say the issue with your hair is that it looks... misshapen? I'm not sure what's going on with the top or sides of it, especially the strand.

[ASBusinessMagnet]

I'd say the issue with your hair is that it looks... misshapen? I'm not sure what's going on with the top or sides of it, especially the strand.

I was basing it from this deviation, and for it I wanted Skepkitty's looks to be somewhat like Calmasis's but not quite identical, and I apparently see no boundary between "different" and "strange".

[scintillatingMoniker]

He's suffering from 'big head syndrome', which is usually a symptom of using one of the older bases that for some reason was shaped weirdly. I'd reccomend checking out trollslum for the current bases, slapping the hair on top and editing that.

[Crazy-8]

May I have some critique on what I posted earlier? I have the feeling I am quite bad at creating characters.

[dragonLights]

Crazy-8; Seems pretty solid to me! I might suggest a little bit of expansion--what kinds of friends she likes to hang out with/talk to, how she feels about her dad, stuff like that.

[Strider]

Interesting human you have there. I am not the expert on fanstuff creation, so I can't really offer to much advice, although maybe expand in an area or two? I personally am wondering what kind of tool shop her dad has. I'd wait for someone who'e been doing this for a while to give a proper crit before making changes though.

And I would like to echo the sentiment of critiquing with my repost of a much older fantroll app that I have completely redone based on events that he has been through thus far, if possible.

And then I was ninja'd, except I wasn't Should have reloaded. lol

[consultingzombie]

I have this troll, but I'm thinking it's more of a clusterfuck than a troll.



You are Pyrrah Drisda and you love to be HELPFUL!

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At 7 sweeps old, you enjoy being as HELPFUL AS POSSIBLE to those around you. You're willing to do ANYTHING for anyone you consider a friend. You don't get to see new trolls very often, due to being busy all the time, so you tend to refer to EVERYONE you meet as FRIEND. This can be problematic.

For one, you are an orangeblood. Despite your friendliness, most trolls probably don't want much to do with you, if they aren't OUTWARDLY RUDE to you for your blood color. You don't like rudeness. If they weren't so RUDE, they'd see how useful you are. You love being useful, especially to highbloods. They deserve all the help they can get, after all. And you are more than willing to SERVE.

This is because most highbloods have seen your cheerful demeanor and submissive attitude as MEEKNESS and an unwillingness to FIGHT. Thus, you have been nearly CULLED more times than you can count. Luckily, most trolls don't realize how much you actually love violence and bloodshed. Their underestimation has gotten you out of several tight spots. But you don't want to fight your friends. As a result, you have taken to dealing with their every want and need so that you don't have to injure potential FRIENDS.

You are willing to do ANYTHING for any troll that employs you. You will even KILL on demand. You just LOVE pleasing your friends (and you consider employers friends), plus it deals with all that pesky bloodlust that can also keep trolls away from you. If you're killing for a highblood, your chances of getting culled HAVE to be effectively CUT IN HALF. You always do what you are told and almost NEVER ask questions. That would be RUDE. Most of your employers like this about you.

Another thing they seem to like is your psychic ability. You possess BILOCATION, which sort of means you can be in two places at once. There are limits to this, of course. Your doppelganger can only go a certain distance away which, while pretty far, still can't go everywhere. Also, the further away it is from you, the less "signal" it has. At short distances, the doppelganger is completely tangible and can do basically anything a normal troll can do. Further away, it fades to the point where it's only use is a sort of walkie-talkie. The two halves function seperately, but your doppelganger still shares your mind and thus ultimately answers to you. You feel EXTRA HELPFUL when you have a little help yourself.

Your lusus thinks that you OVERWORK YOURSELF way too much. You think she's overbearing. She doesn't agree with your lifelong dream to fly. She doesn't want you to get into any trouble or get hurt. It's not like you have hide in her POUCH all the time anymore or anything. You're a big troll now. She needs to get that through her head. You can usually threaten her away with your STAFFKIND SPECIBUS, but she's getting crafty.

You use an ENCYCLOPEDIA MODUS, meaning you have to look up the item in a deceptively small book that you keep in your pocket before you can use that item. Your chumhandle is doubleGlider and you really wisch your teef were a bit schmaller, schir.

