Kaleido City - Suggestion Box

[NachoGrande96]

Kaleido City



Sunday, December 25, 2011
Violet View Apartments

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A young man stands in his bedroom. Today is the day that...

Well, actually, nothing in particular is happening today. It's not any sort of SPECIAL HOLIDAY or anything in KALEIDO CITY, after all. Nonetheless, today will be a very busy day, most likely filled with unexpected events. However, before this young man can start his day, we should probably find out who he is!

What is this boy's name?

> Enter name.

Author Notes:

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Hey there! Long time no see! I just want to put this little blurb here t let you guys know that I will only be posting pages here temporarily. The actual updates will be posted on the MSPFA Mirror site once it's working again. Once I begin posting updates there, this thread will become a suggestion box.

Anyways, thanks for giving this a look, and enjoy the adventure!

EDIT: The mirror is here!!!

[dragonHacker]

> Edgar Reese

[Dar'Joras]

>Lorenz Mcdogstar

[Jared-hai]

Lord Badass

[SkyKat]

Mr Dommy Mcfluffy

[NachoGrande96]

Enter name.



As flattering as it sounds, you know this definitely isn't your name. Try again!

> Try again.

[Jared-hai]

Rear Brigadier Badass

[Dar'Joras]

>Andy Roadster

[SonicLover]

>Nick Redston

[NachoGrande96]

Try again.





Ah, yes, that will do.

Your name is NICK REDSTON. As previously mentioned, today is not exactly a date for SEASONAL FESTIVITIES. You honestly don't have that many INTERESTS besides messing around with your COMPUTER. Your BOOKSHELF contains a large array of LARGE, CONFUSING COMPUTER PROGRAMMING MANUALS, most of which you have an incredibly hard time comprehending, or just never read.

You decide you should get a move on. You aren't exactly sure what's on your ITINERARY today, but you should give your ROOM a once-over so you can be ready to face the day. You never know what can happen!

What will you do first?

> Nick: Examine 3rd and 4th walls.

[Aranfan]

>Nick: Examine 3rd and 4th walls.

[Dar'Joras]

>look out of the window then punch wall

[SonicLover]

>Glance at BOOKSHELF

[NachoGrande96]

Nick: Examine 3rd and 4th walls.



You look at the other side of your ROOM.

From this new perspective you can see your CLOSET, another WINDOW, and your STORAGE CHEST. You prefer to keep it locked because you keep a lot of important stuff in there(at least YOU think it's important).

> Nick: Look outside.

[SonicLover]

>Peer out either of the WINDOWS

[NachoGrande96]

Nick: Look outside.



You look out the WINDOW by your BOOKSHELF first.

You can see a few neighboring CORPORATE BUILDINGS, as well as the BEACH. On the other end of the shoreline is an OMINOUS LOOKING CAVE, and the WAREHOUSE RUINS that rest on top of it. No one has visited the old building for several years, now that they've stopped EXPERIMENTS up there. The KALEIDO CITY GOVERNMENT has a strict policy against MIRROR TELEPORTATION.

It's been that way ever since the crossover to the MIRROR REALM had occurred, unleashing what was basically the city's EVIL TWIN on the world. Since then, a group of FIVE HEROES and their ROBOT SIDEKICK banished the evil back to the realm, and sealed it off forever.

Even further off is a VOLCANIC ISLAND with several inhabitants, but there isn't much contact between Kaleido City and them. They're pretty secretive.





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From the WINDOW near your CLOSET, you can see the SUBURBS, as well as a LABORATORY. A FRIEND of yours lives there, and you talk online with this person quite a bit! We'll become acquainted with this person at a later point in time.

[SonicLover]

>Log on to computer

[SkyKat]

> go to the laboratory

[NachoGrande96]

Hey everyone! Just a heads-up, from now on all updates are going to be posted on the MSPFA Mirror Site! So from this point forward, this thread will serve primarily as a suggestion box.

[williamcll]

>dance

[TwoKillerMockingbirds]

Open chest

[NachoGrande96]

UPDATE! http://mspfanventures.com/?s=543&p=8

Only one page right now, but there's a couple more panels coming up. I just figured there's no sense keeping everyone waiting while I finish writing the upcoming update. Sorry for taking so long everyone!

[Dar'Joras]

>put on safari hat casue life is a adventure just like a safari...also it looks neat

[NachoGrande96]

Update! http://mspfanventures.com/?s=543&p=9

[NachoGrande96]

Bunp. Taking suggestions again.