NIGHTFALL: Post-sburb fancomic

[NeoDarklight]

Vriska: Encounter a kid with a bucket full of candy. React 'appropriately'.

>Kid with candy: Turn out to be either Liz or one of the B2 kids.

[gizmoHomie]

>Liz: Dress up as Red and continue to investigate with pikachu plushie
blah blah blah

^yes, just yes.

[aspiringHelpfulness]

>Liz: Dress up as Red and continue to investigate with pikachu plushie

Thirded. Also:

>Liz: Notice Rose, and stalk her.
>Spies: Wander around wearing your usual outfits.

[TheNeonWerewolf]

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You glance to the left and spot something on the other side of the road.


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VRISKA: ........
JOHN: what are you looking at?

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VRISKA: Over there!
JOHN: cotton candy?
VRISKA: I’m going to go get some.

Vriska: Run.

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Vriska: Run.



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JOHN: wait!
JOHN: you can’t just-

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JOHN: watch out!
VRISKA: ::::O

>Vriska: Take the cotton candy.

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I basically took sirhc1018's suggestion and mrose123's suggestion and mashed them together into this update. I'll use some of the other suggestions next.

Fun fact: 3 of the things you guys suggested I already had planned beforehand. The first one was this update, with Vriska running across the road like the naive alien she is. Nobody taught her to look both ways before crossing.

You can still suggest things.

[Random_Odd_Guy]

Jade/Dave/Rose: one of you berate John for not teaching Vriska the dangers of traffic before bringing her outside

[mythoSophist]

I spy in my little eyes something that is light blue and pink but aint candy at all


Is it just me or i see double in the other side

[MacD11]

Jane and Roxy: Continue to eat Cotton Candy

Cotton Candy Boy (Probably Jake): Realize this strange woman has a weird right eye, question humanity.

[NeoDarklight]

...
I see what you did there.

[linkzeldi]

The cotton candy boy's name is Jacques, thank you very much.

[HamsterGentleman]

>Vriska: buy/take all the cotton candy. All of it.

[gizmoHomie]

Silhouettes: Become characters
respectivly Jane, Roxy, ???, Liz?, Quinn?
to those of you don't know cotton candy is the name for Jane x Roxy

[Destruction Dragon 360]

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I noticed a crucial error in this one image, and have made certain edits.

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For clarity.

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*ships CottonCandy*

[ArmsAreLoud]

IIRC Neon doesn't really have any ships she cares about outside of John/Vriska

There was an opportunity for a joke and she took it.

[Crono30067]

I guess she made the silly mistake of eating the pages of her human etiquette book.

[TheNeonWerewolf]

IIRC Neon doesn't really have any ships she cares about outside of John/Vriska

There was an opportunity for a joke and she took it.

This is 100% true.

[Random_Odd_Guy]

==>Neon: sing the trololol song

[Dakloze Duif]

Jake: Be jealous because John has the Blue Spider Girl.

[psychapprentice]

So, is this like some sort of weird three lane one way street? Or is the yellow line stylistically white, to show that human lines make no difference to Vriska? She is unfazed by our human lines.

[NeoDarklight]

So, is this like some sort of weird three lane one way street? Or is the yellow line stylistically white, to show that human lines make no difference to Vriska? She is unfazed by our human lines.

Actually, this kind of street format is common in downtown areas of many cities and townships. Supposed to improve traffic flow or something. The next street over would have traffic going the other way.

[Aloice]

Awesome work. Please keep it up uvu

[TheNeonWerewolf]

Guess what guys!

THREAD 2 HAS ARRIVED!

Might as well start the new thread now, before this one gets locked.

[guillotineGuardian]

Aww. I'm going to miss this one. Memories.

I guess a mod should be PMed to lock this one anyways?

[TheNeonWerewolf]

Aww. I'm going to miss this one. Memories.

I guess a mod should be PMed to lock this one anyways?

I'd rather keep it unlocked for now, in case I need to edit something

[SkaianRedeemer]

I'd rather keep it unlocked for now, in case I need to edit something

And that's why I don't post stuff here directly any more.