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NAME: Pyrrah Drisda
AGE: 7 Sweeps
BLOOD : #FF4B05
TROLLTAG: doubleGlider
MODUS: Encyclopedia
SPECIBI: Staffkind
LUSUS: A massive kangaroo
QUIRK: All 's' sounds replaced with 'sch' and 'th' sounds with 'f.' Adds 'sir' or 'ma'am' to the beginnings or ends of her statements.
SYMBOL: A symbol for air
TITLE: Maid of Bliss
LAND : Land of Strings and Mirrors (LOSAM)
CONSORTS: Sky-blue sheep
MOON: Derse

Is it confusing? Too much? Also, I don't know if her "lifelong dream to fly" fits real well. :/

[Silvy]

Oops! After a long long time of forgetting to check this thread for recent updates, I have come back with kawaii sprites and maybe some other things. Maybe.
But uh, first this! Self inserts are cool, right?



Does this look alright? :S I just wanna make sure, spriting is hard.

[Kattily]

Silvy, that sprite looks awesome. I love the hair in particular.
My only thing with it is that the hair shows through the glasses at one point but the face does not on the other lens. So it looks odd to my eyes. I did see the sprite where it showed the face and I agree that this one looks better, but that's the only thing I see. Just a little nitpicky thing haha.

[Silvy]

Thanks Katt! I'll look at some sprites to compare what I should do and fix it up if I have to. :0c

Now for some fun:
@STRIDER

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>Be the troll obssessed with fighting

Hey! Fights are awesome man, don't be hating!

>Be Horrin Keshka.

You are now Horrin Keshka, and you're on a Saiyan ship! You are a total geek, and love watching or playing anything that involves fighting. Of course that is not the only thing you do. You've seen such things as Trolls Wars, Dragontroll Z, not to mentioned it's HILARIOUS abridged counterpart, and some other really geeky shit. You like a good fight every now and again, but lately you have found that you are becoming less interested in fighting due to a rising concern of what may or may not happen if you come across someone you either can't defeat, or simply aren't able to due to the rather LARGE handicap that you give everyone. You mean, hey, that's the downside of being the deathmatch champion extraordinaire. You end up becoming a much better fighter than most others.

Deathmatches aren't the only reason why you have such good fighting skills. You see, you have a Kangaroo Lusus. It's name is Jack, it loves fighting even more than you did, if that's even possible, and you and your Lusus train practically every night. That said, there have been some times when the fights would drag on for hours, either because you both wanted to continue, or because your Lusus just didn't want to stop. As a result of all of this training, you have gained a heightened battle sense that helps you to be aware of when someone wants to do you harm. It can't be turned off though, so if one of your friends walk up to you all pissed and stuff and you don't see it's them, you could end up inadvertently hurting them, which kind of sucks. You are also faster than normal trolls due to your training, and have trained yourself to use a technique you call 'at one with the sword' where you close your eyes and attempt to heighten your other senses. You've only ever had to use this once thus far, and that is because a certain troll was a cheap ass that had to use something to disorient you in battle instead of fighting fairly, the prick.

Speaking of fighting, death matches aren't the only thing you've done. You have time and again over the past sweep, donned a rather fancy suit without a symbol to hide who you really are and have gone flarping on occassion. In all your life, this was the only time that you did not give your opponents any form of handicaps, and as such have completely defeated many teams that you have come across, simply introducing yourself as 'Chaos' when they asked who you were. They eventually took to calling you Dark Demise, and even though you haven't flarped in a while, that name for you has apparently taken on a bit of a legend amongst flarping circles.

Jesus! There are like 2 paragraphs on him and violence! You could most likely cut down the amount of exposition on fighting and still get the point across. Elaborate on some of this other 'geeky shit'! Horrin also seems a tad overpowered! Orangebloods arent made to be super strong, or as strong as he comes across. They're genetically obsolete compared to the highbloods, and therefore naturally weaker in terms of physical and mental strength, which they make up for with a cool mental power ((sometimes)).
I really think the 'at one with the sword' idea could work as a power, if any! Albeit a somewhat useless power, seeing as he'd have to be fully concentrated in order to use it, and in the heat of battle, standing still and concentrating for even a slight amount of time doesnt seem very useful.
If not though, you could always use the 'Battle Sense' thing as a power! It'd also be fun to see how he works to control the impulse to defend when sensing a negative sense.
With the FLARPing, did he do this alone or with some teammates? If alone, thats where we're bordering into the overpowered area again. I'd suggest you including that he has a team to help him out in tight situations, and he could usually take out the leader of the opposing team? That'd help spread a good name.
How did these trolls come up with the name Dark Demise?

