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Thread: NIGHTFALL: Post-sburb fancomic

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    NIGHTFALL: Post-sburb fancomic

    NIGHTFALL



    Welcome! This is the thread for my Homestuck Fancomic, Nightfall.

    This story takes place after Homestuck ends. Since we don't know the ending as of now, I am going to assume all the Trolls live, and Earth is somehow brought back (or they are in the Alpha universe). And hopefully, by the time Homestuck ends, Vriska will be brought back to life (somehow) and will get to meet John. Then, that is were my story begins. Vriska leaves the Trolls to go live with her best friend, and try out life as a human.

    I am not going to focus 100% on VriskaXJohn, in fact, I have an entire story planned that involves new characters, plot twists, character development, and an [S] animations. The overall idea is that this is the continued story of Homestuck, even though Homestuck is still updating. Weird, huh?

    Another thing: This story takes place when the main characters are all 16. Because in the recent updates, it turns out the kids and the Trolls are going to have to wait 3 years to enter the knew session... so obviously when Homestuck ends they will all be 16... yeah.

    I plan to update this comic as frequently as possible, until I have completed the story. I probably won't update as frequently as Hussie does, but I will TRY to get at least one page out per day.






    RULES:
    1. I appreciate any feedback, however, this is not the typical adventure were there is a sort of "Suggestion Box" were readers suggest the character's next move (EX: >John: Dance like there is no tomorrow, >Vriska:Be awesome, >Karkat: Scream like a girl) The main reason for this is that I already have the comic planned out. You can go ahead and suggest them, and I will read them, but I will most likely I will not use them. However, if you have any general suggestions not necessarily in command form, feel free to say them. This could be, an idea for an unnamed character's name, or whatever else. Again, don't be crushed if I don't use them. I may already have something planned out and your suggestion may conflict with this.
    2. If you are going to quote a longer post with multiple images, please put it under a spoiler tag, to save space.





    >Thread 2.

    >Thread 3


    Thread 4

    Thread 5


    >Nightfall Tumblr.





    >Mirror.
    Mirrored by JordanTH and cyanAmpersand.
    If you have an account on MSPFA, don't forget to favorite this adventure!






    Music:
    Countdown (Hades's theme).


    M8tesprit (JohnXVriska song)



    Daylight (Liz's theme)


    Alien Space Ninjas (Theme for the aliens)







    Banners:









    FAN ART!
    (and other stuff)
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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

    > Defendant: be punished by death.

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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

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    You are the culprit. After a very brief trial, you have been sentenced to death.
    There wasn’t much hope for you. The decision was unanimous.

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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

    shut up idiot fantrolls that's VRASKA you're addressing I'll have you know.

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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

    This looks like it is going to be pretty good, I am a big fan of comics and stories, and this has both so I am probably going to love this.

    +1 reader man! I'll make some fan art at some point in the future! (Gotta get a new pen for my tablet first, though! >_>)

    (Alternian law finds the word defensive an offensive word, by the way, I'm just letting you know because you said the defenent's crimes are punishable by death! ;3)

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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

    vriska didn't actually commit any crimes, she was just visiting the court as a tourist and accidentally* stepped into the defendant podium


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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

    Hooray! A new reader!

    I'll go fix that defendant thing now. XD

    I need to go find Terezi and ask her more about Alternian courts now...

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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

    Why does Vriska still wear the jacket with the ripped sleeve if this takes place in the future?

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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.


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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

    This isn't taking suggestions, it goes in Artbound! Moving now.

    I like your art style, very clean. I'd recommend changing the sig banner to say fan comic, since adventure implies it is taking suggestions.
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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

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    This is it. Your death will come very shortly. The executor asks if you have any last words, but you are speechless.
    You can’t quite remember how you got yourself wrapped up in this situation. Everything seems fuzzy up until a moment ago.

    Vriska: Look up




    Vriska: Look up


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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

    LOOK OUT VRISKA IT'S

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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

    Quote Originally Posted by Lieutenant Fish View Post
    LOOK OUT VRISKA IT'S
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    Oh my.


    (AHAHAHAHHAHAAHAHHAHA!!!!)
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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

    Great art style! I'll definitely be following this.

    /proceeds to drag the whole Vriska Quarantine Thread here
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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

    Quote Originally Posted by Lieutenant Fish View Post
    Or rip off the other sleeve?

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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

    Wow, from what I've seen so far this is awesome.

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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

    Oh noooooo Vriska you better not die on me now, not after all we have been through together! D,:

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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

    this seems neat.

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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

    Quote Originally Posted by Dragonstorm View Post
    Great art style! I'll definitely be following this.

    /proceeds to drag the whole Vriska Quarantine Thread here
    Yeah, man. I hope you're ready for like a shitton of readers, because you're getting them.

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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

    back off dudes I was here first, I'm the #1 fan

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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

    Nah its fine dude, I'm sure all of us Vriska-thread dudes will be fighting it out for the beloved #8 fan position.

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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

    Quote Originally Posted by linkzeldi View Post
    Nah its fine dude, I'm sure all of us Vriska-thread dudes will be fighting it out for the beloved #8 fan position.
    selling testicle-removing forks for $8.88

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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

    jokes on you though one is actually lower than eight

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    Re: NIGHTFALL: JohnXVriska fancomic + story.

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    >TheNeonWerewolf: Continue to freak out over all the fans you are getting. All of them.

    Holy crap. guys! I did not expect this comic to get this many fans. ESPECIALLY not this quickly! I honestly thought it would take weeks for me to get any fans. Thanks a lot guys!

    Oh, and that picture/animation above zoomed in on Vriska's face shouldn't be animating that fast. I don't know why it is doing that (or if its just something weird happening on my computer).
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