Speaking of Flarping and Flarpers, your Matesprit Pirana Flarps. You think it's pretty amusing that she wear a Piranha Plant suit from Troll Mario when flarping, which is why when you join her you are wearing your Troll Mario outfit. You are both a little slow in some areas, you not always being adept at socializing and her giving hugs to everyone when that is not a normal thing, but you like to think that the two of you are Good Matesprits. You also have a Moirail, a hacker named Skehth. You haven't seen him for a while though, due to his Matesprit doing everything he can to keep him away from you.


Again, you seem to be explaining too much. This is just to give us a general overview of the troll! We dont need to go any deeper than 'Your Matesprit Pirana FLARPs, as well! You think the outfit she wears is pretty funny, and sometimes you like to join in on the silly shenanigans! Your Moirail, Skehth, however, is a hacker. You don't get to see him often, seeing as his overprotective Matesprit seems to do everything he can to keep Skehth away from you.'

Your view on the Hemospectrum isn't really much of a view at all. Your opinion is that it is there, and that that is all that there is to it. You really don't care who lands where on the Spectrum, as long as they are good guys that are nerdy, good at fighting, or both. You have yet to talk to one that is not one of those two things at any length, so your view on things is a bit narrow because of that. Your Strife Specibus is Bladekind, and your primary weapon is this HUGE FUCKING SWORD that your ancestor left you, which can apparently be used for Shadow Smoke shenanigans. You are tired of the shadow smoke and tired of being tied to your ancestor though, so you decided to seal that away, if you can.

This part seems alright, actually. I would recommend using better vernacular than 'HUGE FUCKING SWORD', but, eh. Whatever.
If he doesnt dabble in Shadow Smoke shenanigans, why bother to mention it? Seems kind of like something you just tacked on there to make Horrin seem *EXTRA SPECIAL*

Your Trolltag is mysteriousHellian, and you )))Tend to leave your statements rather open ended.(((

[Strider]

I'll see what edits I can make. Two paragraphs does seem like a bit much, and exposition on his geekiness is something that I should have thought of.
At one with sword is actually something that he trained himself to do with a little help from his Lusus. The logic for this is based off the fact that heightening your sensory perceptions in other areas by depriving one of your senses completely is something that anyone can do with enough practice, whether troll or human. It has real life applications too. Why do you think blind people who have been blind all their life are able to move around the house without constantly running into things?
I do agree that the battle sense thing could be a power that he has, but the only problem with this is that, as I forgot to mention before, he has a latent version of his ancestors power, the ability to create out of any other matter, and control shadow smoke. He only has the control aspect though, he doesn't know that it is a power and thinks it is something that is just attributable to his ancestors weapon, and doesn't even know that he has any powers at all.
I could maybe cut down a bit on the Quadrants exposition too. I'll see what I can do on that.

[Silvy]

I forgot to mention before, he has a latent version of his ancestors power, the ability to create out of any other matter, and control shadow smoke.

Thats two powers, not one.

And do you think that would have been something to mention in the bio? Or at least in an obscure kind of way.

At one with sword is actually something that he trained himself to do with a little help from his Lusus. The logic for this is based off the fact that heightening your sensory perceptions in other areas by depriving one of your senses completely is something that anyone can do with enough practice, whether troll or human. It has real life applications too. Why do you think blind people who have been blind all their life are able to move around the house without constantly running into things?

The 'At one with the sword' thing in all is kind of silly! In a battle, closing your eyes and increasing your hearing whatever isnt going to let you win, its just going to make you look like an idiot when the person sneaks up (quietly, i may add) and stabs you.

[BewareOfNerd]

Toothy orangeblood:
1. Whoa nellie, them are some bigass teeth! It looks like she would have trouble getting food in her mouth.
2. Blood's a bit bright. I suggest darkening it until it looks more brown than orange.
3. One eye looks a bit lower than the other.
4. Servile and accepting of the hemospectrum! Good, good. I like that in a lowblood.
5. Does she acknowledge that her 'friends' don't give a shit about her and only consider her a pack mule?
6. What if one of her friends told her to kill another friend? Or two friends wanted her to kill each other?
7. The dream of flying doesn't really fit in. You could easily take it out and change her trolltag, but if you want to keep it, elaborate on it. Why does she want to fly? What inspired her dream in the first place? What has she done to accomplish it? Would she consider calling in a favor from one of her friends to help with that?
8. Trolls wear almost entirely black and gray, and even Aradia's dirt-digging lowblood ghost didn't look that shabby. Plus, her highblood friends would want anyone associated with them to look semi-decent.